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Double strength | Love grows over time | Sickness | Battle damage | Sweet abuse
[Strong fishing newcomer x cold-faced self-guided leader]
Former intelligence analyst Yue Fu came to Fengling City Bureau, planning to become a peaceful newcomer.
Before even reporting in, he was labeled a "vase" by his immediate superior, Lu Yun.
Everyone in the city bureau knew that Lu Yun was cold and decisive, and was known as the tough captain. She hated people coming to her team to brush up her qualifications.
Until the scene of the mission, the "newcomer" kicked the suspect three meters away with his flying legs, and made headlines to clearly reveal the blind spots in the case.
Lu Yun: It seems that I made a mistake.
Yue Fu took advantage of the situation and pretended to be a well-behaved newcomer, giving out milk tea and assists, doing everything properly, just to reduce the sense of presence.
Lu Yun scolded her with a cold face, "Stop doing this in the workplace." Then he turned around and convinced himself: Is she interested in me?
Wait until Lu Yun has enough 800 tricks to coax people under the same roof to express his feelings.
Yue Fu looked confused: Office romance? The leader is a very good-looking person, but he is not very smart.
Bodies dumped on rainy nights, two corpses in a mansion, a woman living alone disappeared... A series of major cases followed one after another, and the edges of each file were stained with traces of the fingertips of the moon, which was her unwillingness to insist on the truth.
Everyone wonders why a seemingly inconspicuous newcomer can always break through the fog at a glance.
No one knew that Yue Fu set foot in Fengling for another answer buried in the file.
Lu Yun knew that she was not simple. She would catch this pearl that fell deliberately and never let it go.
-New article has been opened. Emotional flow-
Weakness｜Agreement｜Love grows over time｜She runs away and she chases her
[Poverty picks up the kind-hearted little bitter gourd × the bright-faced but cold-hearted bad woman]
Mu Guang quit his high-paying job due to health reasons and interviewed for an all-female company that never worked overtime.
Ji Zhican glanced at it and said, "It's very beautiful. Let's keep it."
On her first day at work, Ji Zhican bought her coffee.
Mu Guang took it, turned around, and threw it into the trash can.
Everyone says that Director Ji is a good boss with high salary, good treatment and never treats his employees badly.
But Mu Guang saw through the indifference under her smile and saw her true arrogance.
Ji Zhican accidentally looked at Mu Guang in the conference room.
Her social instinct was buzzing: "Muguang is interested in me..."
Not long after, Mu Guang slapped a piece of agreement on her desk.
In black and white, they only talk about desires, not feelings, and don't interfere with each other.
Ji Zhican smiled: Interesting...
The first day Director Ji moved into Mu Guang's small house, "Why don't you even have a mouthwash cup?"
Mu Guang said coldly: "Use your hands."
Ji Zhican thought to himself: How can a person have two faces in bed and under the bed?
In the first week, Mu Guang asked Director Ji, who had never touched Yang Chun Shui, to wash the dishes. His only two jobs were gone.
In the first month, Ji Zhican started washing Mo Guang's underwear.
In the second month, Ji Zhican wanted to introduce Mu Guang to his friends.
In the third month, Ji Zhican was locked out.
In the fourth month, Mu Guang rejected Ji Zhican's confession and unilaterally terminated the agreement.
In the fifth month, Mu Guang resigned without leaving a single word and took only a bank card with him.
All Ji Zhican's love and unwillingness turned into overwhelming anger. She went crazy and went to Mu Guang, speaking like a knife: "Why are you pretending to be noble? Isn't it just for money? You give me a price, I can afford it!"
Under the gaze of red eyes, Mu Guang slowly unbuttoned his buttons and said, "Twenty thousand per night."
Ji Zhican fled in embarrassment and vowed to scrape Muguang out of his flesh and blood.
Three months later, she found a bank card in the book left by Mu Guang.
Soon, Ji Zhican realized that every time she approached and showed her kindness, it was Ling Chi towards Mu Guang...
Intention: There is true love in the world
Reader comments
Damn, have you been attending a lot of banquets recently?
May they always be happy!
