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Two heroines CP + two strong men + long-lasting love + country subjugation
"Looking at the flowers, the flowers have withered. I miss you, do you want to see me?"
The book "The Tribulation of Withering Flowers and Dreams of Jade Tea" is divided into three volumes, and the protagonist remains the same.
[Volume 1] Past events
Main point of view: Ye Qingyun + Ni Xinlan
The first volume is divided into three main lines
1. Seeking power 2. Escape + misunderstanding 3. Double death
The main perspective of the first main line is mainly Ye Qingyun
The second main plot is both. The escape is mainly about Ye Qingyun, and the misunderstanding is about Ni Xinlan.
The main perspective of the third main line is mainly Ni Xinlan
Mid VolumeFloating Dream
Main point of view: Ni Xinlan + Ye Qingyun
The middle volume is divided into three main lines
1. Recalling events and explaining misunderstandings 2. Chasing his wife's crematorium + the death of Ye Qingyun
The main perspective of the first main plot is completely Ni Xinlan
The main perspective of the second main line "The Death of Ye Qingyun" is Ye Qingyun, and the main perspective of the "Chasing Wife Crematorium" part is Ni Xinlan
Volume 2Huangliang Yimeng
Main POV: Ni Xinlan
Identity change:
Ni Xinlan: Princess of the subjugated country, female bodyguard, national preceptor, King of Jin
Ye Qingyun: Jade Ming, the eldest princess, maid, Princess Jin, a patient with both talent and beauty
Female guard Ni Xinlan × Princess Ye Qingyun
"Father!"
"Yue Ning, live well and don't be blinded by hatred."
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"Have you heard? The imperial court won the battle."
"It's all thanks to Her Royal Highness the eldest princess that we can win this time."
"That's not true! Our eldest princess, that's..."
————
"Get up, what's your name?"
"Subordinate... Ni Xinlan"
"The name is good, it's yours."
————
"Your Highness, why..."
"Don't ask what you shouldn't ask."
"The subordinates know their mistakes"
"Get up, I told you not to kneel in my temple."
————
"Why is it her..."
"It turns out... You also want to kill me..."
————
"Ni Xinlan, I hate you."
————
"But... That's all..."
PS:
●1v1 double clean
●Purely fictional history and has nothing to do with official history! ! !
●The issue of Ye Qingyun's life experience will be explained in the later plot.
●Demining: Deputy CP includes other sexual orientations
●Two years age difference, under 20 years old
--Boundary line--
I'm usually quite busy, so I usually update on Fridays and Saturdays OvO
Then many readers will ask about the life experience of the eldest princess before time travel.
Here is a unified reply. The eldest princess's life experience before time travel has little to do with the main plot. She is just a patient suffering from cancer.
Then, time travel and Lisu will be mentioned in the main plot, so readers, please don't worry (??ω`?)
Also, Ye Qingyun suffered from fetal transmutation and awakened her modern memory at the age of ten. She worked hard to follow the plot line in order to survive. The system did not have any golden fingers, so she achieved everything through her own efforts!
Deputy cp floor Xiao Su × Wen Fucang
Want to see the details of the story line: Si Luo Yanyan's "Suddenly Leaving the Boat" (?°з°)-?
The copy will be left on 2025.9.13
Intention: Jade tea will wither, and so will people
Reader comments
Darlings, when I was perfecting the outline in the past two days, I found that the outline did not match the previous content [crying], so I planned to make a big change to the previous content first [prick-eared rabbit head]
No, in the second half of this chapter, the corner of my mouth didn't come down [Orange Candy] and I got [Star Eyes]
I can't do it anymore, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I feel Jin Qiong is so handsome! ! ! ! !
""It's up to heaven, the emperor said" This is a big bug for the author~
Look good. Come on, teacher! [Hands together]
When will the teacher update the next chapter? [Poor] [Poor]
Looks good [Starry Eyes] I think you can write a title, which will highlight the key points of the article and attract readers' [spread flowers] [spread flowers]
Is Jin Qiong interested in the eldest princess (thinking) [question mark]
[Orange Candy] I got it, there are so many updates, it looks great!
[Purple Sugar] kswl is so sweet and reassuring [Cat Claw]
It's great, I can read novels and still have the ability to substitute [milk tea]
What's broken is the standard black clothes for assassins. We are hopeless [Cracked]
Every time Li Su speaks, she gives me a strong sense of community [eating melon]
Suddenly I sympathize with patients who have difficulty choosing [Cracked]
! ! ! It's our Fu Cang!
