The Moon Crosses the Old House and Returns Home (Marriage First, Love Later)

The marshal of the descendants is a combination of Qin and Chu. He loves filming and is a marshal at the same time [caigu]

It's finally complete, so great. What did Da Zuohua write? This was the first time I saw Zuo Yan being locked up, I laughed to death.

It's the first time I've seen someone blocked [laughing and crying]

Congratulations to Zhouzhou for finishing his first book! I am also happy that I wrote a long review for the first time. Let me first talk about my acquaintance with this book. I saw a tweet on a certain book before it was published and was only in the copywriting stage. I felt that the character design and writing style were more in line with my taste, so I added it to my collection. Because Zhouzhou clearly wrote down the time of publication, he commented on the first chapter when it was released. The amazing thing is that I almost never follow the serialization. Even the story I have been looking forward to for a long time will only start reading after it is finished, because it will be very uncomfortable if there is a cheat or other changes. But this book is different. I followed it chapter by chapter, and insisted on commenting on each chapter. After thinking about the reason, I should have been moved by the author before being moved by the story. From the update time to the main text to the author's words to the replies in the comment area, I felt Zhouzhou's love for words, the characters and stories in his writing, and his responsibility to readers. I think the first book should have a very different meaning to the author, so I want to accompany the author to finish writing this story. You are really great, Zhouzhou. I really like your delicate writing style and the tenderness you reveal! Another reason why I don't like to follow serials is that I feel that the reading is not very coherent. I will have to do a second review later, and first briefly talk about the characters. We Zhaozhao had childhood happiness and experienced hardships, and everything will get better and better when we meet Mr. Pei later. I think Zhaozhao is very happy and lucky. No matter what stage she is in, she does not lack love, and it is all kinds of healthy love. Therefore, after experiencing hardships, she can cheer up with love and is not afraid to show her unreserved love to Mr. Pei. Although the ex-husband and the first love each have their own merits, in the end it will only be Mr. Pei who will accompany Zhaozhao. Only Mr. Pei can catch everything about Zhaozhao and lead her out of the haze of the past to start a new bright and wanton life that she should have. The two people are both gentle and strong, and they can warm and heal each other. And the young man is so lovable. Zhouzhou presents such a smart and cute child so well. The biggest regret for me is Huai Su and King Jin. I had an inexplicable trust in him when the direction was not clear, maybe because he was always filled with a kind of sadness. It would be exciting if there were extra chapters from his perspective to write about his foresight and planning. In the end, he still cannot have both the individual and the world. Huai Su is a very sassy girl as soon as she appears. Unfortunately, such a free and easy person also has deep obsessions in her heart. I hope she and her children will always be happy in the future. (By the way, the child belongs to Prince Jin, right?) I look forward to a happy episode for all the members. I wish Zhouzhou and the friends who met because of this article happy every day!

Why can't you give me a side story [crying] Please

Woohoo, so pretty! Treasure article! Looking forward to the extra episode!

I've finished reading it, and it's okay. The extra chapter hasn't been released yet, so I don't know what the follow-up will be. Will the threads buried in the main text be sorted out? I feel that the end of the text is too hasty. I should write more about Jing Huan and his emperor cousin. I feel that the emperor is a bit inexplicable. I don't know what he did. I don't understand why King Jin went to so much trouble. There is too little description of the current emperor. At least the reason why King Jin did this to this emperor should be clearly stated, let alone that. The dream is explained clearly, but it is still ambiguous so far, and I have only half-understanding of the real situation. It would be great if it could be explained clearly in the text. I originally waited for the text to be finished to make it more comfortable, but I didn't expect that the text was not as complete as I liked. I haven't finished reading it in one day, and I am thinking about it every day, and I feel flustered [spreads hands] The content of the novel is bland and the pace is relatively slow, so it is suitable for killing time. However, the author's cultural background is indeed acceptable for the novels I have read. The ones I have read before are all good, but sometimes I still feel powerless when I see some words and sentences. It is obvious at a glance, and the mistakes are obvious. The one who made me laugh the most was the one who said that the "Tao Te Ching" is a Buddhist scripture. I was really at my wits end at that time. [], How could you write this [], it is simply outrageous [], and there are many errors in titles, which make it very easy to escape the atmosphere of ancient novels. Many ancient words and phrases are even modern vocabulary. It is really tiring to read. Those authors might as well write modern literature. This novel is better in terms of cultural skills. It would be better if the content is more ups and downs and the pace is faster [dog head] (No other intentions, just what I feel, please don't hurt anyone)

I finished catching up this morning on the verge of being late, so my comments were a bit hasty. I saw a lot of frustration in the comments section, so I wanted to write my comments seriously again. This book has been updated since the first chapter, and it has already captured the emotions. The story is really well written and the plot is fascinating. The heroine, the hero, the ex-husband, the first love, Huai Su, and Yi He all have their own personality charm and growth path, especially the heroine, who is cured by the hero bit by bit. They grow up together and build a happy and warm family. Regardless of the writing style, it often makes people feel calm but also has a touch of sadness. Then I want to talk about why, as a reader, I don't understand the King of Jin line. I think the most fundamental reason is that King Jin's prodigal character and his failure to Huai Su make this character very unlikable, especially against the background of other representatives of male virtues. King Jin is about to catch up with the villain. But in the end, it was discovered that King Jin was actually a martyr. Although some clues could be seen earlier, I still felt choked up. So I am also looking forward to the complete story line of King Jin. As an ordinary prince, why would he have such obsession? Why didn't I choose a better way to change the ending? I was always singing a one-man show. Having said so much, in fact, if you think about it carefully, human nature is inherently complicated, and the prodigal may not be a martyr. In the final analysis, I still hate him for letting down such a good Huai Su and wasting her life. I feel that he is not worthy of a great and upright image. Maybe I am a love brain. [Laughing and crying]

