For a suspenseful novel, the plot is a bit childish. It is said that they will fall in love after the end of the story, but there are too many descriptions of Gong, which are gaudy. The protagonist starts describing how Gong is sexy when he is not yet underage, which is a bit inappropriate. It looks like the police and everyone else are brainless.
The writing was worse than expected, and I was disappointed. The protagonist became more and more coquettish, and his personal charm was not fully expressed.
It weakens the official content too much and expresses it too hard. One reason has to be written in a long paragraph to show how powerful it is. The plot and plot are good, but the writing style is not good.
It's so scary, it made me cry, but it's very well written. I've finished the first two stories, so I'm just waiting for the last one. I'll read it again when my mental state is stable.
I think I just wrote the article not long ago, but the overall story is pretty good, and I have my own thoughts, but the writing is not mature enough. I have already read a large part of it, and I don't want to read the last part.
The article is good, but maybe because I'm older, I feel it's a bit Mary Sue, and there are too many things in the plot. Maybe I wanted to read it that day, but there wasn't much to read.
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