[Please] [Please] It's so beautiful, I can't stop reading it. I fell in love with my wife's writing and I'm looking forward to the next one [Prick-eared Rabbit Head] [Prick-eared Rabbit Head]
This is stuck, what's next [crying]. Anyway, congratulations on finishing it, and I will follow the article all the way to the end. The author's writing is very good. Although it is quite cruel, I have to say that it is very realistic. Some of the phenomena written in the article do reflect the cruelty of the current society and are caused by various reasons. Not very good at expressing myself in words, I said everything I could think of at the moment. I can only say that it can only be understood but cannot be expressed in words. Everyone has different feelings after reading the article. I think those who understand will naturally understand without explaining too much. I hope you can keep writing. Although this type of subject matter is niche, I really like reading it. I would like to make a small suggestion and write an article later. Is it possible to arrange more emotional scenes and make the interactive sessions sweeter? This book really tortured me, but luckily the ending was good. This is the first time I have written such a long story, and I gained a lot of insights after reading it. Keep up the good work and look forward to new works [Come on]
"Guang Chun didn't dare to say anything." This is a big bug for the author~
Although, can you not put all the suffering on one of the heroines in the future? Don't write for the sake of suffering, write for the sake of hope. Without hope, all suffering is meaningless.
After reading it for a whole week, I finally finished it. As a bookworm who has been reading for more than 20 years, this is the first time I have the desire to comment. I think this is also the unique charm of the author. However, after all, it has been more than a year since this article was updated. I am not sure if the author still pays attention to the comments here, but some words are uncomfortable in my heart, so after thinking about it, it is better not to spit it out! Next, I will comment from three points: plot, emotion and personal feelings. Friends who don't like it will automatically skip it. I don't want to argue with others. I have actually thought about using this old account to comment for a long time. The atmosphere in the circle is so bad now that it makes people feel uneasy to say anything. It is a very bad phenomenon. I only hope it can be improved in the future.
Let's get back to the books! First of all, from the plot point of view, the overall writing is smooth and the logic is quite strict. Especially the process of investigating the case is so riveting that it makes people want to stop. It is a breath of fresh air in the Lily Book List, which generally prefers sweet and mindless stories, and it was also the motivation that ultimately supported me to watch the finale. Therefore, no matter what, the most important cornerstone that supports the author is still his writing style and storytelling ability. On this point, I will not be stingy with praise. The author does write very well. In time, he may not be able to become a popular writer. However, I just read the last chapter and saw that the author wrote that the first two cases had outlines, but not the later cases, so I understood. No wonder the later cases were all "off track". In my personal opinion, writing novels is different from writing documentary literature or criminal investigation notes, especially today when younger readers are reading. In addition to conveying those sad emotions and painful pictures, you also need to use your characters to make readers believe that everything will be good. But as I commented in the middle, I can't see any signs of good. Admittedly, if this is a piece of documentary literature, I think the plot is spicy and flavorful. But as a novel, I think the author is too focused on conveying his own thoughts and opinions and ignores the readers' own feelings. This is a very terrible mistake. Moreover, many cases are too long, there are too many characters, the writing is a little lacking, and the emotional lines interspersed in the middle are not so delicious, making it difficult to attract many readers. Although the author always says that he does not rely on writing to make a living, of course, I understand this, but now that I have signed the contract, I think many people have reminded the author of this along the way, and I hope it will still attract attention.
