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Lethargy, laziness, jumping around, lack of energy
I don't know, just write it down and see. . . The outline is almost ready, I don't rule out that the update may be interrupted if I'm busy in the middle, so be careful when jumping into the trap!
Reader comments
The rhythm is a bit strange, and the background is not laid out well. There are too many characters in the beginning, and then the various titles become a bit confusing. After reading the first chapter, I still haven't seen who the protagonist is. It doesn't fit well with the text, and it's a bit confusing. Most of them are used to fast-paced online writing now, so it may not be easy to catch people's attention. Also, at first glance, the background design should be similar to the ancient setting, but several characters are too "ahead of the times" and it is easy to make people feel uncomfortable. But overall, it is actually a good first time writing.
Article from eight years ago. What a sin, I want to continue watching it, or you may be a little bit more irritated. Crying. You must have graduated and started working. Come on
The cold has always been bad recently. I have been dragging it out for more than a month. It has made my chest inflamed. My throat is swollen and swollen. Even drinking water hurts. There are so many things going on at work, so I feel groggy and confused all day long. When I get to work, I want to sleep, but when I get home, I can't sleep. I dream all night long, and there are no good dreams. I am either running for my life or being chased, so I feel more tired when I am asleep than when I am awake.
Maybe it's because of the bad weather. The climate is getting more and more abnormal now, so more and more people are getting sick. It hasn't snowed much this winter. It did snow a bit in the past two days, and it was not too small. The snowflakes were flying all morning, and there was a thick layer on the ground. But when I came home from get off work in the evening, the road was already wet, and there was no trace of snow at all. Where is it still winter here? The next day after the heavy snowfall, it suddenly became cold, with the temperature dropping to minus 20 degrees. The wind was also extremely violent, devastating and unstoppable, raging crazily throughout the small town. It was really unbearable for God to be so moody and play tricks on people who had no strength to tie the chicken. Alas, the wind outside was still roaring lifelessly. I was powerless and could only tremble alone in the house.
Woohoo, are there any extras?
Loulou, please come back and fill in the hole soon, right?
The rhythm is a bit strange, and the background is not laid out well. There are too many characters in the beginning, and then the various titles become a bit confusing. After reading the first chapter, I still haven't seen who the protagonist is. It doesn't fit well with the text, and it's a bit confusing. Most of them are used to fast-paced online writing now, so it may not be easy to catch people's attention. Also, at first glance, the background design should be similar to the ancient setting, but several characters are too "ahead of the times" and it is easy to make people feel uncomfortable. But overall, it is actually a good first time writing.
Article from eight years ago. What a sin, I want to continue watching it, or you may be a little bit more irritated. Crying. You must have graduated and started working. Come on
The cold has always been bad recently. I have been dragging it out for more than a month. It has made my chest inflamed. My throat is swollen and swollen. Even drinking water hurts. There are so many things going on at work, so I feel groggy and confused all day long. When I get to work, I want to sleep, but when I get home, I can't sleep. I dream all night long, and there are no good dreams. I am either running for my life or being chased, so I feel more tired when I am asleep than when I am awake. Maybe it's because of the bad weather. The climate is getting more and more abnormal now, so more and more people are getting sick. It hasn't snowed much this winter. It did snow a bit in the past two days, and it was not too small. The snowflakes were flying all morning, and there was a thick layer on the ground. But when I came home from get off work in the evening, the road was already wet, and there was no trace of snow at all. Where is it still winter here? The next day after the heavy snowfall, it suddenly became cold, with the temperature dropping to minus 20 degrees. The wind was also extremely violent, devastating and unstoppable, raging crazily throughout the small town. It was really unbearable for God to be so moody and play tricks on people who had no strength to tie the chicken. Alas, the wind outside was still roaring lifelessly. I was powerless and could only tremble alone in the house.
Woohoo, are there any extras?
Loulou, please come back and fill in the hole soon, right?
How can I break this lock?
Why is Xingdao for Heaven being blocked? ?