Like the title, I personally feel that the article is a bit average or I can't stand it, so I'll record the reasons why I abandoned it. Everyone's taste is different, maybe you will be interested.
After the time loop ends, it becomes impossible to follow the story. The early stage takes up too much space, which makes the overall rhythm a bit strange. The story of the sister running away later is like an imposed plot twist.
After reading Chapter 100, the heroine's career line is very interesting, but the description of the male protagonist is really too thin. It feels similar to the male protagonist in another article by the author. They both have a strong background, but their personality is not as strong as the heroine. She wants to escape from the current environment. It's not that I don't like the heroine being stronger than the male protagonist, but that such a thin character is better to be directly used as a background version. I would rather the male protagonist appear less frequently.
The author's remarks are too disturbing to the reader, so I think it would be better to delete that paragraph. I understand that too many excessive negative comments will make the author feel dissatisfied, but the reading fluency will be greatly reduced.
The setting of spending money to clear levels is quite interesting and fresh, but for my personal taste, the character description is a bit too thin, there are many typos, and the logic of some locations does not flow smoothly. The reason why I can't stand it the most is that the atmosphere/emotions are written a bit mid-level, but the golden finger of the rich woman is really cool.
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