Be persistent! Keep writing! ! ! ۶•͈⚇•͈♡

Finished the text tonight. But I guess it won't be updated until after midnight. Babies don't have to wait [hug]

I basically tied this article in one go. The opening chapter is about the marriage between the newly returned princess and the son of an aristocratic family. The subject matter is quite attractive to me. The character of the heroine created by the author can be said to be completely different from the character of the princess in ancient novels I have read before. She is bright and lively in the early stage but not arrogant, and her later experience After the marriage, she was cold and silent but did not become dark, nor did she turn into a vengeful queen and kill everyone. She is so kind and tenacious that it makes people feel heartbroken. The male protagonist is a traditional prince of aristocratic family. He is dignified, self-denial and polite. Watching him slowly enter the heart of the princess and slowly bring the princess back to life. To be honest, as a reader, I also feel that It's touching. Later, the ex-husband and the first love brother appeared. They are both very good people, especially the ex-husband. It can be said that without him, there would be no male and female protagonists. I always felt that the ex-husband was really the princess's salvation in those dark ten years, but he was burdened too much and was destined not to be just for himself and the princess. Not to mention the first love brother, his family background destined him to be unable to protect the princess. The reason why Pei Erlang could become the princess's final destination was not only because of his own excellence, but also because of his surname Pei. What others could not do with all their strength, he could do it easily, because behind him was the entire Pei family. To be honest, I don't know why, except for the peaceful experience of the heroine in the early stage and the stage of running-in with the hero, I still have fresh memories. I feel that I really have no memory points for other plots. How can I put it, this article makes me feel that the events are compact, and the year and season are added at every turn. The timeline is too fast and some places are unclear. Some climaxes have no impact, and the key scenes are brushed off, which is quite boring. Especially the character of King Jin, whose pretentious and sophisticated description makes people scratch their heads. Brain and foreshadowing (the role of foreshadowing is mainly to eliminate plot ambiguity, shape the logic of characters to make their actions self-consistent, and enrich the story level to achieve a closed loop). It does have a central role but it does not reflect the core role. Seeing this, I no longer care about the ending. It is just that King Jin did all this to promote the son of the hero and heroine to the throne. But I always feel that the hero and heroine are very good. Their story should be clearer and should not end hastily in just a few sentences. The above is just my humble opinion. Don't criticize if you don't like it!

Congratulations on the ending! What a great ending!

Very nice [dog head holding a rose] Selfishly, I would rather read the sweet article first

When will it be updated today? Didn't you say it should be changed to 8 a. M.?

[Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it [Orange candy] I got it

Did King Jin have a reason to die?

Asking when will be the extra episode [Let me be healthy]

Hehehe! Although he despised King Jin, he couldn't bear to see Huaisu's orphaned and widowed mother in the world. It would be great to have a nanny for them!

Ah, ah, you're locked. I'm reviewing you for all the bad things you've done.

Rewatch [purple sugar] kswl [purple sugar] kswl [purple sugar] kswl [purple sugar] kswl [purple sugar] kswl

I clicked on the column and saw the new advance collection. When I read the first sentence of the copy, I thought of Jing Huan. When I scrolled down and took a look, I really looked forward to [glasses][glasses][glasses]. This must be a sweet article! ! ! !

A very well written and heart-warming story!

A very heart-warming story, thank you to the author [Orange Heart]

When will it be updated? I want to see Zhao Zhao's if line.

After finishing scattering flowers, I still don't understand why King Jin had to die. Because he loves his family so much, he would rather be a martyr?

It didn't remind me that there was an update. It was updated after a long time. The soft-hearted Zhouzhou wants what he wants, and the smart and cute little husband shoulders heavy responsibilities. He is destined not to be innocent when he grows up, but I was very sad when I saw the opening scene. I have a hunch that Jing Huan's official match is also from the healing system.

Oh my god, when will the new extra article be released? [Crying] After reading this article, I had a withdrawal reaction [crying] It's been a long time since I saw an article that made me have a withdrawal reaction [crying] [crying] [crying] I've been looking through my favorites now and I can't eat anything.

Wow, is this the next book to create a dream? [Empty Bowl] is the one I want to read the most among the previous pre-collections. [Empty Bowl]

Babies, I really laughed out loud! Chapter 85, originally only the text was locked, but after the appeal, the main text is also locked for me now, haha, I'm crazy. It's locked inexplicably, and I didn't write anything [crying]

Finally unlocked! This chapter puzzled me, and in the end I had to change some content [lie down]. In addition, I would also like to ask everyone, do you want to read "Hate the Bright Moon Does Not Return" or "Chengjun's Grace" first for the next book? The former is a bloody mess, while the latter should be a sweet article [Let Me Be Healthy]