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Male protagonist's perspective: I treat you as my boss, but you actually treat me as your husband!
Female protagonist's perspective: I treat you as an employee, but you actually want to be my husband!
[Eccentric and black-hearted boss] VS [Tsundere, awkward and talented chef]
When he first met Li Qi, Luo Su knew that he was difficult to deal with. So, she decided to drain him.
Luosu: Is it okay to work twelve hours a day?
Li Qi:......
Luosu: Unless I fire you, you cannot leave your job voluntarily.
Li Qi:......
Luo Su: During my tenure, I will increase my turnover by 30%.
Li Qi couldn't bear it anymore: Are you the reincarnation of Zhou Papi?
When he first met Luo Su, Li Qi knew that she was a scoundrel who could fall out of love faster than he could flip through a book.
So he said: If you want me to stay, you can marry me.
…
For the sake of Baoqing Tower's century-old foundation, Luo Su sacrificed himself to join the game, endured the humiliation and became a married man.
After the marriage, Luo Su pointed at the bed and trembled: You can't sleep in the same bed with me!
Li Qi glanced at her: You can't sleep in the same bed with me.
But on a dark and windy night, Luo Su pulled his hair and gritted his teeth: Damn Bai Tofu, do you know nothing but cooking?
Li Qi stopped: What kind of cooking are you talking about? Now this?
…
Li Qi thought that he who had never had a home finally had one. But she said to him, Li Qi, let's get a divorce.
Reading tips: The full text is warm and daily style, double C, mutual redemption, love grows over time, and the male protagonist has a hidden secret when he wants to get married.
Preliminary article for the column - "My Husband Is Too Hard to Kill", the cold and clever daughter of the county guard has killed her husband thousands of times, but the prince of the Hou family still treats her as if he had first met her. He married her first and fell in love later. He has been planning for a long time and deceived the marriage in both directions. Kind-hearted babies, please click and add it to your collection, okay~
Intention: The fireworks in the world are the most soothing to the hearts of ordinary people.
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[This is a Q&A post]
The main story is almost over, what extras do you want to watch? At present, I will write: 1. Liu Amei's story; 2. Xiao Cen and Xiao Xu's twelve years of history
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Hey hey here I am. After collecting the article a while ago, I have time to read it today! I have finished reading the first three chapters now. To be honest, I really want to eat fish balls now, hahahahaha! I have seen quite a few bright spots, and I also have some small suggestions. If I don't understand the plot correctly, please ignore it and just accept the praise! The most important thing when writing an article is that the author should be happy and enjoy the joy of every creation!
[Highlights in my opinion]
(1) The interaction in the first three chapters is actually quite interesting. This article is very relaxed, the writing is smooth and the rhythm is good, especially the description of the food is very graphic. As the main plot of the first three chapters, the fish balls play a "delicious" role. Haha, the descriptions of both the production process and the taste level are very delicate. This delicate sensory description enhances the sense of substitution, making the cooking setting not just a label, but truly integrated into the plot.
(2) The character of the heroine Luosu is a bit clever and cunning. Although she is a bit tough-talking, she is loyal and persistent when it comes to the things she likes (food & family). As a food blogger, she has a sense of mission to inherit her own restaurant, and her profession can also appropriately promote the plot, giving the overall character room to grow. In order to poach the male protagonist, I tried all kinds of probing and tracking, and used all kinds of tricks. I feel that the two people's personalities will have a great spark in the future!
(3) The personality of the male protagonist Li Qi seems very cold and mysterious to me. I guess there was some hidden incident in the past that caused him to only set up a stall now? But his setting is actually that handsome and cool look, maybe it will make the heroine more desire to conquer? This is where it gets interesting!
[Parts that can be slightly fine-tuned] The following is my personal opinion. The author can consider it carefully.
(1) At present, Luo Su's interest in Li Qi can be regarded as love at first sight. Although it was initially for cooking, the pace is a bit fast. I think it can give her curiosity a more reasonable advancement process, which will probably be in this context: "Why is his fish balls so delicious?" → "Why does such a person only set up a stall?" → "Who is he?" → "This person is quite interesting." It can add a little sense of achievement in conquering the Flower of the High Mountain, and make Luo Su's interest in Li Qi more convincing, instead of focusing on him all at once. (Because I have only read the third chapter, if the subsequent plot has been arranged, the author can ignore this aspect. However, if such a tense CP feeling is slightly supplemented to the first three chapters, it should add some attraction)
(2) The past that Li Qi carries should be quite interesting. At present, his main characteristics are "cold + good at cooking". I feel that he can bury some more clues as to why he only sets up a stall. It would be a bit far-fetched to explain it solely by relying on his tough-talking attitude. However, because this is a more detailed setting, I think it is still based on the author's original arrangement. However, if you want to add a bit of layering without sticking to the principles of the previous chapters, you can consider adding some of these types of dialogue. For example, you can guess his identity from others (not a crazy female fan, hahaha). For example: This person does not look like an ordinary chef, and the calluses on his hands do not look like someone who cooks all year round. / I heard that he didn't sell fish balls before...?
