After Returning to Modern Times, the Evil Cultivator's Second Career

First of all, thank you for the exemption, but this article is okay without v in the beginning, but it becomes more and more incomprehensible as you go to the back. Sometimes the causes and consequences of time events are not coherent. I also spent many chapters writing to Changbai Mountain, and then I felt like a master is pretending to be awesome, but it didn't work. Another Jimo came back, and he didn't explain it, nor did his family explain it. It felt like the protagonist became more mute as he went to the back, and still Inexplicably, I returned to the world of cultivation and then re-cultivated to the point of ascending to immortality in two or three chapters. There is a time difference between the two worlds. 10 Years is almost a few hundred years in the world of cultivation, and then 3 years of re-cultivation, I ascended. I felt inexplicable in the next few pictures, and it was over. At the beginning, the protagonist returned home and felt like seeing his relatives after many years. Later, it became less and less, and there was a feeling that the ruthless path was complete. He stopped talking after that, and it was all explained to him by others.

The new arrival of this family made me feel a little uncomfortable.

Well, the plot is good. However, there are many typos and illogical sentences, which affect the reading experience. I hope the author can revise the article when he has time. Typos are a little better, they are easy to identify based on the context. But where the sentences are not fluent, I have to read them several times before I can understand them, which makes me a little tired [covering my face and laughing]

Okay... I'm a little confused after watching the plot in the past two days. Where do I write about my dreams? ? ?

Oh, no, why stop here? [Crying]

Is there any extra story? (＞＜)

I'm quite interested in the creativity, but the writing is too rough, and the preface often doesn't match the postscript. The author needs to read it carefully before posting. . [Have no choice]

"After all, Mr. Finale made it..." This is a big mistake for the author ~ "Mr. Finale" was changed to "Mr. Jimo"

Nice! Squat and squat follow-up! [Star Eyes][Star Eyes]

"Wang Yi is the name of Marshal Wang,..." This is a big bug for the author~ Master Wang

Any updates today? ! [Kiss]

There are too many typos and I'm a bit confused.

"This is very incredible,..." This is a big mistake for the author ~ "Final" is changed to "Jimo"

Sui Zhenxing and Wen Shuyi are not the other ghost brides and queens

"So when I wake up every day at the end of the semester..." This is a big bug for the author ~ replace "final" with "Jimo"

""Dad, I know, you..." This is a big bug for the author~"Sperm test" and "Paternity test"

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"So he proposed to do a..." This is a big bug for the author ~ "paternity test"

This article was readable before I joined v. It was interesting, and the name and introduction were quite interesting. It was quite attractive. But after charging, it was really nice to just join v and finish it. To be honest, I didn't know how I became an evil cultivator until I finished reading it. I was right not to spend money back then, otherwise it was wasted. I shouldn't have read it today. Otherwise, I thought the article was good. It's a pity.

"We'll wait until the interview is over for the final..." This is a big bug for the author ~ change "final" to "Jimo"

"Mr. Jiumo is so powerful, he can..." This really confuses the author~ Change "Jiumo" to "Jimo"

Skipping from the previous article, a reminder, I saw a paragraph repeated two or three times.