In addition, there are still problems with character creation. Just like another sister in the comment area said, author, you are too 'biased'. For Yuebushi, you spend 120% of your efforts on shaping it. She has a miserable childhood, a beautiful youth, friends, family, thoughts, past, entanglements, and sufferings. This is nothing for character creation, and is even too full. But Lu Yun, in my understanding, she is very important to Yue Fu, but we know nothing about her either from Yue Fu's perspective or from the reader's perspective. Lu Yun also grew up in Fengling City, but there is not a single friend of hers in the whole story (Zhong Miao is not counted, they have not been close to each other), and the existence of her family is only to highlight Yue Fu's tolerance and kindness... From this point of view, it seems that Lu Yun is just a projection of Yue Fu, just like Yue Zhao said to Yue Fu when she first met Lu Yun, "This looks like your type." Yes, Lu Yun is like a person who fell from the sky and was carved out according to Yue Fu's preferences. After reading the whole book, I can't even feel Lu Yun's emotions. Does she have friends? Does she have any hobbies? Why does she like Yue Fu? Will she be angry? None of these, I only know that Yue Fu is painful, sad, and needs to be accommodated, but love itself is not constituted in this way, especially for Lily novels, readers come to see two gentle girls supporting each other and loving each other, rather than traditional male and female romance novels In that way, the male protagonist is always portrayed as the one who is infinitely tolerant of the female protagonist. In this article, Lu Yun is the existence of the traditional male protagonist. She is tolerant and can say "okay", "ok" and "do you want to", but I just feel sad when I look at it. If two people love each other like this, it is better to separate. From this point, it can be extended to the author's shaping of emotional lines.
I saw the author's comments to other readers, saying that he wanted to portray Yue Fu as not needing love to be nourished, and that she was independent and self-aware. This is true in itself, but after reading the whole article, I didn't feel Yue Fu's so-called "unnecessary", but "too much need". For example, the author portrayed Yue Fu to hide and cry secretly, and Lu Yun took the initiative to discover him every time. But - Yue Fu and I have similar personalities. What does hiding and crying really mean? If it were me, when I was really sad, I would hide in a place where I thought no one could find me, and digest it alone. I would not spread my emotions to anyone, nor would I let my emotions affect my life, including eating, dressing, etc. This is the real "no need". But Yue Fu obviously needs it. She is extremely entangled inside, and her inner emotions will affect her life outside. It is emphasized many times throughout the article that Yue Fu doesn't like to eat and can't eat. She obviously has serious emotional problems and is not an 'independent' person. She needs someone to take care of her, someone to accompany her, someone to tolerate her. How can this be considered 'unnecessary'?
Let's talk about the shaping of Lu Yun from here. Lu Yun graduated from the military academy and worked as a police officer for many years. Her character has changed a lot. She had a relatively stable childhood and a stable youth. Before she met Yue Fu, her life was ordinary and very stable. The conflict with her mother was just a faint thorn in the side, and she could always remove it if she wanted to. So Lu Yun is the one who really doesn't need love to raise her. On the contrary, she can even raise Yue Fu through love. But this was too much of a sacrifice for her. She loved Yue Fu deeply and was willing to sacrifice everything for Yue Fu. However, I felt sorry for her, as if I was watching a friend who didn't live up to her expectations become a love brain. This relationship made her lose her subjectivity and herself. Since they got together, Lu Yun's life has only been Yue Fu. They work together and live together. I can't see Lu Yun's shining point (so is this the reason why the saying goes don't have office romance, hahaha). Even at the end, I didn't agree with them being together. Yue Fu's soul has been broken, and part of it followed He Zhen (this part is even more speechless. I understand what the author wants to write and express, but the characters all appear for the needs of the plot. Her death is completely unnecessary, or in other words, it can be replaced in other timelines and other expressions. Way...), Part of it follows her grandma, and part of it follows her father. She has no ability - at least not at this stage. She cannot repair herself. An unhealthy soul is not worthy of love. She has no ability to love and can only bring down two people, so I said it is better to separate.
Overall, I think it's quite remarkable. A real work can have plot lines and emotional lines in parallel. Even if it is a traditional emotional article, it does not mean that it is easy to write only about romance. On the contrary, articles that are only supported by emotions are the most difficult to write. If you write too much, you will feel tired, and if you write too little, it will be empty. I haven't read the author's subsequent articles, so I don't know what the style is now, but just for this article, there is still a lot of room for improvement. But in the current market, there are really very few authors who are willing to think, and even fewer who can make readers think. If the author also writes criminal investigation articles, I will be willing to continue reading, and look forward to further progress!
