The writing is smooth, the author is very humorous, and there are many jokes
The angle of entry is rather strange, the setting is reasonable, and it is not as embarrassing as the golden finger. The front part is very beautiful, but the extras are not as good as the main text.
Watching
The writing is smooth and cute (but not as cute as Maomaoqiu) and the plot is mediocre.
I'm halfway through it. The western fantasy part of the pure game, including the protagonist's growth line and CP line, is very boring. Only the parts related to the game are interesting. The same goes for Yu Meng's last book, Cat Ball Unlimited Streaming. The plot of the copy is very low and it's easy to abandon the article midway. The only advantage is that the author and Cat Ball are so cute that I have to follow it.
Watching
Engaging writing and strong plot
The plot is compact, well-arranged, the author has a bit of humor, and the comment section creates a virtuous cycle
However, as the combat power setting of Shuangwen is unbalanced, the talent level is full from the beginning, so the excitement in the later parts declines, and the logic cannot be studied carefully. Moreover, the description of the group battle is too unreasonable. The 55-man battle is written as five 1v1 or one 1v5 or 1v1 midfielder mixed with changing opponents/1v2 for one minute, without even considering friendly injuries.
The writing is smooth, the plot is okay, and the content is exciting
It contains some dialectical parts, but it is not too preachy. The supporting characters are three-dimensional, and in the end it is not purely annoying to everyone. There is inversion and the setup is fine. The plot is slightly lacking, but the author's humorous daily descriptions make up for this.