Boring short story
Demining: The writing is poor and some parts are in the first person.
"A slice of old times"
Spending the hot and cool summer together, then our spring should be colorful and warm, with refreshing wind, and we go out hand in hand to enjoy the flowers and gaze at the moon; in autumn, we stand in front of our ideal building, or look at the abandoned copper bell, play in the woods, feed the pigeons and watch them fly; in winter, we hide in bed and watch movies, watch the rain falling, watch the cold sea, watch the flying feathers, and look at each other's pupils.
"About us later"
But why did I pull out the wrong cord after successfully snatching the plug in the library? Why did I think of the unpalatable sweet sausages I had eaten in the canteen when I ate the unpalatable sausages in the cafeteria? Why did I think of the bus leading to the park in the old neighborhood when I opened a second-hand Nietzsche on the bus? Unknown.
"Present continuous tense"
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I originally wanted to write a very beautiful love story, but because the protagonist refused to let me erase their personality and growth, I ended up writing a very boring story. A few things between the two of them.
Purpose: growth, love