It also lets the assassin play cosplay [milk tea]
When will Madam update?
Why are there so few of them [akimbo]
Hello readers! Today I want to talk to you about my article - "Withered Flowers, Dreams and Scattered Jade Tea Tribulation"
First of all, judging from the number of clicks on the first and second chapters, we can tell that in the golden chapters, I don't even have the desire to let readers read the first chapter. Most readers can only say that they were "tricked in and killed."
I also know that my writing must be very bad. After all, there is a gap of more than 300 yuan. I have also found a special reader teacher to look at my article. There are big problems from both a professional perspective and a reader perspective -
Let's talk about the reader's perspective first. Basically, all teachers have said the same sentence, "Teacher, your writing is really good, but..." The second half of the sentence says too much, and the character setting and personality cannot be seen at all. To put it bluntly, it is a forced formula, and every character has the same setting. For example, the pace is too fast, the transitions are abrupt, and many other problems.
Let's talk about the professional perspective. At this time, the teachers still affirmed my writing style. I think it's probably because my writing is so bad that I have no other advantages [sunglasses]. The teachers also said the same. From the copywriting to the articles, everything is surprisingly bad. The plot It is disorganized, the character descriptions are piled up randomly, and the chapters are almost unrelated. It is like writing what you dreamed of. The teacher also gave me a few words, "The shit basin is rimmed with gold, which ruins the writing." "Epic-level bad work." The words are rough but not rough.
When you first hear these comments, you will inevitably feel a little disappointed, but if you make mistakes, you should correct them in time.
I roughly summarized the most serious problems -
First of all, the early stage of my writing belongs to "show-off style writing". I don't care whether the plot is messy or not, I only care about the writing style. How about detailed description? In fact, I wrote an outline, but as I had an "inspiration" in the later period, I haven't written much yet. The outline has been revised three or four times, and the chapter outlines I wrote either have too much plot or too little plot. Sometimes I can write seven or eight transitions in a chapter, and sometimes I can write a chapter to the end with one scene;
The second problem is that the character settings are not clear, which is also a fatal point. When I first wrote the article, each character in my novel had a unique character setting, including the character relationship diagram, and each one was very clear. However, as I was writing the article in a hurry (sometimes the speed can reach 3,000 per hour), I didn't pay too much attention to the character design. Sometimes Teacher Siluo Yanyan looked at my article and asked me if this character was OOC? Why are they two so similar? (Of course, it cannot be ruled out that I laid the groundwork for the later plot) This is a matter of detail;
The third point is typos. Already one-tenth of my articles in the comment area are typos. Although this problem is not big, it will still affect the reader's reading experience to some extent. The main reason for this problem is that I type too fast. Typing on the keyboard depends entirely on my familiarity with the keyboard. Another reason is that I usually like to go to Caifeng in the morning and wait until I type at night. Sometimes I am prone to typos when I am not clear-headed. I will try my best to type efficiently and carefully in the future. This is also a detail issue.
Summarizing these three points is the main problem of my article. If you have any other questions, readers, please feel free to ask them. I will read every one of them carefully~[Lop-eared Rabbit Head]
This revision not only improves the above three points, the author will also personally bring the readers' perspective into the plot and carefully polish it, striving to present readers with a more perfect novel! [Hug]
The last update before summer vacation [dog head]
Come on, come on, Ah Qian, let's talk [lemon][lemon]
Ah Qian, keep up the good work~ [Fog Alley Dirty Ruins]
Bad reviews, too few.
[Angry]
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"Zai" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
Baby(づ￣??￣)づ
"Wen" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
"Reality" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
Darlings, when I was perfecting the outline in the past two days, I found that the outline did not match the previous content [crying], so I planned to make a big change to the previous content first [prick-eared rabbit head]
No, in the second half of this chapter, the corner of my mouth didn't come down [Orange Candy] and I got [Star Eyes]
I can't do it anymore, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I feel Jin Qiong is so handsome! ! ! ! !
""It's up to heaven, the emperor said" This is a big bug for the author~ Look good. Come on, teacher! [Hands together]
When will the teacher update the next chapter? [Poor] [Poor]
Looks good [Starry Eyes] I think you can write a title, which will highlight the key points of the article and attract readers' [spread flowers] [spread flowers]
Is Jin Qiong interested in the eldest princess (thinking) [question mark]
[Orange Candy] I got it, there are so many updates, it looks great!