I look forward to Lily Criminal Investigation writing getting better and better! When I looked at it later, I always felt that it was a mess and I didn't quite understand it [laughing and crying]. The turning point of the emotional line would be a little abrupt and not a very smooth transition. I look forward to writing better and better in the future~~
Finally saw Tiantian [Let Me Kangkang], write more
Big brother, you came out [crying], you promised not to torture me, ah, I want to send you a knife [heartbroken], my heart is stuffed [cracked]
It's been tortured since then [cracked], it's sweeter to write the extra story in big words [crying]
I have finished reading Miguang and Guanpo. As a lover of criminal investigation films, I really hope that Lily Novels can also write high-quality criminal investigation articles. The case descriptions in the two articles were really the only motivation for me to read the whole article. Although the two articles relied a little too much on the analyst, one of the heroines, to solve the case, I have to say that the cases were indeed wonderfully written, and the interlocking links made it impossible to stop reading. Other than that, I was really frustrated by the love scenes. Miguang's disregard for Xiaoman's body and the lack of trust and understanding between the protagonists every time made me question why they were together. The details of their relationship couldn't convince me that they loved each other. Both articles describe many times that Gong doesn't understand Yu at all, so why are they still together? Since they don't understand each other, except that they are the heroines and the author set them up to be together, there is nothing to prove that they love each other.
I don't know if the author has ever been in love, but good partners can support each other and trust each other. When Lu Lan and Yue Fu fall in love, both of them should be greater than 1, instead of Yue Fu alone changing from 1 to 2 and Lu Lan only changing from 1 to 0.5. I believe that the captain of a criminal police brigade will not be useless and will not sit still and wait for death. He can only rely on Yue Fu to give the direction of investigation. At that time, I saw that both of them were very skilled, and I imagined that they would subdue the suspect and show off their skills together or become each other's backing. Unfortunately, at the end of the case, Lu Lu could only watch Yue Fu fight against the enemy alone and was unable to do anything. I think the author's preference is too much. All the highlights and all the sufferings are borne by Yue Fu alone, but Lu Lan is Yue Fu's lover, and she must be willing to bear it, not suffering but hope. As I commented before, don't write for the sake of suffering, write for the sake of hope. If suffering has no hope, then suffering is meaningless. Yuefu and Xiaoman have suffered so much, and they are both tough and don't need anyone to save them. However, as their partners, Captain Lu and Captain Lin should be the ones who accompany them to the sunshine with hope, instead of trying to prevent them from intervening in the case when they are sick, blindly insisting that Yuefu and Xiaoman are people who need to be taken care of and need to be "managed" under the banner of "I am doing it for you". Two people in love should support each other. Team Lu and Team Lin are not the sun, but should be the courage and support of Yue Fu and Xiao Man on their way to the sun. They should walk hand in hand, not get better by each other's side. The most uncomfortable thing about the whole film is that I didn't see any upward plot. They were stuck in the quagmire for too long. It will pass. They have lovers, companions and faith, and everything will get better. I hope the author can spend more space on this part. I still hope that the heroine will not be caught and tortured again, especially Xiaoman and Yuefu's bodies. Even near the end, they still have low fevers and colds, and are even not healthy. I can't understand such a plot arrangement. It is said that the characters in the novel are the projection of the author. I don't know what happened, but I hope it will get better and stop suffering.
This is the first article that made me feel so aggrieved and unable to stop reading, and it is also the first article that made me want to talk about it so much. This is also the first and second article that the author has just started writing. I really like the way you describe the case, unfolding it layer by layer, slowly laying the groundwork, and then letting the protagonists solve the puzzles one by one. Although a large number of names and too long cases will sometimes cause the situation of "Who is this? Who is this? What happened between them?", But long cases do look very exciting, but they are also really tiring. I hope that if I continue to write about criminal investigation in the future, I can consider shortening the cases and writing a few more, or have a long line interspersed with some related or unrelated smaller cases, which will give a better impression. Your writing is very good. Although there are still many imperfections, I really hope you can continue writing. If you continue to write criminal investigation articles in the future, I will definitely read it again. Come on!
When can I see the new book? Wait a minute~
Finally saw Tiantian [Let Me Kangkang], write more
There are still two chapters to go and it's over, I can't bear to tell you [burst crying]
Damn, have you been attending a lot of banquets recently?
May they always be happy!
