I finally got rid of the life of leaving a child behind and traveled back to China to find a job. Unexpectedly, it was a bad year and I met some unkind people. The first house I rented when I returned to China was upstairs from my ex-wife's sister.
He just rented the apartment upstairs from his ex-wife's sister's house, but then he got drunk again and knocked on the wrong door.
You Qinian:. . .
Her eyes went dark and closed, fearing that when she woke up she would see her being thrown into the toilet by her ex-wife's sister and being scolded.
I finally opened my eyes carefully and found myself sitting in a junior high school classroom, next to my junior high school version of Xiaotuanzi's ex-wife.
You Qinian:?
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People say that adolescence is like a heavy rain. For the first time, You Qinian thought that her rainy season stopped at the age of 15. Later, she thought that her rainy season stopped at the age of 20.
The first time the rain stopped, she decided to love Jian Zhiyi.
The second time the rain stopped, she decided to hate Jian Zhiyi.
But in the end she discovered that the rain never stopped.
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Jian Zhiyi doesn't know how to love.
She is arrogant, cold, and mean, and treats good people like dogs.
Jian Zhiyi doesn't know how to love.
There are too many things she wants in her life, ideals, freedom, and romance, all of which are more important than love.
Jian Zhiyi doesn't know how to love.
But the puppy she picked up cried and begged her to love her.
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The protagonists are not perfect, they all have flaws, don't learn from them.
The front is a dog-like little sun, the back is a sickly girl, the front is a free and easy pretty girl, and the back is a cold beauty.
Note: The coldness here refers to calmness and inner indifference as a person. Sister Jian's external personality is not cold and even a little out of touch.
Demining: The protagonist's family background setting includes an older brother who is also gay (but personally I don't think it is a bl and a sub-CP, it serves as a background board)
The protagonists' personalities have changed greatly, and the story of sweet and sour reunions
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The ending is rushed, starting from Chapter 25, there is a mixed first-person and third-person if line
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(kneel down)
I was heinous for interrupting the update for a long time and then finishing it in a hurry... I accept all criticisms. Here are some of my explanations (but explanations cannot cover up my fault and I am really sorry for everyone):
The outline of this article as my signature essay was actually not perfect. It was the kind of thing that I just had to write after I passed the signature in a daze. At that time, in order to keep up with the daily update, I made it up every day with my eyes open. So after the 25th chapter, I successfully ran into a situation that I could never get back... It felt unsatisfactory, so I originally thought about deleting all chapters 25-29... Then I was horrified to find that the published chapters can only be modified but not deleted...
Then a lot of things happened in the real world some time ago. After I stopped updating, I tried to rewrite the text after chapter 25. It turned out that I couldn't write the funny and light-hearted words before. And when I looked back at the previous articles, I found that my writing had problems such as fragmented characters, outrageous plots, interspersed with unnecessary moans, youthful pain, etc. If I had to bite the bullet and write it down, it would feel like I was just serving more disgusting dishes and forcing everyone to eat them.
The only good thing is that my protagonists, at least in the previous plot, got HE, and I, I, I don't have to feel so guilty (kneel down to apologize again), so maybe I can only finish it until day 24 (I'm really sorry).
In fact, the outline originally planned later was actually quite outrageous, so I took out the part that I wanted to write the most and made it into chapters 25-30 into an if line of several thousand words (which is completely out of line with the previous one). If there are still babies who don't mind it, you can read it (I have such a big face...), Which is a little atonement (kneel down).
Concept: There are too many connections between people and the world, and love is often the strongest link.
Reader comments
Please, my dear, please write more now, I really want to see them continue to be happy [poor] [poor] [poor] please
The moment I heard her sing, it was completely like the lyrics "You are electricity, you are light, you are the only myth!"
Please, my dear, please write more now, I really want to see them continue to be happy [poor] [poor] [poor] please
The moment I heard her sing, it was completely like the lyrics "You are electricity, you are light, you are the only myth!"