[Purple Sugar] kswl is so sweet and reassuring [Cat Claw]
It's so good, cheers to the author [laughing]
The article will be updated soon! ! ! [Laughing]
Look good, look good, really like [spread flowers][spread flowers], madam, please write [like][like]
It's great, I can read novels and still have the ability to substitute [milk tea]
What's broken is the standard black clothes for assassins. We are hopeless [Cracked]
Every time Li Su speaks, she gives me a strong sense of community [eating melon]
Suddenly I sympathize with patients who have difficulty choosing [Cracked]
! ! ! It's our Fu Cang!
It also lets the assassin play cosplay [milk tea]
When will Madam update?
Why are there so few of them [akimbo]
Hello readers! Today I want to talk to you about my article - "Withered Flowers, Dreams and Scattered Jade Tea Tribulation" First of all, judging from the number of clicks on the first and second chapters, we can tell that in the golden chapters, I don't even have the desire to let readers read the first chapter. Most readers can only say that they were "tricked in and killed." I also know that my writing must be very bad. After all, there is a gap of more than 300 yuan. I have also found a special reader teacher to look at my article. There are big problems from both a professional perspective and a reader perspective - Let's talk about the reader's perspective first. Basically, all teachers have said the same sentence, "Teacher, your writing is really good, but..." The second half of the sentence says too much, and the character setting and personality cannot be seen at all. To put it bluntly, it is a forced formula, and every character has the same setting. For example, the pace is too fast, the transitions are abrupt, and many other problems. Let's talk about the professional perspective. At this time, the teachers still affirmed my writing style. I think it's probably because my writing is so bad that I have no other advantages [sunglasses]. The teachers also said the same. From the copywriting to the articles, everything is surprisingly bad. The plot It is disorganized, the character descriptions are piled up randomly, and the chapters are almost unrelated. It is like writing what you dreamed of. The teacher also gave me a few words, "The shit basin is rimmed with gold, which ruins the writing." "Epic-level bad work." The words are rough but not rough. When you first hear these comments, you will inevitably feel a little disappointed, but if you make mistakes, you should correct them in time. I roughly summarized the most serious problems - First of all, the early stage of my writing belongs to "show-off style writing". I don't care whether the plot is messy or not, I only care about the writing style. How about detailed description? In fact, I wrote an outline, but as I had an "inspiration" in the later period, I haven't written much yet. The outline has been revised three or four times, and the chapter outlines I wrote either have too much plot or too little plot. Sometimes I can write seven or eight transitions in a chapter, and sometimes I can write a chapter to the end with one scene; The second problem is that the character settings are not clear, which is also a fatal point. When I first wrote the article, each character in my novel had a unique character setting, including the character relationship diagram, and each one was very clear. However, as I was writing the article in a hurry (sometimes the speed can reach 3,000 per hour), I didn't pay too much attention to the character design. Sometimes Teacher Siluo Yanyan looked at my article and asked me if this character was OOC? Why are they two so similar? (Of course, it cannot be ruled out that I laid the groundwork for the later plot) This is a matter of detail; The third point is typos. Already one-tenth of my articles in the comment area are typos. Although this problem is not big, it will still affect the reader's reading experience to some extent. The main reason for this problem is that I type too fast. Typing on the keyboard depends entirely on my familiarity with the keyboard. Another reason is that I usually like to go to Caifeng in the morning and wait until I type at night. Sometimes I am prone to typos when I am not clear-headed. I will try my best to type efficiently and carefully in the future. This is also a detail issue. Summarizing these three points is the main problem of my article. If you have any other questions, readers, please feel free to ask them. I will read every one of them carefully~[Lop-eared Rabbit Head] This revision not only improves the above three points, the author will also personally bring the readers' perspective into the plot and carefully polish it, striving to present readers with a more perfect novel! [Hug]
The last update before summer vacation [dog head]
Come on, come on, Ah Qian, let's talk [lemon][lemon]
Ah Qian, keep up the good work~ [Fog Alley Dirty Ruins]
Bad reviews, too few. [Angry]
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Baby(づ￣??￣)づ
"Wen" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
"Reality" is a big thorn in the side of the author~