Such a conversation will not affect the original story, but it can also hook curiosity. By the way, if Luo Su wants to investigate him, it will also be a good beginning or setup, because Li Qi has some habits that are not in line with ordinary chefs. He is very private and does not want to be photographed. He is also overly sensitive to some behaviors. Sense, if I didn't know his background from God's perspective earlier, I would just feel that this person's personality is terrible hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.
[Final chat] When I slowly finished writing this small review, my fish ball noodles were also delivered hahaha! Thank you to the author for this article, it made me very appetizing! ! Please continue writing happily! A spring of thoughts ~
[Milk Tea] [Milk Tea] [Milk Tea] That's right, be careful.
[This is a Q&A post] The main story is almost over, what extras do you want to watch? At present, I will write: 1. Liu Amei's story; 2. Xiao Cen and Xiao Xu's twelve years of history If you have anything else you want to see or have questions, you can send it ᖰ⌯'▾'⌯ᖳ
Hey hey here I am. After collecting the article a while ago, I have time to read it today! I have finished reading the first three chapters now. To be honest, I really want to eat fish balls now, hahahahaha! I have seen quite a few bright spots, and I also have some small suggestions. If I don't understand the plot correctly, please ignore it and just accept the praise! The most important thing when writing an article is that the author should be happy and enjoy the joy of every creation! [Highlights in my opinion] (1) The interaction in the first three chapters is actually quite interesting. This article is very relaxed, the writing is smooth and the rhythm is good, especially the description of the food is very graphic. As the main plot of the first three chapters, the fish balls play a "delicious" role. Haha, the descriptions of both the production process and the taste level are very delicate. This delicate sensory description enhances the sense of substitution, making the cooking setting not just a label, but truly integrated into the plot. (2) The character of the heroine Luosu is a bit clever and cunning. Although she is a bit tough-talking, she is loyal and persistent when it comes to the things she likes (food & family). As a food blogger, she has a sense of mission to inherit her own restaurant, and her profession can also appropriately promote the plot, giving the overall character room to grow. In order to poach the male protagonist, I tried all kinds of probing and tracking, and used all kinds of tricks. I feel that the two people's personalities will have a great spark in the future! (3) The personality of the male protagonist Li Qi seems very cold and mysterious to me. I guess there was some hidden incident in the past that caused him to only set up a stall now? But his setting is actually that handsome and cool look, maybe it will make the heroine more desire to conquer? This is where it gets interesting! [Parts that can be slightly fine-tuned] The following is my personal opinion. The author can consider it carefully. (1) At present, Luo Su's interest in Li Qi can be regarded as love at first sight. Although it was initially for cooking, the pace is a bit fast. I think it can give her curiosity a more reasonable advancement process, which will probably be in this context: "Why is his fish balls so delicious?" → "Why does such a person only set up a stall?" → "Who is he?" → "This person is quite interesting." It can add a little sense of achievement in conquering the Flower of the High Mountain, and make Luo Su's interest in Li Qi more convincing, instead of focusing on him all at once. (Because I have only read the third chapter, if the subsequent plot has been arranged, the author can ignore this aspect. However, if such a tense CP feeling is slightly supplemented to the first three chapters, it should add some attraction) (2) The past that Li Qi carries should be quite interesting. At present, his main characteristics are "cold + good at cooking". I feel that he can bury some more clues as to why he only sets up a stall. It would be a bit far-fetched to explain it solely by relying on his tough-talking attitude. However, because this is a more detailed setting, I think it is still based on the author's original arrangement. However, if you want to add a bit of layering without sticking to the principles of the previous chapters, you can consider adding some of these types of dialogue. For example, you can guess his identity from others (not a crazy female fan, hahaha). For example: This person does not look like an ordinary chef, and the calluses on his hands do not look like someone who cooks all year round. / I heard that he didn't sell fish balls before...? Such a conversation will not affect the original story, but it can also hook curiosity. By the way, if Luo Su wants to investigate him, it will also be a good beginning or setup, because Li Qi has some habits that are not in line with ordinary chefs. He is very private and does not want to be photographed. He is also overly sensitive to some behaviors. Sense, if I didn't know his background from God's perspective earlier, I would just feel that this person's personality is terrible hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. [Final chat] When I slowly finished writing this small review, my fish ball noodles were also delivered hahaha! Thank you to the author for this article, it made me very appetizing! ! Please continue writing happily! A spring of thoughts ~
[Milk Tea] [Milk Tea] [Milk Tea] That's right, be careful.
Hahahahahahahahahahahaha [spread flowers][yellow heart][yellow heart][yellow heart][yellow heart]
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Is the heroine's name eggplant? She's so cute.
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