1-2 Is perfunctory, 3 has interesting content and the reading experience is not very good, 4 is flat but complete or good but has flaws. 5. It looks very good or has small flaws but has features.
Honest people are attacked and those who lack love and tsundere suffer. Shou's words are very hurtful, but because Gong can see through his fragility and incompetence to a certain extent, I feel that the latter part is more due to the adult's uncertainty about the relationship between the two people. He is not always stimulated by Shou's words. In the later period, he is also the type who cherishes feedback when receiving feedback. The main reason why Shou tries to save him in the early stage is because of the lack of love. Because the car that was deleted a lot seems to be very fragmented, the father didn't finish the ending, and the extras weren't finished. A bit half-finished
Mu felt that the two of them could not face family responsibilities forever, and later found that they were inseparable and liked each other until they were willing to give it a try. The protagonist's cautiousness and shyness gradually open up the closed heart (mainly by being pried open), which is also very cute.
Very good!
I am about to get ptsd from my monthly short story, which is about to end. It is rare to see a complete story. The two protagonists are both likable and there is not much messy content. The plot and writing are all online. It is a long-lasting love story. Although I feel that the separation starts to speed up a bit later, it does not affect
The repeated expressions are not very effective, the beauty is a bit too much, and the story is not complete. But it's still pretty good-looking without deliberately describing beauty and emotions. Overall, it's okay.
Compared with the dreamy warm and harmonious family atmosphere, I prefer this kind of mutual armor through many experiences. The emotional line is actually average, but I really like the priest's tenacious vitality and fighting for what he wants. There's probably a book-travelling heartthrob in the background, but he doesn't steal the show. It's just a background, and it doesn't deviate from the protagonist's perspective, so it's very nice.
Early pregnancy: I'm in a hurry! Later: Don't be impatient! It's pretty good to watch, and the plot is a bit interesting. It was very rushed at the end, but considering it's more interesting, I'll give it five stars.
A bit overwhelming. At first I felt that it was too overwhelming, and it was a bit overwhelming because it was not on the same emotional level at all, but when I saw the amnesia part that was supposed to be bloody, I felt it was a little sweet. The ring box that appeared twice in the past life and this life can be regarded as having a good ending. Gong may be loving, but the form of love is different. But it's still a bit embarrassing to be subjected to those embarrassing behaviors. Judging from the extras, we already know about Gong's amnesia in his previous life, but it seems that we don't know about it in the main text.
Quite a cute idea. Even if you are 100% aware of the setting of binding attack and reception, it still feels a bit awkward, and the mental state in the second chapter is a bit too beautiful.
It's a little fast, but the plot is very interesting and complete, and the two people get along well with each other. At first I thought it was not good to take secretly taken photos, but when I looked back I realized it was the two of you having fun. Fine
The front line is quite interesting. The plot after college is progressing at a rapid pace. The video was revealed and even half a chapter of Minglian, a new character, was added. The foreshadowing for the tool man is better than that of Jiao Shuo Xing Tan Gua Han Floating D Yuan Chun Gu Chuncheng Every Blowing
It's pretty good-looking at the front, but it's average toward the back. I feel that the core idea is that the two people meet again, especially the part about winning the game and buying ice cream. After that, it is very sloppy and just trying to finish the story. It may be that the previous things are downplayed because there is nothing to write about, but the reason for the previous breakup can also repair the relationship and the relationship will go further. If it is not clear, it makes people feel that being together is illusory. The existing content is more difficult to understand. The past memories are also fragments given by the two people. There is little interaction and only the emotions they can feel through their own memories...
It's not quite like a narrative, it's a bit like a drama... The plot is relatively simple, and there aren't too many points about how the two get along with each other.
It was too rushed later, the emperor changed his face in Peking Opera, and it was over. There is some interaction between the two, but it is more about the male protagonist's struggle with his identity than Tian.
It's quite nice, but my imagination revolves around the awkwardness of seeing each other in the front, and the part together in the back feels like a simple room under the hardcover drawings. And after the two of them got together, they both wanted to be aggressive, but in the end, I felt that acting coquettishly in the front was unnecessary. It felt like the characters were inconsistent for the sake of fun. Fortunately, these appeared later and did not affect the overall reading experience.