Customized world view/Dual protagonists and dual perspectives/Micro fantasy/Group portraits/Plot flow/Not a mainstream drama
Warm on the outside and cold on the inside, gentle and compassionate, suspected of inhuman attributes but socially fearful, a genius in swordsmanship, a great priest
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Cold on the outside but hot on the inside, cute with a cold face, unable to say a word with eight sticks, but suspected of being a road idiot
(*Early character design will change slightly due to experience)
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In that year of great disaster, the sacred deer came into the world to save youth from certain death.
From then on, that figure became the immortal moonlight in countless blurry pictures of future generations.
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Jie Guanshu was originally a person who did not admire the mortal world. She was reincarnated as a spiritual deer. Although she had a good heart, she always seemed to be contrary to ordinary people in some places. Except for saving the world, it was all because of her duties as a priest.
Some people said that she was a god and a Buddha, and some said that she was extremely hypocritical. The gossip passed through her ears, but she actually didn't care. She just looked up and saw the tall statue in the temple by chance, and she was filled with confusion.
Perhaps because of the reincarnation of White Deer, she is always free from the world, but she floats in the mortal world because of the strands of friendship.
As one of the Destined People, the priest also has his own magic weapon - the "Bugui" sword, but for seventeen years, Jie Guanshu has never been able to pull it out.
Master said that only by having no regrets or regrets, and drawing the sword without regrets, can you truly master it. Chevi, you haven't found a reason to draw your sword yet.
Until that day, the winter lake dried up, and Jie Guanshu tried to rescue people, but was seriously injured in an accident and fell into a coma. The people behind the scenes caused thousands of water to pour down from the sky, hoping to take the opportunity to flood the town in the middle of the lake and complete the life-saving formation.
She suddenly woke up amidst the cries of all living beings, with rising and falling calls in her ears, and thousands of cold but firm hands beneath her body.
——The sentient beings held up their human god and lifted her high over the inverted lake water in the turbulent waves.
At that moment, Jie Guanshu raised his hand and felt his hot heartbeat.
[No regrets] The sword was unsheathed - she finally found a reason to draw the sword.
After that, Wu Shenan bid farewell, established [Hidden Sword], cut off the god in Silent Valley, and asked the pseudo-Buddha in the Red Temple... All these things are for the common people of the world.
Jie Guanshu stood in front of the tall Buddha statue with his sword in hand. His chest was filled with hot and stirring emotions. In front of him was the path of sacrificing life covered with blood and tears. In the wake of the calls of the people behind him, it turned into the long steps to reach the end of the colorless sky.
Under the flowers that year, the sacred deer awakened by a drop of tears from the gods and Buddhas finally had a "human" heart.
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Shen Xing once lived in the Banyun Chang realm without caring about worldly affairs since he was a child. During the first seventeen years of his life, he believed that all living beings are inherently good. It was because of too much suffering in the world that forced them to do evil.
Therefore, when the power changed, and all the charges were laid on his shoulders, and the sentient beings he once protected shouted to be executed for betraying the party, Shen Xing looked at his unrecognizable body, and there was still only silence, neither hatred nor sadness, and he didn't know where he was going.
He fled the youthful plains and went alone to find the mountain of no return where salvation was exiled.
Shen Xing knelt on the ground, with blood marks all over the ground extending to the end of the white sand, and only whispered:
"Ask the priest to grant death."
The sacred deer appeared in the world, its always quiet shadow standing in the wind and frost, its eyes that seemed to be able to see through the cold and warmth of the world were watching him quietly.
"Little senior brother," she just said softly after a long time:
"——Be my knife."
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Barriers:
·Please be sure to read all lightning protection points and confirm that they are correct before viewing. Thank you for taking the time to click (bow
1. There are dual perspectives, which is essentially the story of Guan Shu. The younger brother's line plays a greater role in the plot, but the perspective is more biased towards Guan Shu.
There is a protagonist group, and their importance and proportion in the plot are different. The secondary characters have official partners. In addition to the official partners, the other characters Cp and Cb are free to ask. The official partners are irreversible and irreversible (don't split my little couple, don't deny their feelings, they are only written as a couple because they have feelings)
*The protagonist is a growth type. He is not very happy in the early stage (he will even get beaten) and even in the later stage. He is not the Feng Aotian type.
The birth of a youth-exclusive white moonlight. Jpg
2. Jie Guanshu is reincarnated as a spiritual deer and has a Dharma form, that is, it can change into different Dharma forms, including men, women, old and young, but it is only a clone, not the original body.
