Ke Tong Expanded Edition (Please Read the Book Review to Read the Book)
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46
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Level C
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1y ago
My miscellaneous thoughts after reading (there may be some hidden gems in the ocean) (referring to the articles I am too lazy to put in the boutique column)
It's long, very long. The emotional line is gone and there are a lot of plots that haven't been written yet. I'm waiting for death. I'm a little tired from watching it.
How should I put it? The author's writing power ends here for the time being. It is a very classic flow novel. The police team in the back is also OOC. The love is very sudden.
Judging from the copywriting, it seems to be a slightly exaggerated type, but the fact is that after writing 200,000 yuan, it has not yet reached the plot of the copywriting (smile). This does not mean that the writing is not good, in fact it is better than I thought, but what about the plot of the copywriting! (Shocking sound) It's still stuck at five minus four! Where are you going to save everyone? Hey!
Absolutely, I don't know why but I like Jingguang so much that I get very emotional. Designing the plot with some extraordinary characters gives me a feeling of superiority.
In this book, can I say that I prefer the kind of hard-working clerks who secretly complain in the early stage and the occasional warm relationship with the strict superiors? Later on, it gets a bit boring and panicky.
It's a literature that feels logical and self-consistent. You're saying it's OOC. Yes, he's OOC. Long Aotian is gay, but you can say it makes sense. Hey, it can also be explained. The male protagonist is also a kind of selfish kid. I don't like it personally. But he is very defensive and not a completely rational protagonist.
Repeatedly skipping between two and three stars, the writing is too strong, but it is not very good. The plot has no passion. The story between the protagonist and Ma Jia is somewhat interesting. The story of others and Ma Jia alone is also interesting, but they are not interesting at all together.
This book is very confusing. In terms of plot and writing, it can actually be given four stars, but the protagonist's tone of pure profit-making is very uncomfortable. Why can't the vest be a real vest? (Sadness and anger) The police academy team is a bit shady at the end. Well, the arrows are not equal at all anyway. It's hard to change sincerely.
Deducted one star because he hasn't updated it for too long. I loved how the male protagonist and Jing Guang helped each other as detective partners, but the plot was too detailed and too slow, very tame.
I was caught off guard and halfway through the story, the emotional line was full and the screen started to open. In fact, this book can really take a friendship direction, (I hesitated to say it) because it is obvious that the teacher is not good at writing emotions.
It was okay in the early stage, but when a friend died in the later stage, I couldn't hold it in anymore. His death was very sudden and unprepared, and the protagonist's wording was also very ambiguous. Who knows, but you gave me one after you saw it halfway, ah? Feeling
It was fine in the early stage, but in the later stage, as the number of characters increased, the author lost control. The progress bar moved too fast, and one would get there without paying attention to the plot.
Ah, the setting of this book is quite good, but the writing is a bit bad and the plot is a bit Mary Sue. If you don't have enough to eat, you can go and read it.
This is a work in which I torture myself, and gin plays a large part in it! Big! ! ! ! Big! ! ! ! ! Why do so many teachers who like Jingguang also like gin? Is it such a contrast? (Sobs) But the writing is very good. I am one of them. When it comes to the gin plot, I can endure it and watch it. When it comes to the Scottish plot, I can drink it wildly. In this book, even glass shards and poison can't kill me, because there is gin in the front, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. So now I take the initiative to eat half of the things I don't like. I love and hate it at the same time.
In fact, the writing is okay. The reason why I gave it three stars is that they are not very friendly to Hagiwara, Matsuda, and Kagemitsu. The background here is that black and white high-level people are all working together secretly. Furitani should be the one who breaks the situation, but the main character is the rich woman in the back (spitting smoke). He is the main character. Although the interaction is cute at the moment, I have no idea how Zero likes him. To be honest, I kind of want to beat him up.
Right! I was the one who bought the wrong stocks! ! ! I originally thought that I would only choose from the world of Ke Xue, and at most I would be given CPs of black characters I didn't like, but who knew the main character was Dazai! This teacher has two books! They are all Dazai! But the writing is okay
I really like it, but there are a bit too many original character scenes in the back. In the early stage, the gangster, and in the later stage, the Holy Father is the bright protagonist, and he is a succubus. As a character in the author's fictional works, he is very popular in Conan and a bunch of mixed worlds.
I was a bit dizzy after reading too much of it, but the writing style is very comfortable. Except for the ending, which is a little rushed, it's okay (turning my head sharply) where is this cp that I can't stand (Grudge)
Yes, I can watch it, but his OOC is too fierce. Don't think of him as a fan. He is a bloody beast, but some clips are okay to watch. Also, I forgot that Gin was badly beaten by OOC.
Can I say that this book (with my chin held up) is better in orthopedics than in regular CP? I can give it a five-point rating for family affection. There are too many parts describing the body and temptation in the early stage, which is a bit too much, but some of them, like Matsuda brother, just killed me here.
Ah, I haven't finished reading it yet. The protagonist's face, consciousness and pursuit make me feel like three people, childish, normal and? , It's hard to criticize for the time being, it's a bit of a stereotype
Overall, it's fine. The writing style is plain and honest. In layman's terms, there's nothing particularly explosive. I like the part about throwing rocks on the window sill.
It's so exciting, but because I don't do that to Narcissus, I'm half as happy. But apart from Narcissus, I had a great time doing it in my previous life! ! The writing style is also OK (I just like beauty, strength and misery)