Perspective is the main attack. It's neither gk nor sk, it contains different attributes such as attacking, favoring and being favored by Zerg, sadomasochism, etc., As well as normal mutual favoring.
It looks good, and it gives me full control over my main attack, which is great. It would be better if you could write more about the changes in identity relationships in the real world.
Very fragrant. It feels different from the copywriting. Although the two sides in the text also have a crush on each other, the status difference is not as big as stated in the copywriting. In the early days, when the military female was still in the Zerg clan, there was more tension and less ambiguity between the military female and the prince.
In addition, the article is not purely about emotional lines. There are often other people and things that interfere with the protagonist's good deeds. Even the honeymoon episode is not a two-person world, which is really uncomfortable to watch. Personally, I feel that the most eye-catching person in the whole article is Luo Xin, not second. Moreover, all the obstacles for the protagonists to be together have not been resolved until the end of the text.
How can I put it this way? I actually think the tone of this fast-travel world is sadistic, but I don't know whether the author is not good at it or doesn't want to write such sadistic stories. Almost every small world is dedicated to interspersing small plot points with nonsense, which makes it impossible for me to enjoy the emotional changes coherently. But even so, the sadistic feeling squeezed out of the gap is still good. It's a pity that the truth and inside story were not revealed in detail enough in the end, and the grasp of the characters was also rather erratic. I hope I can write better in the future
Supplement: Don't watch the extra chapter where the attack becomes weak in seconds
A long journey into the pit
This is the second episode. Although the holiday games and the stepfather are very annoying in the early stage, the relationship and career lines become sweeter in the later stages.
It's still sweet, but it just doesn't meet my main expectations.
After the second brush, I was a little embarrassed to see Erha Mengmeng, a sand sculpture, with no offensive energy...
The logic of the plot in the later stage is a bit too simple, and it feels that it does not match the huge inside story I wanted to write in the previous article.
When I read the first part, I thought it was some kind of mindless, soft and sweet text, and I almost couldn't stand it. But then it turned out that the writing became bigger again, so it was okay.
It's really warm and healing.
An article I read before said, "When everything goes well, everyone seems to be a good person." If the article at that time was a satire on human nature when things were not going well, then this article is trying to maintain smoothness and heal human nature again.
It's a healing little sweet novel, even if you can guess how "destined" it will be in many of the plots, when you really see the author writing it in his own writing style, you will still feel like "I am a native dog and I love to read it". In addition, there are many places full of unexpected "misses".
It's perfect for lying in bed with a free mind and watching it all afternoon, and then you'll be so sweet that you can't even put your eyes down.
It's good to watch, but it's too short and too fast. The ending is a bit rushed, it advances very fast, and the emotional line is not enough. The author said earlier that the 200,000 words exceeded the number of words reported will be limited to the list. Maybe this is the reason why the writing becomes more sloppy towards the end? This is the first time I know whether to exceed the word count when writing an article.
It is different from the common Zerg novels. The male worms in this article are somewhat similar to the status of women in a patriarchal society. The plot takes the line of equality. I actually don't like this part very much, but it does address the issues that feel fragmented and unreasonable in the common Zerg novel settings. However, the author has written a lot of Zerg articles before, and this is the first time he has written it so clearly. My wife said that when I wrote this article in 2022, I was in a bad state after graduating. Maybe it was due to the impact of inequality during job hunting (laughing) (sad)
It's quite delicious. It would be better if the attacker and the receiver understand each other better, but some people just hate this kind of communication that is not on the same channel.
There are a lot of pitfalls that have not yet been filled in. I hope to see the complete extra story soon to complete the foreshadowing.
I like this book so much, it's a superb book about crazy people, and a superb car. It would be better if the first few worlds didn't have cannon fodder that ruined the atmosphere.
Obviously each world is not that long, but when I read it, I just wanted to consider every word. The reading speed is as fast as an ant crawling. And although each world has only a dozen chapters, the plot development will not end hastily or develop in an outline like other fast-travel novels, so it actually looks very satisfying.
The group loves the sweet and refreshing article, and the author's final setting is very novel. The only shortcoming is that there is too little description of the emotional line. There is only one page in the whole text to tell who is the attacker.
Although this book and the Ming Yuan book are both short, they have a different feel... In contrast, if this book was expanded to be as long as Ming Yuan, I would probably torture me to death.
It's okay, I personally think the first world is the best written. The feelings in the second world are like 1 doing 0 for love, the attack is too soft. The plot formula of the third world is similar to that of the second world. The last world opened quite nicely, but abo world attack, as an alpha and being marked for life by an omega, didn't take it seriously. Even I knew what I was supposed to do... Don't you care about the 90% chance of pregnancy?
Generally speaking, this is a good book with a good feel. Although the author said that he cut the outline, the ending is still very complete in the end, and the pitfalls are filled in and explained. Except for the skill that requires plot time to repair and cannot be completed, everything else is echoed as much as possible. At least it will be great if it can be written without ending.
