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In order to pursue her crush, Shen Songyi participated in a love and social reality show and had 28 days to spend with him.
What's not good is that the male idol has constant ambiguities with other female guests.
As soon as Shen Song looked at the screen of her mobile phone, she couldn't help but feel disappointed and frustrated. She didn't understand why the boyfriend who had just contacted her had turned to another girl. At the same time, she was struggling with who to send her heart-warming text message tonight.
Tu Danrong, who was next to her, was leaning on the sofa, looking at her thoughtfully. Suddenly, the corner of his mouth curved, and he said in a casual yet meaningful tone: "Send it to me."
Shen Songyi: "?"
"I can make your boyfriend regret it."
#Craftyfoxxignorantrabbit
# the cunning fox identifies the target and takes the initiative to attack
#｜One-way becomes two-way｜Group portrait｜It's hard to teach LPs to fall in love
Intention: Brave
Reader comments
? Taste changed? This is not the literature about running away with a cub, hahahahahahaha
The author's writing style is very immature. There are repeated descriptions in the article. The heroine's character development is okay. I think the most attractive point is the male protagonist. Overall, it is a mindless and relatively simple article. There are very few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists. I feel that the focus is on the comments. Comments from netizens and comments from the observation room. Some comments can really take up half of the page, and the logic of the words is very childish. There are only a few in the whole process. The point is repeated, I saw it is a bit boring, more words than action descriptions, and I personally feel that there is no need to write out the part where the advertisement is inserted. If it is to be the same as reality, I will not comment. I also hope that the author will pay attention to typos. I feel there are quite a lot of them. I thought there would be descriptions of daily life in the future, but in the end, there is only this variety show, and the shaping is very thin. The above are some of my personal thoughts after seeing it now [Glasses]
Please make a sequel!!
Well, is there really no extra story? Still not satisfied
After reading it, I burst into tears. The writing is so beautiful.
I hate Cen Yan the most, followed by Yan
Secretly poking at the connotation of the heroine, she is miserable, this is called implicit
This is really similar to that variety show... Did the author have any reference?
Why is the female protagonist attacking, but the male protagonist doesn't say anything?
If possible, I would like the author to continue expanding on this.
After watching it, to be honest, the two female supporting characters were a little cautious and didn't really want them to be punished. In the end, they just talked about their achievements and stopped abruptly.
Let everyone avoid thunder
Isn't it bad enough to be named Yan? In addition to the one named Su, the two of them were cuckolding the heroine behind her back every day, secretly teasing her about her green tea.
The Internet is so dark, but there is no extra story from many years later to prove that the two are still together.
If I don't want to have a side story, I don't know how to write a follow-up, but I haven't solved the problem of the heroine suffering from online violence.
Teacher, you are really good at writing Ruozhi
? ? ? What went wrong? ? ?
Today's Xiaoyun is a person who steps on the radar [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon]
No. Give me some money back.
Hey, hey, hey, don't bully her [crying] [crying]
[Purple sugar] kswl [orange candy] I got it [Purple sugar] kswl [orange candy] I got it
A character like Shen Songyi's is actually quite rare.
This is my favorite. There are so many typos. It makes me feel uncomfortable.
You should also take good care of yourself [poor]
"Manhe Songsong is silent and quiet" is a big bug for the author~
Shen Songyi
It is completely based on Heartbeat 7 and also incorporates Zootopia. It has nothing new and is a very low-quality novel.
Many of the character settings and plot settings are based on heartbeat signals. It's really boring 😐
"Tu Danrong's title has changed." This is a big bug for the author~
The name of Tu has changed [kiss]
Third brother, wuwu, when will we reconcile? I want to see Tiantiantian
Dad, when can you do double updates? In the beginning, I wanted you to update twice every day, but now... You just need to keep updating?
? Taste changed? This is not the literature about running away with a cub, hahahahahahaha
The author's writing style is very immature. There are repeated descriptions in the article. The heroine's character development is okay. I think the most attractive point is the male protagonist. Overall, it is a mindless and relatively simple article. There are very few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists. I feel that the focus is on the comments. Comments from netizens and comments from the observation room. Some comments can really take up half of the page, and the logic of the words is very childish. There are only a few in the whole process. The point is repeated, I saw it is a bit boring, more words than action descriptions, and I personally feel that there is no need to write out the part where the advertisement is inserted. If it is to be the same as reality, I will not comment. I also hope that the author will pay attention to typos. I feel there are quite a lot of them. I thought there would be descriptions of daily life in the future, but in the end, there is only this variety show, and the shaping is very thin. The above are some of my personal thoughts after seeing it now [Glasses]
Please make a sequel!!
Well, is there really no extra story? Still not satisfied
After reading it, I burst into tears. The writing is so beautiful.
I hate Cen Yan the most, followed by Yan
Secretly poking at the connotation of the heroine, she is miserable, this is called implicit
This is really similar to that variety show... Did the author have any reference?
Why is the female protagonist attacking, but the male protagonist doesn't say anything?
If possible, I would like the author to continue expanding on this.
After watching it, to be honest, the two female supporting characters were a little cautious and didn't really want them to be punished. In the end, they just talked about their achievements and stopped abruptly. Let everyone avoid thunder Isn't it bad enough to be named Yan? In addition to the one named Su, the two of them were cuckolding the heroine behind her back every day, secretly teasing her about her green tea. The Internet is so dark, but there is no extra story from many years later to prove that the two are still together. If I don't want to have a side story, I don't know how to write a follow-up, but I haven't solved the problem of the heroine suffering from online violence.
Teacher, you are really good at writing Ruozhi
? ? ? What went wrong? ? ?
Today's Xiaoyun is a person who steps on the radar [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon]
No. Give me some money back.
Hey, hey, hey, don't bully her [crying] [crying]
[Purple sugar] kswl [orange candy] I got it [Purple sugar] kswl [orange candy] I got it
A character like Shen Songyi's is actually quite rare.
This is my favorite. There are so many typos. It makes me feel uncomfortable.
You should also take good care of yourself [poor]
"Manhe Songsong is silent and quiet" is a big bug for the author~ Shen Songyi
It is completely based on Heartbeat 7 and also incorporates Zootopia. It has nothing new and is a very low-quality novel.
Many of the character settings and plot settings are based on heartbeat signals. It's really boring 😐
"Tu Danrong's title has changed." This is a big bug for the author~ The name of Tu has changed [kiss]
Third brother, wuwu, when will we reconcile? I want to see Tiantiantian
Dad, when can you do double updates? In the beginning, I wanted you to update twice every day, but now... You just need to keep updating?
"Hold on." This is a big bug for the author~