A smile can captivate a city, but no matter how drunk the king is. There are too many such stories. In fact, many people have this possibility, either innately or acquired. Life is like a dream, the ups and downs during it are unpredictable, and the waves of love during it are even more difficult to describe.
Women with different experiences and personalities make difficult choices for life and love in the face of their own destiny...
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After the article is finished, write a song to commemorate it.
Duckweed daughter
The road to the end of the world is too long
Smoke, smoke, huge crowds of people
Returning and forgetting people in such a hurry
Xunchengtai, troubled times travel in all directions
Black hair Black hair reflects the auspiciousness of the clouds
Hongxia Hongxia makes the lips blush
Ask my dear girl, whose house has fragrant flowers?
Duckweed Girl caressing the railing and looking at the river with a smile
A river of spring water, the sunset, flying, flowing wine
A tree of osmanthus, night light, intoxicating fragrance, Weiyang
Qingshandai Why don't you go back to the farm to watch the chrysanthemums and call Qinglang
My heart is wandering, looking in the mirror, why am I confused where the cicadas are singing?
A river flows with spring water, everyone thinks of his own way
Emei, Emei, don't bend your waist, be graceful and graceful
Painting Emei, dancing sword and wearing red dress
Yi Fenghua Who said that my daughter was injured?
The road to the end of the world is too long
Smoke, smoke, huge crowds of people
The human face is forgotten, the world is pale, the world is cold
Laugh at the river, travel in the rivers and lakes, the rivers and lakes are vast
In Twelve Hearts, their experiences are forever legends!
Illustrations and texts are the ideal of twelve. ^_^
The article is finished, thank you to every friend who came here.
Twelve decided to change his mood and not write about such serious subjects for the time being, so his future plans are a modern article and a time travel article. They are only in the process of being brewed, at Twelve's speed, haha, I will slowly think about it~~
Intention:
Reader comments
The writing is so damn beautiful! I really like this kind of black and perverted little heroine and abstinent male protagonist (T_T)
This heroine is a bit interesting
Congratulations on the ending~~~~Wenwen is very beautiful~~~The characters are all so cute~~Except for the naughty kid~~~~~
The background music is my favorite Li song. Just listen to the song and write a few sentences.
To put it bluntly, Abu's literary level is relatively low, because it can be seen from the wording that there is nothing to say, that is, there is no sensationalism, and the rhetoric is more gorgeous. This is a shortcoming, but it may also be a feature. After all, there are too many people who abuse rhetoric nowadays. The same words are copied. I keep moving back and forth, but the subject and predicate in the sentence are contradictory, but I always say it is aesthetic; I don't like Guo Jingming's fantasy city very much, but I like his dream of flowers falling, that's why. Your words are not beautiful enough, but your narrative ability is still quite strong. It seems that you are a little girl who loves fantasy.
Looking at it from the beginning to now, I feel that your progress is still very obvious, from the jerky description at the beginning to the heartache conveyed to me in this chapter. In one sentence, keep working hard.
The selection of background music is very successful, because reading this chapter with this song is very FEELING. Although there is no gorgeous language, it is just a simple narrative, but it still has a shocking effect.
It can be said that you are very attentive and working hard to write a good article. However, don't worry, your pace is too fast. Only by carefully considering every detail can you get good results. Come on! Support you.
Finally, I hope you can find your own personal style. Yes, your article lacks personal charm, has no special style, is not humorous enough, is not profound enough, and is not delicate enough. In its current state, it can barely be called simple.
- -You are just inhumane after all..
Even ghost paths are too late... The author's reply:
- Get over it, get over it, the rainbow is always after the rain.
I wonder if Xiaofeng has fallen in love with Gao Gang. . . She no longer cares about the crime. . . Author's reply:
Probably! Since it doesn't matter anymore, there is no difference between love and hate, crime and punishment.
I will jump directly to the last chapter to comment. If you are writing about my brother's fandom, whether you are a fan or not, please be realistic and not have unbridled fantasies. The time-traveling female protagonists will be copied in various ways. Please, I have read The Legend of the Condor Heroes several times and I still can't write it. Many female protagonists want to be screenwriters and have not even received professional education. Various works are readily available. Why do you want to do this? Can't you write about someone who supports and helps my brother in life and spirit?
SF~Happy New Year~PS. Just shoot Bai Zezha to death...
