The company's new artificial intelligence is too capable.
This caused Su Zhan to lose her first job.
In order to get a chance to live,
Su Zhan chose to become a test player of the virtual game.
But before entering the game, no one told her, why is this game abnormal?
It's actually a high-end version of "reality"!
Can't afford liquidated damages?
Su Zhan could only send n shouting letters to Black Heart Game Company in his heart.
A mysterious man who can only say "eat quickly";
Fatty, who has only three years left to live after being exposed to radiation;
The officer who loves hanging around her every day;
There is also the little zombie Chou Chou;
Together they want to overthrow - this damn world!
This world is full of ambition and violence, and is also woven with tears and dreams.
When the boundaries between virtuality and reality gradually blur, who is the ultimate player in control of this game?
Intention: Unwilling to succumb to fate
Reader comments
"And Luo Yang always has his eyes grunting..." This is a big bug for the author~
Foreshadowing below
Hey, happy new year [rainbow fart]
"People live in the "home of life..." This is a big bug for the author~
A hierarchical world, a world where people can be directly defined. The explanation of the protagonist's origin serves to pave the way for revealing resistance and breaking down the unreasonable system.
"Su Zhan sometimes feels that he..." This is a big bug for the author~
The protagonist himself will also question his own origin and be unwilling to accept his fate. This kind of psychology also makes the character more full.
"Click to accept, and you have to be thorough..." This is a big bug for the author~
In other words, Su Zhan is already 22 years old this year. According to the setting of "Bad Bones", she still has 8 years to live.
""Lick your tears clean," which is a big bug for the author~
Is it better to replace it with "lick your tears clean"?
"Su Zhan sheds tears again, tears are roses..." This is a big bug for the author~
This sentence is very tense. There is no unnecessary psychological description. Instead, it directly connects the character's mood with the color of the tears, which gives people a strong impact and is impressive. It may also bring about a huge transformation in the protagonist. It needs to be pointed out that the storyline in this chapter seemed to happen a little too fast. The fat customer's purge order and Luo Yang's self-destruction happened too suddenly. It felt like there was not enough foreshadowing, especially the relationship between Luo Yang and Su Zhan almost only stopped at a few sentences when they came out of the can. The action happened too suddenly. In addition, if you look at it later, it may just be a scene, but it will be harder for readers to resonate. More space may be needed to describe the characteristics of Luo Yang to make his actions more logical. This character may be a bit difficult to contain.
"And Luo Yang always has his eyes grunting..." This is a big bug for the author~ Foreshadowing below
Hey, happy new year [rainbow fart]
"People live in the "home of life..." This is a big bug for the author~ A hierarchical world, a world where people can be directly defined. The explanation of the protagonist's origin serves to pave the way for revealing resistance and breaking down the unreasonable system.
"Su Zhan sometimes feels that he..." This is a big bug for the author~ The protagonist himself will also question his own origin and be unwilling to accept his fate. This kind of psychology also makes the character more full.
"Click to accept, and you have to be thorough..." This is a big bug for the author~ In other words, Su Zhan is already 22 years old this year. According to the setting of "Bad Bones", she still has 8 years to live.
""Lick your tears clean," which is a big bug for the author~ Is it better to replace it with "lick your tears clean"?
"Su Zhan sheds tears again, tears are roses..." This is a big bug for the author~ This sentence is very tense. There is no unnecessary psychological description. Instead, it directly connects the character's mood with the color of the tears, which gives people a strong impact and is impressive. It may also bring about a huge transformation in the protagonist. It needs to be pointed out that the storyline in this chapter seemed to happen a little too fast. The fat customer's purge order and Luo Yang's self-destruction happened too suddenly. It felt like there was not enough foreshadowing, especially the relationship between Luo Yang and Su Zhan almost only stopped at a few sentences when they came out of the can. The action happened too suddenly. In addition, if you look at it later, it may just be a scene, but it will be harder for readers to resonate. More space may be needed to describe the characteristics of Luo Yang to make his actions more logical. This character may be a bit difficult to contain.