Stop, stop, start again from the beginning to save lives! Make some big changes to what you wrote! )What? He works here part-time? ? ! (I'll stop for a moment recently. My writing is not good. There are still many things to improve. Let me think about it again.)
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Due to family reasons, Shen Huaichu lacked a sense of security and sometimes didn't know how to express his feelings. He was a bit slow and seemed difficult to get along with, but he also had a delicate and soft side in his heart. The appearance of Xia Shiyu made Shen Huaichu's world different.
Shen Huaichu, who has a soft spot for furry animals and a sweet tooth, and Xia Shiyu, a talkative little drama queen.
The first time I write an article (Ｔ▽Ｔ), the update time is uncertain, and sometimes the inspiration really runs out... Generally within a week, the number of words in the first few chapters is a bit small, which may affect the viewing▽, but later on it becomes more.
I haven't thought of a name yet, but I will change it from the first chapter to the rest of what I write! !
Intention: Give the other person more time to get along with each other, and you will find that it may not be as bad as you thought.