1 Girl and n boy, not bad, but I personally wish that the child would be Qu Xirui, Nangong Lie, and An Kaichen's #17... I like them the most... An Kaichen likes his personality named Kai,,,, and drools.
The plot is good, but the writing style needs to be improved.
Hmm. . . There is no sofa, no bench, and no newspaper to sit on. . . I sat in the pit and watched: I didn't expect that the best person turned out to be the worst person. . .
Let me guess, a bunch of people came to see him. . . Lei Yi is here, Zhai is here, and his mother is here too. . . None of them died
Xiao Yan. . . You will not be killed but depressed to death in this life. . .
After struggling, inspiration came~ Author's reply:
It's hard…looking at the sky
It was updated...
It would be best if the ending is divided into episodes 1, 2, and 3 so that it will be much clearer.
Galle oil, sprinkle flowers
It's been a year, QAQ, aren't you ready to come back?
The writing is so damn beautiful! I really like this kind of black and perverted little heroine and abstinent male protagonist (T_T)
This heroine is a bit interesting
Congratulations on the ending~~~~Wenwen is very beautiful~~~The characters are all so cute~~Except for the naughty kid~~~~~
The background music is my favorite Li song. Just listen to the song and write a few sentences. To put it bluntly, Abu's literary level is relatively low, because it can be seen from the wording that there is nothing to say, that is, there is no sensationalism, and the rhetoric is more gorgeous. This is a shortcoming, but it may also be a feature. After all, there are too many people who abuse rhetoric nowadays. The same words are copied. I keep moving back and forth, but the subject and predicate in the sentence are contradictory, but I always say it is aesthetic; I don't like Guo Jingming's fantasy city very much, but I like his dream of flowers falling, that's why. Your words are not beautiful enough, but your narrative ability is still quite strong. It seems that you are a little girl who loves fantasy. Looking at it from the beginning to now, I feel that your progress is still very obvious, from the jerky description at the beginning to the heartache conveyed to me in this chapter. In one sentence, keep working hard. The selection of background music is very successful, because reading this chapter with this song is very FEELING. Although there is no gorgeous language, it is just a simple narrative, but it still has a shocking effect. It can be said that you are very attentive and working hard to write a good article. However, don't worry, your pace is too fast. Only by carefully considering every detail can you get good results. Come on! Support you. Finally, I hope you can find your own personal style. Yes, your article lacks personal charm, has no special style, is not humorous enough, is not profound enough, and is not delicate enough. In its current state, it can barely be called simple.
- -You are just inhumane after all.. Even ghost paths are too late... The author's reply: - Get over it, get over it, the rainbow is always after the rain.
I wonder if Xiaofeng has fallen in love with Gao Gang. . . She no longer cares about the crime. . . Author's reply: Probably! Since it doesn't matter anymore, there is no difference between love and hate, crime and punishment.
I will jump directly to the last chapter to comment. If you are writing about my brother's fandom, whether you are a fan or not, please be realistic and not have unbridled fantasies. The time-traveling female protagonists will be copied in various ways. Please, I have read The Legend of the Condor Heroes several times and I still can't write it. Many female protagonists want to be screenwriters and have not even received professional education. Various works are readily available. Why do you want to do this? Can't you write about someone who supports and helps my brother in life and spirit?
SF~Happy New Year~PS. Just shoot Bai Zezha to death...
1 Girl and n boy, not bad, but I personally wish that the child would be Qu Xirui, Nangong Lie, and An Kaichen's #17... I like them the most... An Kaichen likes his personality named Kai,,,, and drools.
The plot is good, but the writing style needs to be improved.
Hmm. . . There is no sofa, no bench, and no newspaper to sit on. . . I sat in the pit and watched: I didn't expect that the best person turned out to be the worst person. . . Let me guess, a bunch of people came to see him. . . Lei Yi is here, Zhai is here, and his mother is here too. . . None of them died Xiao Yan. . . You will not be killed but depressed to death in this life. . .
After struggling, inspiration came~ Author's reply: It's hard…looking at the sky
It was updated...
It would be best if the ending is divided into episodes 1, 2, and 3 so that it will be much clearer.
Galle oil, sprinkle flowers
It's been a year, QAQ, aren't you ready to come back?
So sweet~~~healed~~
Xiaobai's New Year's greetings are so true
Flag,,, flag,,, cheongsam! ⊙⊙
I didn't expect to see updates