3. Various elements may appear in the CP of passerby characters in the article, such as non-Guangwei Zheng feelings, GL, BG, BL, etc. The amount of ink is bound to be small, and it will not have an impact on the line of the protagonist group. However, because the author is a mixed person, he is extremely tolerant, and there are no taboos on sexual orientation except for human beings and violent themes, so those who really dislike certain types can be avoided in advance, or can be partially avoided by relying on the title.
4. Plot flow, the plot is greater than everything else, the characters all serve the plot
If the supporting role is needed by the plot, it will still occupy a long plot (and there is no gender distinction, that is, there are men and women). The entire article completely serves the plot, and it is not a main female protagonist.
*And the author is considered the protagonist to a certain extent. As a writer, the emotional density may be biased, which may affect the author's writing bias and style to a certain extent. In addition, the author loves group portraits, and the water may not be so level with more characters. Please pay attention to the barriers.
5. The author's views are not mature, and his writing style will change slightly over time. His writing skills are not outstanding, and his writing ability is only at the reading level of primary school students. He writes purely because he likes it. If you have nothing to do, you are welcome to read it to relieve your boredom, but it is probably just a running account and cannot withstand scrutiny. Thank you for your support (bow)
——So many words to avoid lightning are to take the bait for those who wish. We don't want to waste each other's inspiration and energy on irrelevant things. If you can't accept it, there is no need to force each other. After all, it is not a great story. Just find what you like. Thank you again for your patience and stopping to read.
6. Please remind me if there is anything that has not been added! (Bow
Intention: to shed cocoon and become a god
Reader comments
. I finally understand why I felt confused in the first chapter. The amount of information is too large, and it would be confusing if it were all put together, especially since the author's world view setting is original, which means that readers need to understand it from the beginning, or just have a rough look and know the five destined people, Qi, and Hunter (a bit like the common competition in Xianxia where they practice fighting skills below the golden elixir). These are enough. But I have a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder. If I can't figure it out, I'll watch it over and over again, which makes me paralyzed.
In fact, if I have to say something negative, this book has too many settings and is a little too dense at the beginning. Readers may not receive it that quickly. But it doesn't feel like a big problem.
The setting is interesting.
[Off-topic: In fact, I often read Qingzhi's column in the first six months after the disconnection, but it seemed that it had not been updated at that time, and I didn't know what to say.
Later, as time passed, I was afraid that Qingzhi would have forgotten me, or maybe you would be angry because I hadn't contacted you for so long, so I didn't dare to reply.
I've been reading your previous inquiry for a long time, but I don't know how to respond.
I left you a message last time. I just read your reply and now I dare to say these words again.
I miss you so much, Qingli.
I wrote you two letters, one long and one short, but neither was sent to you.
There are also New Year greetings, and the article I wrote out of sadness a few days ago after I didn't expect you to hate me.
They are all hidden in my drawer in paper form.
Studying is hard, and it feels even harder when you have somewhere you want to go.
It's also hard to make friends because I'm afraid of being disliked again like I did seven years ago.
I like you very much, Qingshi.
I once told my offline friends that you were "my pen pal", and you were the first and only friend I made in this way.
I value you and always have my eye on you.
Like I said before, "I'm always here."
Therefore, your book will never be in the cold palace. If no one comes, then this is our "secret garden".
But I hope that you get what you want, and that your story and your words are seen by others.
I have 85 days until the college entrance examination, and starting from this year, I won't be allowed to repeat the college entrance examination.
Wish us all a safe journey.
And,
Belated blessings,
Happy New Year. Clean up.
I'm glad to reconnect with you in 2025, and I'm glad to see that you haven't given up writing and have opened a new book.
Please give me your advice in the new year.
Congratulations on signing! Come on.
Wuwuwu, today is also a day when my sister has someone else (squatting on the ground and drawing circles) and playing with herself.
Check in first, it looks great!
I feel like it will be smoother and more interesting after the change than before. Mainly because it is "alive", more vivid, less obscure, and more "easy to understand"? I don't know how to describe it, it's more like a "novel". I had a somewhat "classical" feeling before.
All in all, they all look good, no matter before or after the changes. The style focus is slightly different, but now the audience will be wider.
Qing Shi Shi has made great progress!
I'm a little embarrassed because I haven't watched it for a long time, so I watched it from the beginning because I was worried that I might not remember it well.
Yu Yanwei, the MVP of the whole show, the talkative Little Sun, a professional atmosphere creation team, has a senior sister Lingyun bound to him who can "manually" shut him up.
Shen Xing and Xie Guanshu resisted the dramatic style, while Yu Yanwei and Ling Yun resisted the humorous half of the sky.
Everyone is so cute.
Things get interesting.
