This is a real suture monster... Lily, time travel, ancient palace, science fiction campus, e-sports game... But the author controls it very well, and the background blends smoothly, without overpowering the focus.
Personal rating: 8.8
Now I find that the author's control of the plot is really strong. The beginning and transition are just right. There will be no sudden ending or too long delay. There is a feeling that the story should end here.
The heroine has more stories to say in each book, which is good (X
Personal rating: 8.6 Personally, I don't feel anything about ABO. I feel like I'm just being controlled by desire, but I'm not the same as Gu Ximian. D
First of all, I don't think I like reading sadistic novels very much, but this is my favorite one by this author.
Secondly, I don't like eating knives very much, but the emotional scenes in this book are really well written, the characters are well-established, and the plot is not bloody.
Finally, I feel that it is quite uncomfortable to read sadistic stories. I really don't like reading them...
Personal rating: 9.5 Why are the author's other books rated higher than this...?
Reality is already very painful, so why not make the novel a little happier? I really like reading sweet articles o(≧v≦)o
In addition to my appetite for the three views, this book is also excellent in its description of daily life. Classes, singing K, playing with classmates, ordinary things meeting extraordinary people, plus the ability to write about ordinary life in an interesting way, all together create this book. Personal rating: 9.3
Narcissus lily... Lily? Does this count as a hundred….
It's quite comfortable to read, with various characters and personalities, and it's actually free! !
Can't you feel Narcissus's complete understanding of himself? Are there any sequelae of sexual transformation? (X
Personal rating 8.2
Beware of slight spoilers!
First of all... The writing is excellent! ! ! I will never reach a point in my life. QAQ's various metaphors can always penetrate my heart inadvertently, and there are various writing techniques. The opening chapter, the present chapter and the past part are very interesting to read! ! ! The topic selection is also very unique, discussing how same-sex love is entangled in the heart under external pressure. The source of pressure is not strangers or enemies, but the relatives with whom she has the best relationship. When you think about it, you can understand her psychological pressure... This is almost never discussed in other Lily works. But the shortcomings are also obvious. The plot outline is not smooth enough, and there is no foreshadowing for various previous actions, making the protagonist feel very humble... And difficult to understand. There are also some problems with the connection in the paragraphs. It feels like the author first thought of a few favorite scenes and then started to fill in the plot in the middle. Many parts are anticlimactic, and the next chapter is directly a few days later. . . The author himself said that he is a novice in writing... The other parts are very similar, but the writing style is so strong... I feel like I can write a physical book. If you practice more, you will definitely become popular! ! !
Although I have mentioned so many shortcomings XD, the overall reading is still very good~ It is not easy to write the calm daily life in the first few chapters in an attractive way. The author's description of details is very good. When he is upset, he will play with food, hook his feet and fingers in the first few chapters... It is too detailed! ! ! I like it so much, and I change the gameplay every time (? I haven't seen many people write this
I wrote a lot of words without realizing it. Personal rating 9.4
It's a new author, so the rhythm is not quite right in some parts at the beginning, but it doesn't feel like a routine. It's very novel. It feels good at first, but later on, 18 is brave enough to move forward but feels scared in his heart. 27 Has to deceive, which makes me deeply empathize... At the same time, I also envy 18. He dares to love and do, and moves forward with passion and courage without forgetting his original intention. He is the person I want to be in my dream o(*////▽////*)q
Let me complain, the author chose this topic... Lily Narcissus E-Sports... I can't imagine how popular it will be. However, the author also said that it was purely because of his XP writing, so it's hard to say anything. At least I am very happy to read it. The complaints or explanations written by the author usually make me feel relaxed when watching heavy plots. The author and Chanbao are so cute~~~
Personal rating: 9.0 (It's not finished yet. I'll tell you what I feel. I'll make changes according to the situation after it's finished. I hope it won't be unfinished~~((Don't die, the author)
Sure enough, I still like Narcissus (X) The ethical and emotional entanglements after falling in love with myself are great, but the plot in this aspect of this article is a little lacking, and the other parts are very good!
Personal rating 8.6
The character design of the protagonist is very novel, and the image of the delicate and arrogant lady comes to life. The plot is very smooth, and the sweet parts are very comfortable, but the conflicting parts are also solved a little too blandly, the sequelae of reading too many sadistic stories (X, personal rating 8.5
It is a very comfortable book to read. Everyone's behavior is very reasonable. There is no plot where the supporting character falls in love with the protagonist and then gets what he wants, and then hates the protagonist because of love, and then uses his connections and family to threaten the protagonist. It is just like what boys and girls in high school and college would do. It is just too short. I haven't watched enough QAQ yet. Because this book made me fall in love with this author~ Looking forward to the next one.
Personal rating 9.2
Ps: The title of the book has finally been changed. The previous title was easy to dismiss...
It's a mediocre pretentious and slap-in-the-face novel, with new levels being opened all the time... But it's fun in all the places it should be, so it's okay. Personal rating 7.7
Ps is not a hundred
It is a sweet article about the entertainment industry from the beginning to the end of the draft. It is good to read and I learned some new knowledge. The appearance of the system is a bit deliberate, but the flaws are not hidden. Personal rating 8.8
Not bad, but is there really such a person as the moon in the real world... It feels a bit fake, and it feels like I am watching a male channel Tao Ziwen... Other parts are good. Personal rating 7.9
It is a collection of Baihe Wang's (set of) road essays that combines the best of hundreds of schools of thought. I feel that the author has no outline and writes whatever comes to mind, but it is smooth enough and has a large amount of content. The protagonist has unique characteristics and it's fun to be drunk ww
Personal rating 8.4
I like a Narcissus novel very much. The plot in the early and middle stages is a bit bloody... But the emotional explosion at the end is really well written! ! ! The rating was completely boosted by the emotional scene at the end! A lot of people say it's very abusive, but I actually feel fine? Am I too resistant? XD Personal rating 8.8
The fantasy world view is very well written and exceeded my expectations. I didn't expect to see such a complete world view on a female channel, and the plot was not broken from the beginning to the end. Bai Jialiang's growth is also well written. From relying on Qin Weixi to being relied on, to finally saving Qin Weixi, the growth is completely written. But why is it not popular?
Personal rating 8.9