Starry Flower Tree

Can I wait until you spread soil next time in this life? It's been more than two years.

It can be seen that the teacher is polishing the work very carefully [Cat Head] Well, here are a few suggestions that teachers can adopt: The teacher's writing is very good, but I feel that the teacher's pace is very fast. Many new characters appear before many people are familiar with them. Especially in the second half, the readers will seem a bit confused (I don't know if this is because I read a bit fast). The teacher can slow down the pace a bit, or when introducing new characters, he can slightly mention the identities that can be said at this stage, including some characters. The personality is also a bit flat. For me, the most impressive supporting characters at present are only one or two [Cat Head] It can be seen that the teacher has thought carefully about getting the title, but in fact, there is no need to type out the title in every chapter of Riwan. When the reader is reading, suddenly a chapter xx xxx (2) pops up. It is actually a bit of a drama. If you enter a new stage and really want to keep the title, you don't have to pursue Riwan too much. Just explain in the text that you can leave it to the next chapter [cat head] Well, it can be seen from the text that the whole story line is not fully developed, but the emotional scene between Xiao and Xie in the first half is really a bit sudden (?), And they suddenly understand their feelings and suddenly kiss. I guess the teacher may want to write the kind of heart-to-heart, the two people have the same aspirations, souls and thoughts resonate, but it seems that the turn is too fast. That's almost it. Teachers can take a look at which ones can be adopted [cat head]. I hope that I can get the teacher's works on the list and continue to watch [spread flowers][spread flowers] (I don't mean any criticism. I am just a dreamer of brain codes. My personal reading speed may affect my understanding of the article. I hope the teacher will not mind too much. If you think there is something wrong with what I say, you can blow my words away like the wind [touch your head] [hug] [hug])

It took me a day to read it, it was really good! Urgent update!

The background of the interstellar world makes Xiaowen's character very rare.

Good looking, my type

Love, freedom, hope, you have it all now

The little couple is so cute, but Bo Qiao is not an unpalatable food! !

Being fucked by [Shy][Shy] can give me a mouthful even if I lie down. . Jinjiang, you are this [like]

This is the first time I've read Jiang Bao's original work. Is it really as cute as the person? It's like a fairy tale with a huge worldview...? Congratulations to the two children for falling in love!

Two very cute babies! The writing is humorous and cute. It feels so real. I read the article for two hours and it warmed my heart for a whole day... It was really a big help to see such a beautiful couple xql TT

[Orange Candy] It's such a sweet little couple, where did you write the article before you said it? It's well written [Like] [Like]