[Please] [Please] It's so beautiful, I can't stop reading it. I fell in love with my wife's writing and I'm looking forward to the next one [Prick-eared Rabbit Head] [Prick-eared Rabbit Head]
This is stuck, what's next [crying]. Anyway, congratulations on finishing it, and I will follow the article all the way to the end. The author's writing is very good. Although it is quite cruel, I have to say that it is very realistic. Some of the phenomena written in the article do reflect the cruelty of the current society and are caused by various reasons. Not very good at expressing myself in words, I said everything I could think of at the moment. I can only say that it can only be understood but cannot be expressed in words. Everyone has different feelings after reading the article. I think those who understand will naturally understand without explaining too much. I hope you can keep writing. Although this type of subject matter is niche, I really like reading it. I would like to make a small suggestion and write an article later. Is it possible to arrange more emotional scenes and make the interactive sessions sweeter? This book really tortured me, but luckily the ending was good. This is the first time I have written such a long story, and I gained a lot of insights after reading it. Keep up the good work and look forward to new works [Come on]
"Guang Chun didn't dare to say anything." This is a big bug for the author~
Although, can you not put all the suffering on one of the heroines in the future? Don't write for the sake of suffering, write for the sake of hope. Without hope, all suffering is meaningless.
After reading it for a whole week, I finally finished it. As a bookworm who has been reading for more than 20 years, this is the first time I have the desire to comment. I think this is also the unique charm of the author. However, after all, it has been more than a year since this article was updated. I am not sure if the author still pays attention to the comments here, but some words are uncomfortable in my heart, so after thinking about it, it is better not to spit it out! Next, I will comment from three points: plot, emotion and personal feelings. Friends who don't like it will automatically skip it. I don't want to argue with others. I have actually thought about using this old account to comment for a long time. The atmosphere in the circle is so bad now that it makes people feel uneasy to say anything. It is a very bad phenomenon. I only hope it can be improved in the future. Let's get back to the books! First of all, from the plot point of view, the overall writing is smooth and the logic is quite strict. Especially the process of investigating the case is so riveting that it makes people want to stop. It is a breath of fresh air in the Lily Book List, which generally prefers sweet and mindless stories, and it was also the motivation that ultimately supported me to watch the finale. Therefore, no matter what, the most important cornerstone that supports the author is still his writing style and storytelling ability. On this point, I will not be stingy with praise. The author does write very well. In time, he may not be able to become a popular writer. However, I just read the last chapter and saw that the author wrote that the first two cases had outlines, but not the later cases, so I understood. No wonder the later cases were all "off track". In my personal opinion, writing novels is different from writing documentary literature or criminal investigation notes, especially today when younger readers are reading. In addition to conveying those sad emotions and painful pictures, you also need to use your characters to make readers believe that everything will be good. But as I commented in the middle, I can't see any signs of good. Admittedly, if this is a piece of documentary literature, I think the plot is spicy and flavorful. But as a novel, I think the author is too focused on conveying his own thoughts and opinions and ignores the readers' own feelings. This is a very terrible mistake. Moreover, many cases are too long, there are too many characters, the writing is a little lacking, and the emotional lines interspersed in the middle are not so delicious, making it difficult to attract many readers. Although the author always says that he does not rely on writing to make a living, of course, I understand this, but now that I have signed the contract, I think many people have reminded the author of this along the way, and I hope it will still attract attention. In addition, there are still problems with character creation. Just like another sister in the comment area said, author, you are too 'biased'. For Yuebushi, you spend 120% of your efforts on shaping it. She has a miserable childhood, a beautiful youth, friends, family, thoughts, past, entanglements, and sufferings. This is nothing for character creation, and is even too full. But Lu Yun, in my understanding, she is very important to Yue Fu, but we know nothing about her either from Yue Fu's perspective or from the reader's perspective. Lu Yun also grew up in Fengling City, but there