Because the world view of this article is relatively horror-oriented, I am a little relieved now that I can feel less terror and abuse.
In short, I still want to thank the author for his choices and efforts to consider the readers despite his poor condition.
I have read all the articles in the column, and it turns out that xp matching is such a great thing. Brother and baby are both top love brains... What kind of pot goes with what kind of lid, one wants wallpaper and the other says it's voluntary, xql is locked
I even wrote out the holographic spawning play. Is this something I can see here?
Very! Very good! I couldn't put it down and read all 1.5 Million words in one week. The characters, plot, and writing are all great, and it's written with great feeling. All eleven pairs are great!
Favorite 1 White Moonlight Porcelain Group, 5 Redeem Yourself and Emperor Master Group, 7 Princess God and Loyal Dog Elf King Group, 9 Business Brain CEO and Immortal Lord Group
8 is the most abusive. I was so abused that I couldn't stand it anymore. But the moment when the third person changed the name in the middle really made me feel that the author is so good at writing.
A small shortcoming: I feel that the author did not write an outline, sometimes the details are not correct, and there are many typos. I hope to catch bugs and fix bugs in the entire text in the future. If there were no such errors and omissions, it would be worthy of five stars.
I really love hc, especially the one that smells so good... Please take a look at the quick photo, I don't know when I won't be able to see it again
However, the end of the main text is a little rushed. It feels a bit strange to advance the emotional line when the two people are separated for several chapters? I hope the extra episode can slowly make up for the regrets
Final addition: I'm glad that the parallel world has soothed Yael's heartache!
One thing I don't like very much is that as a powerful minister, Shou is smart and talented, but as a person around him, he can't tell that Gong has changed his mind and that the person on the throne is not the original one. The same goes for my younger brother. I think both of them are stupid and loyal. They can't find the person they like even if their core changes. Do you like the soul or the shell? It's a pity for those who can't recognize the soul of their sweetheart. They can only be guarded.
The writing is average, and the emotional line moves a bit too fast. Sometimes it feels like the next step is not explained well. But ignoring these things, overall it is quite enjoyable to watch, I like it
It's fragrant and sweet, very interesting and interesting, and I like the tentacles. However, in the later stage, a relatively heavy background of alien gods was added in addition to the Zerg. The appearance of those conspiracies and other things was quite abrupt in the text, and it felt gloomy. In other aspects, the relationship between the two of them is still very good.
When I read the first part, I thought it was some kind of mindless sweet story. I was surprised that the author brought them together so early. I wondered how to write so many words at the end. As a result, it actually made some innovations. Chapters 72 to 89 are a little interesting and worthy of encouragement.
To be honest, what surprised me the most about this article is that it puts the most noble male insect in the Zerg novel constantly in a very dangerous situation where he may die at any time, but perhaps it is the various decisions made by the protagonist on this boundary of life and death that prevent him from falling into the clichés of novice novels.
Although, it is really enough to watch it once in a while. Watching the male insects fleeing for life and death every day will probably kill me.
Good night, may the stars dream.
The Zerg writing is very fragrant, and I like the extremely forbearing style.
I can't feel it after the first swipe, but it smells really good after the second swipe.
Thank you for not having the seal when I bought the article, otherwise I wouldn't be able to rate it.
After three brushes, I found that there is no ending between Shadow and Master Asa.
It's pretty good, but the content of the Mary Sue novel in the first free chapter is a little too much... Although the author said that some details and foreshadowing of emotional changes must be reflected in it, but I skipped it so I'm not sure. There are almost no charge stamps at the back, so the experience is okay.
Our baby is a miserable, very good and very bad baby... Just pamper him, because in the end you are the one who suffers. But I personally feel that Ta Zhi is actually a bit crazy in his character, but he just doesn't show it at ordinary times.
The most satisfying thing is that after writing about the most important one-week maturation period in life, there is also the one-month and seven-day courtship period... We Zhizhi can eat all we can
Blackened! Blackening is the most fragrant
It's basically a brainless little sweet article. The author tried hard but unfortunately none of the cars successfully escaped the review, which made me unable to read it.
The overall plot and emotional lines are okay, but many of the twists are too fast and sudden, and the writing is just average. And after reading too much, I feel that the overlap between the various descriptions is a bit high, but in short, the main focus is pretty cool.
The psychological description of the protagonist's social fear is very, very good, and it is particularly immersive. It can make people deeply realize that this is a disease and not a joke like other novels. However, the change in personality after the memory was restored was very sudden. It felt very unreasonable to suddenly change from a sick social fear to a social cow. The more I looked back, the more beautiful it seemed, like a dream dreamed up by a social fear. In short, it did not look like natural growth. All in all, the first half is quite interesting. Once you get to the chapter about recovering your memory, it will be ok.
Which rating misled me into spending one yuan to watch the extra? The extra is more expensive than the main text after I regained my memory.
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