The emotional line is average, and it only starts to develop and advance in the last 30 chapters or so. As for the storyline, it's okay (I haven't read the original Batman), but based on the images in other fanfics, I feel that this Batman is a bit mild, probably because there isn't too much description of the dark things in the past.
Also, I personally feel that the proportion of Batman in this book is not very heavy.
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The heroine married the 40-year-old Batman when she was 18.
This was so long ago that I may not remember it clearly, or I may have misremembered whether it was this one, but I read the chapters and it should be it. I remember that at the time, I felt that female competition was serious, and it was quite targeted at women anyway.
There are some stereotypes and some masculinity, but it depends on your acceptance of the 2018 article; the text objectifies women, saying that Catwoman is Grandpa's, Zatanna is Zarkon's, and saying that Harley Quinn is too crazy to be good, and then talks about letting Xiaotian open a harem; a supporting character asked a friend to show him the sleeping face of a certain superhero, it is amazing, and he can write sexual harassment/assault in such an upright and ordinary way
The overall plot also felt slow and the story seemed scattered. It's almost 100 chapters, and there's still no point.
Only saw chapter 37. When the heroine went on a mission with her friends from the same school, something happened. Everyone died, but the heroine survived. Then after a while, the heroine activated the magic in front of the teacher and ran away to a parallel world...
So what's the point of these 37 chapters? What does these 37 chapters have to do with the subsequent plot? Are so many friends who died and teachers who survived purely to achieve the heroine's growth/strength/golden finger?
There are a lot of typos, a little less punctuation, and the sentences are a bit awkward to pronounce.
The emotional line feels quite hard to push. Anyway, it looked awkward to me, with my toes digging into the ground, giving me the silly and sweet feeling of an ancient Mary Sue.
I feel like the heroine should normally admire the hero, but I don't know why she fell in love with him. I feel like I misunderstood him.
Moreover, the male protagonists in the novel mostly appear to be elders, while the female protagonists mostly appear as people being answered and puzzled ("little girl", "ignorant of the world"), age, identity, etc., And even feel inferior, which makes the female protagonist even more immature.
The narration of the heroine's life experience in the article is mostly about adventures before adulthood, but no matter how many adventures she takes, she still has a normal growth experience, let alone her first entry into society four years after adulthood. I feel that in the early stages, the heroine seemed a bit mature because it was mostly about modern daily life, but later on, she just felt naive. I personally feel that there is a difference between the innocence of young children and the innocence of adults. I feel that the author did not grasp this degree well, and the heroine's "innocence" is a bit too much.
It's like raising a daughter. The heroine has to tell the hero everything she does, even with his consent.
Adjectives used by the author on the heroine: soft, weak, little girl, little girl, child, serious (duplicate words), simple, spoiled
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