is not a single friend of hers in the whole story (Zhong Miao is not counted, they have not been close to each other), and the existence of her family is only to highlight Yue Fu's tolerance and kindness... From this point of view, it seems that Lu Yun is just a projection of Yue Fu, just like Yue Zhao said to Yue Fu when she first met Lu Yun, "This looks like your type." Yes, Lu Yun is like a person who fell from the sky and was carved out according to Yue Fu's preferences. After reading the whole book, I can't even feel Lu Yun's emotions. Does she have friends? Does she have any hobbies? Why does she like Yue Fu? Will she be angry? None of these, I only know that Yue Fu is painful, sad, and needs to be accommodated, but love itself is not constituted in this way, especially for Lily novels, readers come to see two gentle girls supporting each other and loving each other, rather than traditional male and female romance novels In that way, the male protagonist is always portrayed as the one who is infinitely tolerant of the female protagonist. In this article, Lu Yun is the existence of the traditional male protagonist. She is tolerant and can say "okay", "ok" and "do you want to", but I just feel sad when I look at it. If two people love each other like this, it is better to separate. From this point, it can be extended to the author's shaping of emotional lines. I saw the author's comments to other readers, saying that he wanted to portray Yue Fu as not needing love to be nourished, and that she was independent and self-aware. This is true in itself, but after reading the whole article, I didn't feel Yue Fu's so-called "unnecessary", but "too much need". For example, the author portrayed Yue Fu to hide and cry secretly, and Lu Yun took the initiative to discover him every time. But - Yue Fu and I have similar personalities. What does hiding and crying really mean? If it were me, when I was really sad, I would hide in a place where I thought no one could find me, and digest it alone. I would not spread my emotions to anyone, nor would I let my emotions affect my life, including eating, dressing, etc. This is the real "no need". But Yue Fu obviously needs it. She is extremely entangled inside, and her inner emotions will affect her life outside. It is emphasized many times throughout the article that Yue Fu doesn't like to eat and can't eat. She obviously has serious emotional problems and is not an 'independent' person. She needs someone to take care of her, someone to accompany her, someone to tolerate her. How can this be considered 'unnecessary'? Let's talk about the shaping of Lu Yun from here. Lu Yun graduated from the military academy and worked as a police officer for many years. Her character has changed a lot. She had a relatively stable childhood and a stable youth. Before she met Yue Fu, her life was ordinary and very stable. The conflict with her mother was just a faint thorn in the side, and she could always remove it if she wanted to. So Lu Yun is the one who really doesn't need love to raise her. On the contrary, she can even raise Yue Fu through love. But this was too much of a sacrifice for her. She loved Yue Fu deeply and was willing to sacrifice everything for Yue Fu. However, I felt sorry for her, as if I was watching a friend who didn't live up to her expectations become a love brain. This relationship made her lose her subjectivity and herself. Since they got together, Lu Yun's life has only been Yue Fu. They work together and live together. I can't see Lu Yun's shining point (so is this the reason why the saying goes don't have office romance, hahaha). Even at the end, I didn't agree with them being together. Yue Fu's soul has been broken, and part of it followed He Zhen (this part is even more speechless. I understand what the author wants to write and express, but the characters all appear for the needs of the plot. Her death is completely unnecessary, or in other words, it can be replaced in other timelines and other expressions. Way...), Part of it follows her grandma, and part of it follows her father. She has no ability - at least not at this stage. She cannot repair herself. An unhealthy soul is not worthy of love. She has no ability to love and can only bring down two people, so I said it is better to separate. Overall, I think it's quite remarkable. A real work can have plot lines and emotional lines in parallel. Even if it is a traditional emotional article, it does not mean that it is easy to write only about romance. On the contrary, articles that are only supported by emotions are the most difficult to write. If you write too much, you will feel tired, and if you write too little, it will be empty. I haven't read the author's subsequent articles, so I don't know what the style is now, but just for this article, there is still a lot of room for improvement. But in the current market, there are really very few authors who are willing to think, and even fewer who can make readers think. If the author also writes criminal investigation articles, I will be willing to continue reading, and look forward to further progress!
