[Not very readable] It has a good setting, but the writing power is insufficient, the narrative is extremely scattered, and the writing control is poor.
CP has strong tension and is my favorite model. However, a lot of pen and ink is spent on the plot, and the plot itself is relatively boring, and the rhythm control skills are insufficient. The supporting characters are thin and the proportion is extremely high. The literary wilderness can be entered.
The writing is smooth and the writing is powerful. Young couples love each other so much, I love the love-making CP the most. The most exciting battle in this article is against the big boss, and the emotions are perfectly designed. It's a pity that the rhythm of the subsequent plot is a bit out of whack. Replacing the final boss battle with information revelation is not a suitable plot treatment.
A work of strange resurgence. Falling in love and killing the enemy CP, the emotional scene is quite good. The rhythm control is slightly lacking, but overall it's okay.