Li Yunchu traveled to an unknown fairy tale novel, and the system asked her to explore the unknown character Shen Wei in the book.
The male and female protagonists are unknown, the villain is unknown, and the plot is unknown. She knows nothing except who she is.
After a short period of hard work, Li Yunchu chose to give up and proposed that as long as Shen Weiyi was satisfied with any of her feelings, it would be considered a success. Whether it's love, friendship or family, the system says there's no problem.
Later, her golden finger was accidentally discovered by the villain. During the fight, her heart was injured, and the next second the original owner appeared out of nowhere.
Li Yunchu looked at her with disbelief: "Where did you come from?"
The original owner calmly pointed to her own body: "It popped out of my own body."
The system was confused, and the voice sounded in Li Yunchu's head, one after another: "No... Why isn't she dead?"
The original owner heard the voice but saw no one: "Who was talking just now?"
Li Yunchu was shocked: "Can you hear its sound?"
The original owner nodded: "I'm not deaf."
After hearing this, the system became more stuck, and finally it was so stuck that it went offline directly.
The original owner looked at the confused Li Yunchu, waved his hand and jumped back into her body: "Okay, I'm going to rest. Call me if you need anything."
Later, the original owner learned of Li Yunchu's mission and immediately became Li Yunchu's military advisor. He taught her and the system every day, and gathered around to discuss the male protagonist.
What you need to know about reading
①: The heroine looks the same as the original heroine, and the system takes the shape of the heroine! So the three of them look the same!
②: The first 6 and 7 chapters are very poorly written! I suggest you take a quick look at it, it will look better later!
③: There is a deputy CP!
④: The male protagonist is clean both physically and mentally! Don't worry! I never write about bad cucumbers!
⑤: Readers are welcome to enter the pit!
Purpose: Editor, please love me! ! !
Reader comments
The copywriting does not highlight the key points and is messy.
I came across the author on xhs. I read the first chapter in a hurry. I have a little suggestion for the author. I feel that the writing is a bit fluid. I can add the five senses and the environment to heighten the tense atmosphere [kiss]
Oops [Let me be healthy] I wanted to change the first three chapters before applying, but the more I read, the more they look like a lump [crying] My babies will be updated tomorrow [laughing loudly] [spreading flowers]
Congratulations to my wife on finally signing the contract😊
Ahhhh! ! Does anyone else think this cover looks great? Love it, love it [laughing] I like it so much~
Ok Now that I have finished reading, I want to say a few small words. First of all, writing is already a very amazing thing! Secondly, regardless of anything else, I think the most important thing is that the story can be told clearly. It is still roughly understandable at the moment, but during the reading process, there is a feeling that the connection of each plot is not particularly natural. For example, at the beginning, Yunchu and Shen Weiyi The first meeting can be said to be a "feud", but Shen Weiyi's attitude change and the development of things later felt very direct, like walking on an unfamiliar vertical staircase. When walking, I found that the height of each step was different, resulting in being suddenly hit every step I took. See In the comment area, a friend said that the character design is not outstanding, which seems to be a problem like this. (The above does not have any derogatory meaning, feel free to accept it personally!) Again, I think punctuation is a very important issue, because punctuation marks very affect people's reading experience. Many punctuation marks are missing at the end of paragraphs and dialogues, which makes reading not very smooth. I also wonder whether it would be better to add a separator between the previous plot and the next plot. I saw that one chapter seems to have separators; Finally, I would like to wish the author bb a happy birthday! Come on, keep writing, you will see the results you thought of!
It's cold, but if you put it next to Jingming, it will become warm [laughing]
The setting is very good, and the author's writing is also good. Although, you can add a period at the end of the paragraph. I am a bit obsessive-compulsive [shy]
Go to the hospital for a checkup? Or take a look at Po Chai Pills
"" Is a big thorn in the side of the author~
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The copywriting does not highlight the key points and is messy.
I came across the author on xhs. I read the first chapter in a hurry. I have a little suggestion for the author. I feel that the writing is a bit fluid. I can add the five senses and the environment to heighten the tense atmosphere [kiss]
Oops [Let me be healthy] I wanted to change the first three chapters before applying, but the more I read, the more they look like a lump [crying] My babies will be updated tomorrow [laughing loudly] [spreading flowers]
Congratulations to my wife on finally signing the contract😊
Ahhhh! ! Does anyone else think this cover looks great? Love it, love it [laughing] I like it so much~
Ok Now that I have finished reading, I want to say a few small words. First of all, writing is already a very amazing thing! Secondly, regardless of anything else, I think the most important thing is that the story can be told clearly. It is still roughly understandable at the moment, but during the reading process, there is a feeling that the connection of each plot is not particularly natural. For example, at the beginning, Yunchu and Shen Weiyi The first meeting can be said to be a "feud", but Shen Weiyi's attitude change and the development of things later felt very direct, like walking on an unfamiliar vertical staircase. When walking, I found that the height of each step was different, resulting in being suddenly hit every step I took. See In the comment area, a friend said that the character design is not outstanding, which seems to be a problem like this. (The above does not have any derogatory meaning, feel free to accept it personally!) Again, I think punctuation is a very important issue, because punctuation marks very affect people's reading experience. Many punctuation marks are missing at the end of paragraphs and dialogues, which makes reading not very smooth. I also wonder whether it would be better to add a separator between the previous plot and the next plot. I saw that one chapter seems to have separators; Finally, I would like to wish the author bb a happy birthday! Come on, keep writing, you will see the results you thought of!
It's cold, but if you put it next to Jingming, it will become warm [laughing]
The setting is very good, and the author's writing is also good. Although, you can add a period at the end of the paragraph. I am a bit obsessive-compulsive [shy]
Go to the hospital for a checkup? Or take a look at Po Chai Pills
"" Is a big thorn in the side of the author~ structure