Click to watch, "Love and Kill"~
Small theater one:
The fate was that everyone was rushing to the meeting point, so why was he the unlucky one to meet this stupid guy?
This led to the following conversation:
Fang Fang: "What a bad luck." Chao whispered.
The other party: "What a bad luck." Super loud.
One side: "Ha!" Taunt + one bomb
Opponent: "Omit!" Grimace + one bomb
Friendly interaction over~
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Small Theater 2:
"Do you want to compare?" He asked.
"Compare, compare,..." He hit back.
"Why don't you dare,..." Came over.
"...!" It hit the air.
This bastard!
"Wha--" The sound of a flying kick breaking through the air came.
Friendly interaction over~
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Small theater three:
A startling glance——
It should have been a glimpse of ten thousand years in an idol drama;
We should have searched for him hundreds of times among the crowd;
It should have been to look back and smile "Bai Mei Sheng";
It should have been...
No, it's none of these.
It should be——
"Didi-di-!"
"Didi-di-!"
"Please pay attention! Please pay attention! A certain B boy will arrive at the scene in three minutes! Please check in time!"
Someone pressed the button with a serious face, glanced at the adjutant, and spoke in a calm tone.
"What are you looking at? Haven't you seen your mortal enemy Radar?"
"Ha!" A certain guy passing by looked at him with a mocking expression written all over his face.
Friendly interaction over~
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2024.11.28
Short story + slow-burn + strange narrative style?
From the memories written, the character may be different from what the copy shows.
The above can be accepted, please come in, thank you
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Intention: Long before I discovered it, my love had grown unbridled.
Reader comments
I don't really understand it, I just feel that the protagonist's shining point is not felt much in these chapters. Maybe there will be one later. Maybe it's the foreign name, but it just feels a bit confusing, and I can't tell the characters clearly. Except for the two male protagonists, I don't know which ones will be supporting roles and which ones will be passers-by.
The copywriting is like lighthearted and funny writing, it is mainly passionate. Maybe the conflicts are not dull enough. The snake plot point is a danger, but from the protagonist's response, we don't see his character traits or abilities. I just feel like the characters are not three-dimensional enough. I don't really understand it. I've never written an article. I'm a novice. It's just for reference.
Temporarily suspended, it should be overhauled later [Red Heart] If you have any good suggestions, please comment~
I don't really understand it, I just feel that the protagonist's shining point is not felt much in these chapters. Maybe there will be one later. Maybe it's the foreign name, but it just feels a bit confusing, and I can't tell the characters clearly. Except for the two male protagonists, I don't know which ones will be supporting roles and which ones will be passers-by.
The copywriting is like lighthearted and funny writing, it is mainly passionate. Maybe the conflicts are not dull enough. The snake plot point is a danger, but from the protagonist's response, we don't see his character traits or abilities. I just feel like the characters are not three-dimensional enough. I don't really understand it. I've never written an article. I'm a novice. It's just for reference.
Temporarily suspended, it should be overhauled later [Red Heart] If you have any good suggestions, please comment~