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Reader comments
It's too "heavy". In other words, the whole story emphasizes how miserable the heroine is, but it fails to achieve the effect. It's like eating ice cream. One is sweet, the next is tasteless, and three in a row are disgusting. What about trying something else in between ice cream? Come on!
It's too "heavy". In other words, the whole story emphasizes how miserable the heroine is, but it fails to achieve the effect. It's like eating ice cream. One is sweet, the next is tasteless, and three in a row are disgusting. What about trying something else in between ice cream? Come on!