Just serve the heroine's baby like this [Star Eyes]
Baby Xiaoyun is so handsome
I've finished reading it. Although the story is complete, I still want to see more of [Star Eyes] and the second half feels a bit fast-paced.
I really like the author's description of Baby Yun. Although he has encountered many things, the author did not exaggerate the suffering in order to write about "tragic". On the contrary, he writes that Baby Yun has a lot of love: Aunt, Master, Senior Sister and Brother, Pei Zhen... It is these loves that have raised such a good, strong, and kind Baby Yun, giving her the courage and strength to keep moving forward. In fact, they all reflect the author's full love for the role of the heroine [Red Heart] The author is willing to use his heart to write many highlight moments of the heroine, which I personally think is really rare [Crying]
The male protagonist is also very good, very coquettish, and has perfect service awareness [lop-eared rabbit head]
There are also some very cute supporting characters, the master sister and senior brother, they are so cute, the master family is really warm and cozy [hug] The group portrait scenes are very well written! I like the setting of four women saving the world in the article, and there are no vicious female characters with facial expressions. I really like the author's little thoughts [Let me be healthy]
There is also Shizun and Xiao He. Although it is good to leave blank space, I really want to see the story of the mature sister and the puppy~
However, the timeline is a bit vague. When did Xiao Yun and Xiao Pei meet in the previous life, when did they meet again, and they fought for more than ten years. When did they end up in Cold Mountain? How old is the heroine when she is reborn... Because in theory, if Xiao Yun comes out of the Immortal Sect and experiences for half a year, it will be the time when Xiao Pei was imprisoned in Cold Mountain in her previous life. If we push forward, Xiao Yun should have known Xiao Pei before he was reborn, and they have been fighting for a long time, and not just at the Tide Banquet, right? In future works, the timeline can be written more clearly.
I have already collected the next one. I like Sister × Puppy. Looking forward to it~
The hostess' door is so warm [Star Eyes]
It was sour and sweet in the previous life😭
I especially like it. I have to keep writing, otherwise it will be difficult for me to live in a literary desert [crying]
I really like watching the emotionally insensitive heroine [rabbit head with lop ears] [dog head holding rose]
The heroine's baby is crazy about provoking virgins ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh [lop-eared rabbit head]
The author will update soon! ! ! It's not enough [please please]
I really like how the author wrote about the heroine picking fruits alone and feeling peaceful while basking in the sun.
Male protagonist, you are so in love with Baby Xiaoyun [Lop-eared Rabbit Head]
Baby Xiaoyun is also cute when he loses his temper [lop-eared bunny head]
Why do I always describe the heroine's face? I'm visually exhausted.
Who could this man in white be? [Question mark]
The past of the male protagonist is so miserable. After reading the previous article, I thought he was just not favored, but I didn't expect it [crying] [crying]
Why is it coming to an end? [Afraid] [Afraid] I thought a new chapter had started. [Crying] [Crying] It's not enough.
The timeline is a little confusing, and the implementation of some settings feels like the writing is not strong enough, but overall it is a good article.
Finished reading! I really like the setting of this book! It smells so good! Come on! Looking forward to producing more delicious meals! [Star Eyes][Kiss]
Ending with flowers🎉Xiaoxiao and Pei Zhen want to be happy forever! The pace is quite fast, the author's writing is flawless, and the male and female protagonists are very well designed. I like this type of male protagonist [kiss]
Who does He like? Why was he so kind to Zhu Wanyue before? Is he her brother?
I really want to see mature big sister × puppy
Please give me a double update [crying] I never follow unfinished articles. It's too painful to follow up, but this is this one. I really like it. I wanted to save it and read it in one go when it's finished, but I really can't help it [crying] [crying] [crying]
I'm looking forward to it. I wanted to save up and read it together, but unfortunately I just couldn't help it. [Kiss] Is this a long novel?
