How should I put it? I feel like I am committing a common mistake, driving high and moving low. One is the unavoidable feeling of exhaustion caused by the lengthening of the serialization front, and the other really feels that the core of the story is not expressed well enough. Overall it's good, but not good enough and could be better. It is a fire that is passed down from generation to generation, and it is the great love in the world.
There are brain-burning battles of wits, people with feelings, everything that escapes, and a poetic style of writing... I can only say that it is my XP! !
The first world is a fairy! So it makes the back feel like driving high and driving low. This is also a common problem among many novice authors. Practice hard and come on!
