Self-improvement Taoist heir
When you are working hard to promote Taoism and it is beginning to take shape, a system finds you. What will you choose at this time?
Xie Xinghuan (huan second tone), heir to Xuan Zhen Guan, a good young man with a passion for socialism today.
Before she had time to shine and build a Taoist temple, she tragically traveled to "Descent", a book about the coexistence of monsters and monsters, and started to survive in the wilderness.
Thank you, she chose to lie down.
[Host can't do that, you still need to cooperate with the male and female protagonist to complete the plot]
No matter, she will refuse.
[The host can't, you can still summon the dragon back to modern times!
From then on, she worked diligently to promote the development of the storyline, and by the way became a summoner - the kind who can summon dragons.
Xie Xinghuan: No, is this reasonable? ? ? Where does socialism come from? ! ! I want to go back to the Taoist Temple!
When Lu Yifu met Xie Xinghuan for the first time, she was huddled in the coffin. She would always ask everyone she met: "Have you ever seen a dragon?"
? I'm afraid this person's brain is not very good.
Small theater:
Xie Xing still held the fish hatched from the egg and fell into deep self-doubt.
Lu Yifu's whole body was trembling. He smiled for a long time before he said, "Is this the dragon you are looking for?" If he had known better, he would have caught one for her, and she would have saved herself from asking people when she saw him.
1V1 double clean!
The male protagonist is the villain of the original book! No black original male and female protagonist!
Purpose: To carry forward excellent traditional culture.
Reader comments
I haven't read it yet, but I feel suffocated when I read the comments. They are all about teaching the author how to write. There are no other comments from readers at all.
When will it be updated? If you want to gain weight, check it out [question mark]
What does it mean to win together? [Hold your chin]
Baby, there is an extra word "or" here
Baby, it is better to use a comma here. The comma indicates the interruption of the sentence (this is probably what it means). It is less continuous than the comma. Would it be better to use a comma if the mother here asked the male and female protagonists not to go there?
Dear author, would it be better to delete the second Xie Xing? "Xie Xing also assassinated the villain countless times with her eyes. She didn't have the time to argue with him now, so she snorted and knocked on the door." In fact, the semantics are also smooth. I feel that the name appearing twice is a bit cumbersome? A little tired from reading? (Ah ah ah, I can't describe this feeling) [Holds chin]
"My sister practices the way of being a doctor so that all people in the world will no longer have to suffer such misery." (There is no reason for this sentence, I automatically made it like this [] when I read it)
The author asks, "He is one of the few people in Qingshichuan who does not believe in God" or "He is one of the few people in Qingshichuan who does not believe in God". Would it be better? The original sentence is a bit awkward to read, and it reads strangely.
Would it be better to separate the parallel sentences "Her breath was weak and her face was as pale as snow" with commas? [Cheek support]
"Xie Xing gave him a blank look and considered his words..." It should be regarded as three short sentences in a row (I don't know how to describe it). Can the subject be omitted?
Is it "I can't let myself be blessed" [Comparison]
Dear, would it be better to change this to "Go to find Ling Ji"? There are some semantic overlaps between "go" and "go"
"I don't know what he thought of, but his jade-like face blushed a little." Would it be better to add a comma?
What is Yaolu? "Medicine furnace"?
"... The red lips are slightly open, but he hesitates to speak." Would it be better? [Hold up chin]
I feel like "Are you willing to hand him over to me?" Is better. The original sentence has the meaning of a rhetorical question, as if the heroine is confirming it after saying it.
"She couldn't see Lu Yifu's expression clearly. But she could feel the pressure on her hands." Personally, I think it's more comfortable to watch like this.
"It's a pity that her barrier is extremely strong, but she failed to..."
"Ruozai" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
"If again"
Hahahahaha what a smart baby
"Lu Yifu's eyes suddenly changed, blocking Xie Xing's return" [hug] (Do you think it would be better without the demonstrative pronoun?)
"The monk in white holds a Buddhist bead and slowly walks out from behind the big tree." The subject is the same. Is it better to omit the personal pronoun after the first comma?
Is it better to delete "she" here? [Three Flower Cat Head]
Would it be better to change "The baby can regenerate" to "This willow branch can regenerate" [Spread flowers]
It would be better to change "since" to "so".
Push away the dark clouds and finally see the bright moon. Have a good rise.
It's really tiring to read some books, and I have to try to understand what he means. [Split]
I just went to class and came across this book, but I didn't have time. Watch it after class. Great [rose]
I haven't read it yet, but I feel suffocated when I read the comments. They are all about teaching the author how to write. There are no other comments from readers at all.
When will it be updated? If you want to gain weight, check it out [question mark]
What does it mean to win together? [Hold your chin]
Baby, there is an extra word "or" here
Baby, it is better to use a comma here. The comma indicates the interruption of the sentence (this is probably what it means). It is less continuous than the comma. Would it be better to use a comma if the mother here asked the male and female protagonists not to go there?
Dear author, would it be better to delete the second Xie Xing? "Xie Xing also assassinated the villain countless times with her eyes. She didn't have the time to argue with him now, so she snorted and knocked on the door." In fact, the semantics are also smooth. I feel that the name appearing twice is a bit cumbersome? A little tired from reading? (Ah ah ah, I can't describe this feeling) [Holds chin]
"My sister practices the way of being a doctor so that all people in the world will no longer have to suffer such misery." (There is no reason for this sentence, I automatically made it like this [] when I read it)
The author asks, "He is one of the few people in Qingshichuan who does not believe in God" or "He is one of the few people in Qingshichuan who does not believe in God". Would it be better? The original sentence is a bit awkward to read, and it reads strangely.
Would it be better to separate the parallel sentences "Her breath was weak and her face was as pale as snow" with commas? [Cheek support]
"Xie Xing gave him a blank look and considered his words..." It should be regarded as three short sentences in a row (I don't know how to describe it). Can the subject be omitted?
Is it "I can't let myself be blessed" [Comparison]
Dear, would it be better to change this to "Go to find Ling Ji"? There are some semantic overlaps between "go" and "go"
"I don't know what he thought of, but his jade-like face blushed a little." Would it be better to add a comma?
What is Yaolu? "Medicine furnace"?
"... The red lips are slightly open, but he hesitates to speak." Would it be better? [Hold up chin]
I feel like "Are you willing to hand him over to me?" Is better. The original sentence has the meaning of a rhetorical question, as if the heroine is confirming it after saying it.
"She couldn't see Lu Yifu's expression clearly. But she could feel the pressure on her hands." Personally, I think it's more comfortable to watch like this.
"It's a pity that her barrier is extremely strong, but she failed to..."
"Ruozai" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ "If again"
Hahahahaha what a smart baby
"Lu Yifu's eyes suddenly changed, blocking Xie Xing's return" [hug] (Do you think it would be better without the demonstrative pronoun?)
"The monk in white holds a Buddhist bead and slowly walks out from behind the big tree." The subject is the same. Is it better to omit the personal pronoun after the first comma?
Is it better to delete "she" here? [Three Flower Cat Head]
Would it be better to change "The baby can regenerate" to "This willow branch can regenerate" [Spread flowers]
It would be better to change "since" to "so".
Push away the dark clouds and finally see the bright moon. Have a good rise.
It's really tiring to read some books, and I have to try to understand what he means. [Split]
I just went to class and came across this book, but I didn't have time. Watch it after class. Great [rose]
What an interesting setting
Wow [Come on] Jump into your arms and enjoy it