Very bad writing, read with caution.
I am very grateful to the friends who came in to read this article, and even more grateful to the friends who persisted in reading this article:)
This article is my first long article. I don't think I need to talk too much about the shortcomings. Everyone can tell me more, haha.
I have no reason to say that this article is satisfactory to me, but the experience of this article is something I should cherish.
The mood I feel when I press "Done" will always be precious in my writing life.
Only by first seeing your own shortcomings can you determine how much you can improve in the future.
That's it, bow:)
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Reader comments
Okay, let's rate it^O^/
But it's also
Martial arts didn't just start now
It is indeed a very complicated matter to remember the names, moves, and characteristics of each sect.
Moreover, there are a lot of things about the five elements, acupuncture points, etc. In martial arts that are very difficult.
I want to really do everything those traditional martial arts writers do
difficult
I can only say that I try my best to enrich myself
Continuously improve the work
Compete with yourself
Better every time
I think Wan Qin's feelings for Yuan Qing are a bit unnatural and the change is too sudden.
What an idiot! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Together, together!
.... Why did I get attacked by XXOO....
T. T
Come on~~Come on~~Spread flowers~~~~
I hate you! Heh heh!
Ah!!! Bolt from the blue! Why, why, why, why, why, why, why, why, hate us! The author's reply:
Touch, everyone is so excited. . . I was just joking~~~
It's actually a two-way secret love. Damn it. Damn it... These two people have lived in vain for more than ten years, right?
And this Su Lin, why does he come out and jump around in almost every chapter? He doesn't have as many roles as Gong.
Okay, let's rate it^O^/
But it's also Martial arts didn't just start now It is indeed a very complicated matter to remember the names, moves, and characteristics of each sect. Moreover, there are a lot of things about the five elements, acupuncture points, etc. In martial arts that are very difficult. I want to really do everything those traditional martial arts writers do difficult I can only say that I try my best to enrich myself Continuously improve the work Compete with yourself Better every time
I think Wan Qin's feelings for Yuan Qing are a bit unnatural and the change is too sudden.
What an idiot! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Together, together!
.... Why did I get attacked by XXOO.... T. T
Come on~~Come on~~Spread flowers~~~~
I hate you! Heh heh! Ah!!! Bolt from the blue! Why, why, why, why, why, why, why, why, hate us! The author's reply: Touch, everyone is so excited. . . I was just joking~~~
It's actually a two-way secret love. Damn it. Damn it... These two people have lived in vain for more than ten years, right? And this Su Lin, why does he come out and jump around in almost every chapter? He doesn't have as many roles as Gong.
Wait until Chapter 10?(*??`*)?