Because this is an old article published in 2016 (even though it was only completed in recent years), it is inevitable that some concepts are older.
Watching it can make me calm down. The mentality of the protagonist is the mentality of cultivating immortals that I like. Adding the first person perspective makes me have a Taoist mentality.
Emperor × general. I really like the main issues to be discussed, the writing style is also great, and the characters are very fleshed out. It would be nice if the war could be described in more detail, but everyone has their own strengths and weaknesses and it is understandable.
Dafeng really controls the character creation, emotions, and changes in relationship behavior so well. The first-person writing is from my inner T0 level. I can deeply feel that I don't know the true face of Mount Lu and experience the subjective perspective. It's just that this strategy is a bit simple, perhaps because of the subjective perspective.
Pure martial arts flavor, great plotting and writing, the first "reading style"
Really great! The narration from different angles, which was not included in the v chapter at first, immediately attracted me. It is really conscientious to use high-density narration in the free chapter, without being watery or procrastinating at all. But I feel that the plot behind it is not as good-looking and amazing as before entering v.
Very middle and high school! Childish youth
Yu Ran is really my favorite character. He is a lively and cheerful person in the class, but he has a gentle background. Especially the time period of this article is from junior high school to high school, and it really depicts the transition of a middle school student from junior high school to high school. Nowadays, a lot of literature is written very maturely right after high school. In fact, it is not the case. At the beginning, everyone was really naive.