I'm going to keep holding my breath here - until someone talks to me! [Crying] (yelling loudly) (running around breaking defense) (running around)
I'm back - but wait a moment cough cough (actually no one should be waiting cough cough) I'll make up for my plot👉👈It's been too long and I forgot where I wrote it [Lop-eared Rabbit Head] By the way, I'm going to revise my previous article hehe
Clean up, long time no see. I feel like the new book is much better than what I wrote before.
Although the previous one was beautiful, its shortcomings were obvious and difficult to explain.
The beginning of this book is also beautiful.
I'm a little curious about what you're like offline.
How is everything going in the new year?
I wish you peace and happiness.
. The article is a bit messy. A little bit of a desire to complain - it's not easy to be recognized so easily after the priest has been dead for a thousand years and the sword has disappeared for a thousand years. With a transparent sword body and gold and white Sanskrit characters, it looks like an ancient lightsaber from a distance. It's both martial arts and spiritual power. It looks like a blend of martial arts, fairy tales, and worldviews, with high martial arts and low demons? It feels like the heroine is either one of the two rescued children or the rescuer. Neither of them can only lead to the origin of this sword. I once had an idea that the heroine was also a compassionate type who was more of a leader. This kind of character really pissed me off, but my idea of a heroine became a fairy hahaha
There is nothing wrong with two parallel timelines, but what is the connection between the two timelines? Can't tell at the moment. If the two timelines are parallel, I feel it would be better to have obvious correlations and complementary echoes.
Hugs, don't rush in cleaning up, let's take our time, come on.
As long as you keep working hard, you don't have to be afraid, and you don't have to be lost in being unknown. Working hard for your dreams is a good way of life.
Just like you said in Qingzhi, it's just scenery along the way, come on^0^~
I have always believed that the so-called "success or failure" is just a bonus of hard work.
Of course, Qingshi has been working hard, but I just wrote these words out of fear that Qingshi would turn into a "lost and unhappy puppy" when no one is around.
No matter what the road ahead is, please keep going, please continue to have hope, even if there is no one on this journey, I will be with you.
Of course, besides, it's not completely deserted now, is it?
Everything is developing for the better.
Please come on, please do what you want to do unswervingly and clean up.
Originally, the type of writing written by Qingshi was a slow-burning type. There would be no shortage of frustration and lapses in the future, but we had to persevere.
I'm always there, no matter what.
Come on, clean it up!
Hmm...(Meditating)
Collect the broken pieces, can you put together a complete piece? (Have an idea)
Wish Qingshi good luck in taking the postgraduate entrance examination!
The article is nice, but the timeline is damning.
This chapter begins with anaphora!
(Turn yourself into a quilt in the comment area) (Roll around) (Roll around) (Roll around)
The teacher's writing style is very beautiful, congratulations! [Come on] Wait until I read two chapters before talking about the plot [Spread flowers]
Will there be anyone today? (Circle silently)
There is a problem. Qingshi, did you confuse Jie Guanshu and Xie Canghai?
Judging from the second picture, the one with the cinnabar mole on her head should be Xie Canghai, so it seems that she is also the one in Chapter 48, not Jie Guanshu.
But if not, it feels like Chapter 48 is not at the same time as the other chapters.
. I finally understand why I felt confused in the first chapter. The amount of information is too large, and it would be confusing if it were all put together, especially since the author's world view setting is original, which means that readers need to understand it from the beginning, or just have a rough look and know the five destined people, Qi, and Hunter (a bit like the common competition in Xianxia where they practice fighting skills below the golden elixir). These are enough. But I have a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder. If I can't figure it out, I'll watch it over and over again, which makes me paralyzed.
In fact, if I have to say something negative, this book has too many settings and is a little too dense at the beginning. Readers may not receive it that quickly. But it doesn't feel like a big problem. The setting is interesting. [Off-topic: In fact, I often read Qingzhi's column in the first six months after the disconnection, but it seemed that it had not been updated at that time, and I didn't know what to say. Later, as time passed, I was afraid that Qingzhi would have forgotten me, or maybe you would be angry because I hadn't contacted you for so long, so I didn't dare to reply. I've been reading your previous inquiry for a long time, but I don't know how to respond. I left you a message last time. I just read your reply and now I dare to say these words again. I miss you so much, Qingli. I wrote you two letters, one long and one short, but neither was sent to you. There are also New Year greetings, and the article I wrote out of sadness a few days ago after I didn't expect you to hate me. They are all hidden in my drawer in paper form. Studying is hard, and it feels even harder when you have somewhere you want to go. It's also hard to make friends because I'm afraid of being disliked again like I did seven years ago. I like you very much, Qingshi. I once told my offline friends that you were "my pen pal", and you were the first and only friend I made in this way. I value you and always have my eye on you. Like I said before, "I'm always here." Therefore, your book will never be in the cold palace. If no one comes, then this is our "secret garden". But I hope that you get what you want, and that your story and your words are seen by others. I have 85 days until the college entrance examination, and starting from this year, I won't be allowed to repeat the college entrance examination. Wish us all a safe journey. And, Belated blessings, Happy New Year. Clean up. I'm glad to reconnect with you in 2025, and I'm glad to see that you haven't given up writing and have opened a new book. Please give me your advice in the new year. Congratulations on signing! Come on.
