Trance Gap

Without bad guidance, everyone should live seriously and well. There are many things that can encourage the continuation of life, such as love and yourself. There is a reason why the name is a single character and is a rare word● ■■■ He ran to the stone bridge, the street lights dimly illuminated the dark night, looked at the dead river, and finally met again the "person" who had been inseparable from his birth. ＊＊ He was in chaos, catching the subtle sounds of the other party. A little bit was enough, and a little bit was enough to endure for a long time. ●● Ying Yan just felt like it was a long dream. He obviously just got a note of leave, and he obviously just couldn't control his emotions, but he ran away like a bad student. The green stream lies under the stone bridge at night, as if one's own body is lying in the stream. When he opened his eyes again, he met a boy of similar age to him, with a very strange name. He said his name was "yàn", and there was a big hamster next to him, named "Cangcang". Ying Yan's memory was blurred, but there was always a voice in his heart telling him that he had seen them. The boy opposite wrote his name in Ying Yan's hand one stroke at a time. "Fire". At this time, Ying Xuan still didn't know how uneasy, nervous and solemn the person named Ao was. But no matter how much time passed, he could still remember the warm and itchy touch on his palm, as the other person's fingers traced the palm prints in detail. Create a fairy tale with your own hands, take the initiative to let go of life and leave. The body becomes a Chinese character, but it is a font written by a child. It turned into soft candy and tasted it with my own hands; before it was coated in frosting, the hands I held actually stuck together. This place is fresh, lovely, lively, bizarre, and so different from my original world. It seems that Ying Xun can no longer endure everything boring, dull, boring and gray in Xun Yuan. But you have to wake up from dreams, even if they are not nightmares. But no matter what, under the hot sunset, the children of the past can now stand side by side. Ying Yan witnessed the other party's burning without knowing it, and knew with his own eyes how he returned to ashes. Hao told himself that as long as his heart was still beating, he would not leave. So, they returned to the world without each other and escaped from Xunyuan, which they couldn't escape from. "When I miss you, I will read and write your name over and over again until you fill my entire notebook. I know that if my heart is still beating, it can feel that warmth, so I know that you are still here, and I know that you will not leave. " ● He was thinking silently in his heart "Even if you can't see me, even if you don't know my existence, I am reborn because of your handwriting that was wet with tears. From then on, I escaped from the chaos, escaped from the tumbling and churning things that vibrated like broken bones and flesh and blood, and reluctantly followed your example to become a "human being". When I was not born, I heard your heartbeat, but I didn't hold your tears. I felt alive at that time, and you made me escape from the sea of misery. Lively, lovely, lively. When you were 5 years old, your crying figure was outlined in the orange-red sunset. I learned to speak for the first time. It was also at that time that Cangcang stayed. When I was 8 years old, I met your tears again. You choked and wrote my name. This is the name you gave me. So I took a step toward becoming a "human being" in a real sense. There is a flame left in my heart, just like the dazzling sunset. When you were 18 years old, you were curled up on the stone bridge, looking at the stream in trance. Don't worry about melting with the cold water. After all, I'm holding you. " "It turns out you showed up when I was 5 years old, 8 years old, and 18 years old." ■■■ The first part of the copywriting is from the receiving perspective, and the attacking perspective is at the end. The name of Gong (● is considered a more important point●) (Although there is a pronunciation in the text, I will say that it has the same pronunciation as "flame") The beginning of the love between the two protagonists develops after they reach adulthood. The protagonist was already an adult when he first appeared. ●Chapter 4-7, interpretation of (boring) fairy tales. In Chapter 11, the protagonist changes into Chinese characters. ●I personally like Chapters 12, 13, and 14, which cover the important life points of Shou at the age of 5, 8, and 18, as well as the process of transforming from a non-human, non-biological mass of consciousness to a "human" (although he did not become a human in a complete sense in the end). ●Demining: 1. The writing is quite fragmented, and I don't know how to write the plot at all. The writing style is noob and the plot is artificial. It's very pretentious. When I wrote it, I almost dreamed of writing which sentences. The plot is most likely childish. 2. If you feel that you are exporting opinions to readers, then there is a high probability that you have accidentally taken over the role. Overall, I still have a big problem with my writing power. There will be a long section of unclear questions or statements, which is very confusing when writing. I don't know how to write copy at all. 3. Sometimes the description is a little bleak. If you find it unacceptable after reading it, it is best to stop. ●There is death, and there are some metaphors that make people want to vomit (? The premise is that you have to look at my writing skills) Because dreams are a relatively important point in the article, I will write about nightmares. Intention: Life is heavy, love is the same.