I Rely on the Fate Intervention System to Become an Enthusiastic Citizen in Criminal Investigation Novels

Is it the end of cutting off the outline? [Laughing and crying] But the writing is very good, and the short story tied it in two days. [Come on]

To be honest, I felt that the ending was very sudden. A lot of things were not written and the degree of completion was not high. Please keep up the good work, author.

It's ironic to see that such a person can still have a happy family

It's strange. I saw the sayings about death here, and I felt very recognized. I felt a wonderful sense of acceptance about others or myself [oh oh oh] [melted] [spread hands]

It ends so soon? ? ?

Ah? Is this the end? It felt like the plot ended abruptly before it reached its climax.

It would be better to directly write the criminal's recollection that he had played with a beautiful girl to death before. When the word "long legs" came out, I had a girl with a good figure in my mind. I also said that I played with a girl for several days and kept thinking about it until she died. It was very heart-breaking, and it was unnecessary. Writing this will not make the death of the criminal more enjoyable, because I only have the beautiful long-legged girl who was tortured for several days in my mind.

"I don't care if someone leaves..." This is a big bug for the author~ mine

Narcissus is better () Only you know yourself best! ! ! !

I really want to know what Qiao Yang's expression would be like if he knew that the protagonist in his eyes (the obedient academic master, I don't know if he summed it up correctly) was a member of that organization... (The evil happy person laughs [dog head])

The [Dog Head] system redeems the human host.

It should be 100%

No comment? Let's talk about it here. There is no need to write these sentences about the long-legged man who couldn't forget to play for several days before he died. It is too graphic. Some crimes are mentioned sideways or briefly mentioned so that everyone can understand them. They will not think that the criminals deserve to die because the description is not specific enough. Everyone knows what happened. For example, there was a TV series where the male protagonist was sexually seduced. The male director just hinted that if it were a woman who was seduced by sexual intercourse, her shoulders were half exposed, her face was in pain, her hair was messy, and she was holding her chest and crying.