There is nothing wrong with the writing, except that the plot arrangement and writing style of the article itself need to be improved or that I feel need to be improved. It is purely subjective and the rating has no reference meaning.
After reading a little bit, I don't really like the feeling of Gong Tai holding it, and I don't like his appearance. Shou has a classic bunny handsome style, he is both silly and cute, like a juicy little radish that makes people want to nibble on it. I prefer the blushing doggy style attack from the previous book.
I haven't read much, about ten chapters. The characters obviously poked fun at me, but I didn't feel excited while reading it. It feels a little sticky (touching my head), but it's not refreshing to read and makes me feel intimidated.
And I feel sad that the flower market died.
After reading about five or six chapters, I felt that the character was a classic mindless and unhappy character, but the writing was not good. It was obvious that Shou was a powerful minister, but his power and nobility were not shown. Only his picky enjoyment was written, which was very boring and flat. And in order to show that Gong is wise but foolish, and Shou is a happy enemy, it is also very unreasonable. Generally speaking, it is difficult to set up, and the main plot is not very attractive and boring.
Pang Pang Sheng still likes to write sweet and somewhat funny articles, but this one is a bit too much. The jokes only need a little bit. If every character is deliberately funny, then none of them will be funny. Of course, I still owe it to myself, so I continued to watch it while saying I didn't like it.
Editor 2: I feel that the focus of the narrative is on Aoao and the follower Xiaobai. I thought the protagonists were Dad Jiang and Dad Lu. I don't really like reading articles about raising a baby, I feel a little worried.
I really dote on Ah Ci, and I don't blame you if you stop updating. As long as you can write, I will support you. But your writing style in this book is really terrible. Before, it was very plain and simple, but it was also able to put the finishing touches on the emotional high points. This book is so sticky that I can't read it. Really, Ah Ci, why don't we return to the previous version.
The combination of stone gambling and immortality cultivation is still too advanced. I feel like it's not the present or the past, it's hard to say anyway. I like the emotional line very much... But the background setting is too hard for me to get in. I cried so much. By the way, please support the new book "Little Junior Sister" by Mr. Zhu Junling, who is gifted in writing holographic online game literature!
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