Wuwuwu, today is also a day when my sister has someone else (squatting on the ground and drawing circles) and playing with herself.
Check in first, it looks great! I feel like it will be smoother and more interesting after the change than before. Mainly because it is "alive", more vivid, less obscure, and more "easy to understand"? I don't know how to describe it, it's more like a "novel". I had a somewhat "classical" feeling before. All in all, they all look good, no matter before or after the changes. The style focus is slightly different, but now the audience will be wider. Qing Shi Shi has made great progress! I'm a little embarrassed because I haven't watched it for a long time, so I watched it from the beginning because I was worried that I might not remember it well.
Yu Yanwei, the MVP of the whole show, the talkative Little Sun, a professional atmosphere creation team, has a senior sister Lingyun bound to him who can "manually" shut him up. Shen Xing and Xie Guanshu resisted the dramatic style, while Yu Yanwei and Ling Yun resisted the humorous half of the sky. Everyone is so cute. Things get interesting.
I'm going to keep holding my breath here - until someone talks to me! [Crying] (yelling loudly) (running around breaking defense) (running around)
I'm back - but wait a moment cough cough (actually no one should be waiting cough cough) I'll make up for my plot👉👈It's been too long and I forgot where I wrote it [Lop-eared Rabbit Head] By the way, I'm going to revise my previous article hehe
Clean up, long time no see. I feel like the new book is much better than what I wrote before. Although the previous one was beautiful, its shortcomings were obvious and difficult to explain. The beginning of this book is also beautiful. I'm a little curious about what you're like offline. How is everything going in the new year? I wish you peace and happiness.
. The article is a bit messy. A little bit of a desire to complain - it's not easy to be recognized so easily after the priest has been dead for a thousand years and the sword has disappeared for a thousand years. With a transparent sword body and gold and white Sanskrit characters, it looks like an ancient lightsaber from a distance. It's both martial arts and spiritual power. It looks like a blend of martial arts, fairy tales, and worldviews, with high martial arts and low demons? It feels like the heroine is either one of the two rescued children or the rescuer. Neither of them can only lead to the origin of this sword. I once had an idea that the heroine was also a compassionate type who was more of a leader. This kind of character really pissed me off, but my idea of a heroine became a fairy hahaha
There is nothing wrong with two parallel timelines, but what is the connection between the two timelines? Can't tell at the moment. If the two timelines are parallel, I feel it would be better to have obvious correlations and complementary echoes.
Hugs, don't rush in cleaning up, let's take our time, come on. As long as you keep working hard, you don't have to be afraid, and you don't have to be lost in being unknown. Working hard for your dreams is a good way of life. Just like you said in Qingzhi, it's just scenery along the way, come on^0^~ I have always believed that the so-called "success or failure" is just a bonus of hard work. Of course, Qingshi has been working hard, but I just wrote these words out of fear that Qingshi would turn into a "lost and unhappy puppy" when no one is around. No matter what the road ahead is, please keep going, please continue to have hope, even if there is no one on this journey, I will be with you. Of course, besides, it's not completely deserted now, is it? Everything is developing for the better. Please come on, please do what you want to do unswervingly and clean up. Originally, the type of writing written by Qingshi was a slow-burning type. There would be no shortage of frustration and lapses in the future, but we had to persevere. I'm always there, no matter what. Come on, clean it up!
Hmm...(Meditating) Collect the broken pieces, can you put together a complete piece? (Have an idea)
Wish Qingshi good luck in taking the postgraduate entrance examination! The article is nice, but the timeline is damning. This chapter begins with anaphora!
(Turn yourself into a quilt in the comment area) (Roll around) (Roll around) (Roll around)
The teacher's writing style is very beautiful, congratulations! [Come on] Wait until I read two chapters before talking about the plot [Spread flowers]
Will there be anyone today? (Circle silently)
There is a problem. Qingshi, did you confuse Jie Guanshu and Xie Canghai? Judging from the second picture, the one with the cinnabar mole on her head should be Xie Canghai, so it seems that she is also the one in Chapter 48, not Jie Guanshu. But if not, it feels like Chapter 48 is not at the same time as the other chapters.