Three days later, I saw Five Star City. Yuan's true form appears, she is a beautiful white fox.
Yuan, stop at Wuxing Mountain. Say, I am the girl waiting for your tears.
I didn't turn around and walked straight away.
Afraid that when I turn around, I will never see Yin again.
Conception:
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First of all, I am here to get points. I admit that I read a pirated article, but after reading it, I came here and bought it [I didn't buy the whole thing]. I didn't understand why the article was so cold, and I thought it was a very good subject matter. Of course, this kind of lack of writing skills that is related to competing for the world will indeed make it easy to paint a tiger instead of a dog. The troubled times are torn apart by the flesh and blood. The writing is not deep enough and does not have enough expressiveness. This is something that becomes more and more obvious as the plot unfolds.
Don't hate each other, hate the different paths.
This is actually the inconvenient feeling of heroes cherishing heroes in troubled times, but each has his own master, fighting each other, and even blood splattering on the battlefield. Everyone has his or her own compulsions, love, hate, and grudges. No matter how good the brothers are, they cannot resolve them one by one, even if they can risk life and death for each other. It's sad to say that Wagang Village fell apart in the end, but it was inevitable. Each of them wanted to take a different path, but no one could lead them to the broad road. The few inches below the heart in the article is a really overused gag, but everyone was happy because it was HE(*^__^*). The novel about the troubled times gives people the feeling that one journey is like bones and flowers, and the next year the barren graves will turn into green tombs, a kind of sadistic feeling.
Actually, I think the feeling of burning buns should be like this [Dab~]
A silver gun is like an iron chain that locks the soul. Wherever it hits, no one survives. The murderous aura around the body is as real as it is, and it is about to break out of the formation.
Standing on the high ground of the central army, you can see everything clearly.
"Sir! Should I pursue you or not?"
"That's all... Even if we catch up, how many generals will I have to lose before I can kill him!"
There are many chaos in the world, and the beacon smoke is a good time.
Personally, I feel that the progression of the emotional drama in this article is a bit unnatural, whether it's a schoolbag versus a charade, or a charade against a schoolbag. I don't quite understand why I fell in love with Shubao in my previous life. [Of course, it's very possible that I didn't read the article carefully. I checked the time. I stayed up late to read it.] Why did Shubao suddenly agree to Shuobao in this life?
War Hymn of a Lifetime
I fully understand Shao Bao's mentality of having fought all the wars he had to fight in his previous life and just wanting to farm well in this life, so I unconsciously complained a little about Shu Bao and still thought about the benevolence and righteousness of the world. I always felt that I didn't treat Shao Bao with all my heart and that Shao Bao had sacrificed too much for him. The difference between generals is that one is better at wielding swords and leaping horses, while the other is better at strategizing. The story of beheading generals and raising flags is really easy to excite the spectators, but it is also easy to make everyone feel distressed. They belong to the battlefield. Even if they return home empty-handed, they are still half-armed and their spears are not loose. Speaking of this, I suddenly thought of a joke, where did the gun in the schoolbag come from? Why don't you write that it was given by Shao Bao... Well, I love the old version of Heroes, Shao Bao is a tsundere! Although there is that unhappy woman Su Rongrong, there are all kinds of beautiful men! The arrogant Shaobao, the hesitant Wang Bodang, the heroic schoolbag, and Li Er who is both girly and bookish.
I always feel that this article is not gentle enough when it is gentle, and not ruthless enough when it is ruthless. In fact, sweetness is not just H.
The supporting roles always feel like they are not distinct enough, and I can't tell you the specifics = =
First of all, I am here to get points. I admit that I read a pirated article, but after reading it, I came here and bought it [I didn't buy the whole thing]. I didn't understand why the article was so cold, and I thought it was a very good subject matter. Of course, this kind of lack of writing skills that is related to competing for the world will indeed make it easy to paint a tiger instead of a dog. The troubled times are torn apart by the flesh and blood. The writing is not deep enough and does not have enough expressiveness. This is something that becomes more and more obvious as the plot unfolds. Don't hate each other, hate the different paths. This is actually the inconvenient feeling of heroes cherishing heroes in troubled times, but each has his own master, fighting each other, and even blood splattering on the battlefield. Everyone has his or her own compulsions, love, hate, and grudges. No matter how good the brothers are, they cannot resolve them one by one, even if they can risk life and death for each other. It's sad to say that Wagang Village fell apart in the end, but it was inevitable. Each of them wanted to take a different path, but no one could lead them to the broad road. The few inches below the heart in the article is a really overused gag, but everyone was happy because it was HE(*^__^*). The novel about the troubled times gives people the feeling that one journey is like bones and flowers, and the next year the barren graves will turn into green tombs, a kind of sadistic feeling. Actually, I think the feeling of burning buns should be like this [Dab~] A silver gun is like an iron chain that locks the soul. Wherever it hits, no one survives. The murderous aura around the body is as real as it is, and it is about to break out of the formation. Standing on the high ground of the central army, you can see everything clearly. "Sir! Should I pursue you or not?" "That's all... Even if we catch up, how many generals will I have to lose before I can kill him!" There are many chaos in the world, and the beacon smoke is a good time. Personally, I feel that the progression of the emotional drama in this article is a bit unnatural, whether it's a schoolbag versus a charade, or a charade against a schoolbag. I don't quite understand why I fell in love with Shubao in my previous life. [Of course, it's very possible that I didn't read the article carefully. I checked the time. I stayed up late to read it.] Why did Shubao suddenly agree to Shuobao in this life? War Hymn of a Lifetime I fully understand Shao Bao's mentality of having fought all the wars he had to fight in his previous life and just wanting to farm well in this life, so I unconsciously complained a little about Shu Bao and still thought about the benevolence and righteousness of the world. I always felt that I didn't treat Shao Bao with all my heart and that Shao Bao had sacrificed too much for him. The difference between generals is that one is better at wielding swords and leaping horses, while the other is better at strategizing. The story of beheading generals and raising flags is really easy to excite the spectators, but it is also easy to make everyone feel distressed. They belong to the battlefield. Even if they return home empty-handed, they are still half-armed and their spears are not loose. Speaking of this, I suddenly thought of a joke, where did the gun in the schoolbag come from? Why don't you write that it was given by Shao Bao... Well, I love the old version of Heroes, Shao Bao is a tsundere! Although there is that unhappy woman Su Rongrong, there are all kinds of beautiful men! The arrogant Shaobao, the hesitant Wang Bodang, the heroic schoolbag, and Li Er who is both girly and bookish. I always feel that this article is not gentle enough when it is gentle, and not ruthless enough when it is ruthless. In fact, sweetness is not just H. The supporting roles always feel like they are not distinct enough, and I can't tell you the specifics = =