I like this one better. Although compared to Ji Yan's one, Qing Ye's one is more bland, with mostly sweet love stories, but I can definitely see a big improvement. Come on, ma'am, I really like your sweet writing.
I really like this story , the writing is delicate and touching, how a little cocklebur uses her kindness to influence the people of the demon clan. She is not ignorant and kind, but has her own persistence. Her green body, fresh and full of vitality, brings the spring of grass and trees to the dark and lifeless Ah. She tells Ah Zang that she will not stop him from taking revenge, and Ah Zang will respect Fu Nan and is willing to send her back home. Hometown', she said she didn't want to kiss him, so she didn't kiss him. She didn't like him getting close, so she watched him from a distance. The twists and turns in the process were indeed heart-wrenching. The boy would always carry that cocklebur to spend the rest of his life with her. He liked cocklebur, Funan, and Ah Zhi. It was a very sweet and sour story of redemption. The relationship was the kind of long-lasting love that stayed with him until the end of his life. I loved it and was very moved. Jinjiang won't let me give it five stars!
I give the first five points. The part with my sister is sweet, but the later part is a bit sadistic. I like the male protagonist wearing his sister's vest and getting jealous, but I don't like the later part.