Isn't it the tenth day? It took seven days to travel and three days to stay [question mark]
Is there a sequel to the show [Spreading Flowers] [Spreading Flowers] [Let me be healthy]
Just serve the heroine's baby like this [Star Eyes]
Baby Xiaoyun is so handsome
I've finished reading it. Although the story is complete, I still want to see more of [Star Eyes] and the second half feels a bit fast-paced. I really like the author's description of Baby Yun. Although he has encountered many things, the author did not exaggerate the suffering in order to write about "tragic". On the contrary, he writes that Baby Yun has a lot of love: Aunt, Master, Senior Sister and Brother, Pei Zhen... It is these loves that have raised such a good, strong, and kind Baby Yun, giving her the courage and strength to keep moving forward. In fact, they all reflect the author's full love for the role of the heroine [Red Heart] The author is willing to use his heart to write many highlight moments of the heroine, which I personally think is really rare [Crying] The male protagonist is also very good, very coquettish, and has perfect service awareness [lop-eared rabbit head] There are also some very cute supporting characters, the master sister and senior brother, they are so cute, the master family is really warm and cozy [hug] The group portrait scenes are very well written! I like the setting of four women saving the world in the article, and there are no vicious female characters with facial expressions. I really like the author's little thoughts [Let me be healthy] There is also Shizun and Xiao He. Although it is good to leave blank space, I really want to see the story of the mature sister and the puppy~ However, the timeline is a bit vague. When did Xiao Yun and Xiao Pei meet in the previous life, when did they meet again, and they fought for more than ten years. When did they end up in Cold Mountain? How old is the heroine when she is reborn... Because in theory, if Xiao Yun comes out of the Immortal Sect and experiences for half a year, it will be the time when Xiao Pei was imprisoned in Cold Mountain in her previous life. If we push forward, Xiao Yun should have known Xiao Pei before he was reborn, and they have been fighting for a long time, and not just at the Tide Banquet, right? In future works, the timeline can be written more clearly. I have already collected the next one. I like Sister × Puppy. Looking forward to it~
The hostess' door is so warm [Star Eyes]
It was sour and sweet in the previous life😭
I especially like it. I have to keep writing, otherwise it will be difficult for me to live in a literary desert [crying]
I really like watching the emotionally insensitive heroine [rabbit head with lop ears] [dog head holding rose]
The heroine's baby is crazy about provoking virgins ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh [lop-eared rabbit head]
The author will update soon! ! ! It's not enough [please please]
I really like how the author wrote about the heroine picking fruits alone and feeling peaceful while basking in the sun.
Male protagonist, you are so in love with Baby Xiaoyun [Lop-eared Rabbit Head]
Baby Xiaoyun is also cute when he loses his temper [lop-eared bunny head]
Why do I always describe the heroine's face? I'm visually exhausted.
Who could this man in white be? [Question mark]
The past of the male protagonist is so miserable. After reading the previous article, I thought he was just not favored, but I didn't expect it [crying] [crying]
Why is it coming to an end? [Afraid] [Afraid] I thought a new chapter had started. [Crying] [Crying] It's not enough.
The timeline is a little confusing, and the implementation of some settings feels like the writing is not strong enough, but overall it is a good article.
Finished reading! I really like the setting of this book! It smells so good! Come on! Looking forward to producing more delicious meals! [Star Eyes][Kiss]
Ending with flowers🎉Xiaoxiao and Pei Zhen want to be happy forever! The pace is quite fast, the author's writing is flawless, and the male and female protagonists are very well designed. I like this type of male protagonist [kiss]
Who does He like? Why was he so kind to Zhu Wanyue before? Is he her brother?
I really want to see mature big sister × puppy
Please give me a double update [crying] I never follow unfinished articles. It's too painful to follow up, but this is this one. I really like it. I wanted to save it and read it in one go when it's finished, but I really can't help it [crying] [crying] [crying]
I'm looking forward to it. I wanted to save up and read it together, but unfortunately I just couldn't help it. [Kiss] Is this a long novel?
Isn't it the tenth day? It took seven days to travel and three days to stay [question mark]
Is there a sequel to the show [Spreading Flowers] [Spreading Flowers] [Let me be healthy]