I once wrote the NS fan "Death Game" of Blood of the Dog, and I wasn't satisfied with it, but I didn't know how to change it. Later, thanks to people from JJ and Xianwang leaving messages, I finally gained the confidence to revise the manuscript.
At the same time, I am very grateful for the first message since Xianwang established the column almost a year ago. I am determined to carry out the revision to the end! But since I'm really busy lately, I'll just write two snippets first, and then revise them in detail when they're all empty.
PS: The revised manuscript is an expanded version, and is expected to be a novella of about 30,000 words. Of course, H scenes are also indispensable, and the CP will be very confusing (who calls the author an unscrupulous party member...)