I look forward to Lily Criminal Investigation writing getting better and better! When I looked at it later, I always felt that it was a mess and I didn't quite understand it [laughing and crying]. The turning point of the emotional line would be a little abrupt and not a very smooth transition. I look forward to writing better and better in the future~~
Finally saw Tiantian [Let Me Kangkang], write more
Big brother, you came out [crying], you promised not to torture me, ah, I want to send you a knife [heartbroken], my heart is stuffed [cracked]
It's been tortured since then [cracked], it's sweeter to write the extra story in big words [crying]
I have finished reading Miguang and Guanpo. As a lover of criminal investigation films, I really hope that Lily Novels can also write high-quality criminal investigation articles. The case descriptions in the two articles were really the only motivation for me to read the whole article. Although the two articles relied a little too much on the analyst, one of the heroines, to solve the case, I have to say that the cases were indeed wonderfully written, and the interlocking links made it impossible to stop reading. Other than that, I was really frustrated by the love scenes. Miguang's disregard for Xiaoman's body and the lack of trust and understanding between the protagonists every time made me question why they were together. The details of their relationship couldn't convince me that they loved each other. Both articles describe many times that Gong doesn't understand Yu at all, so why are they still together? Since they don't understand each other, except that they are the heroines and the author set them up to be together, there is nothing to prove that they love each other. I don't know if the author has ever been in love, but good partners can support each other and trust each other. When Lu Lan and Yue Fu fall in love, both of them should be greater than 1, instead of Yue Fu alone changing from 1 to 2 and Lu Lan only changing from 1 to 0.5. I believe that the captain of a criminal police brigade will not be useless and will not sit still and wait for death. He can only rely on Yue Fu to give the direction of investigation. At that time, I saw that both of them were very skilled, and I imagined that they would subdue the suspect and show off their skills together or become each other's backing. Unfortunately, at the end of the case, Lu Lu could only watch Yue Fu fight against the enemy alone and was unable to do anything. I think the author's preference is too much. All the highlights and all the sufferings are borne by Yue Fu alone, but Lu Lan is Yue Fu's lover, and she must be willing to bear it, not suffering but hope. As I commented before, don't write for the sake of suffering, write for the sake of hope. If suffering has no hope, then suffering is meaningless. Yuefu and Xiaoman have suffered so much, and they are both tough and don't need anyone to save them. However, as their partners, Captain Lu and Captain Lin should be the ones who accompany them to the sunshine with hope, instead of trying to prevent them from intervening in the case when they are sick, blindly insisting that Yuefu and Xiaoman are people who need to be taken care of and need to be "managed" under the banner of "I am doing it for you". Two people in love should support each other. Team Lu and Team Lin are not the sun, but should be the courage and support of Yue Fu and Xiao Man on their way to the sun. They should walk hand in hand, not get better by each other's side. The most uncomfortable thing about the whole film is that I didn't see any upward plot. They were stuck in the quagmire for too long. It will pass. They have lovers, companions and faith, and everything will get better. I hope the author can spend more space on this part. I still hope that the heroine will not be caught and tortured again, especially Xiaoman and Yuefu's bodies. Even near the end, they still have low fevers and colds, and are even not healthy. I can't understand such a plot arrangement. It is said that the characters in the novel are the projection of the author. I don't know what happened, but I hope it will get better and stop suffering. This is the first article that made me feel so aggrieved and unable to stop reading, and it is also the first article that made me want to talk about it so much. This is also the first and second article that the author has just started writing. I really like the way you describe the case, unfolding it layer by layer, slowly laying the groundwork, and then letting the protagonists solve the puzzles one by one. Although a large number of names and too long cases will sometimes cause the situation of "Who is this? Who is this? What happened between them?", But long cases do look very exciting, but they are also really tiring. I hope that if I continue to write about criminal investigation in the future, I can consider shortening the cases and writing a few more, or have a long line interspersed with some related or unrelated smaller cases, which will give a better impression. Your writing is very good. Although there are still many imperfections, I really hope you can continue writing. If you continue to write criminal investigation articles in the future, I will definitely read it again. Come on!
When can I see the new book? Wait a minute~
Finally saw Tiantian [Let Me Kangkang], write more
There are still two chapters to go and it's over, I can't bear to tell you [burst crying]
It's finally sweet, it's not easy [crying]
When will the pre-collection of Siwa be released?
Happiness 🥰, so complete