CP and character design remain unchanged, entry point and copywriting are fine-tuned
(I made an appointment for a very beautiful cover. I haven't done the art yet, but I can't wait for everyone to see it. I've lightly coded it and put it up first~)
(7.13) The new copy is as follows:
After twenty years of wandering, Kryptonian Christopher Kent finally settled on the blue planet guarded by his adoptive father, and like all his relatives, became a superhero wearing a cape.
He rented a high-rise apartment in Blüdhaven, met friends introduced by Clark, and joined the Titans, a youth superhero organization.
His new life on Earth seems to be orderly and prosperous, except that the workplace will always give the naive young man a head-on blow.
First, when introducing himself, Chris' own superhero codename completely conflicted with that of the most senior senior in the team.
When he went to help with the night patrol, he fell from the sky and accidentally destroyed the trap set by the vigilantes and let go of the key witness.
Not to mention that because of the embarrassment in training and the excessive battle losses during the operation, he received disapproving looks from many bat superheroes.
Chris almost cried: Uncle Clark, the earth is so scary, the workplace is so scary, I really want to go back to Krypton——
What made him even more devastated than the fact that Krypton had exploded was that the people he had offended one after another in the past month were always the same person: the captain of the Titans, Nightwing.
Nightwing is Batman's first disciple. Although Chris has long heard that Nightwing is the easiest to communicate with among the super-miles in Gotham, reality seems to have told him a completely different answer.
For example, in the team, Nightwing is a completely uncompromising dictator. He is mysterious, handsome, and extremely controlling. He never attends dinner gatherings with the Titans at night. He is clearly a human without superpowers, but he almost makes Chris, a Kryptonian, unable to keep up with his actions. And the most terrifying thing is that Nightwing even dares to challenge Batman!
When one day he saw Nightwing punching a shallow hole in the concrete wall, Chris really wanted to cry this time.
So he went home at night, hugged his crush's waist, lay on his elastic thighs, and felt the gentle and considerate comfort of the little policeman. Finally, he couldn't hold it back anymore and started crying about how tough, harsh, serious, and inhuman his "leader" was...
And Dick, Robin, Port Guardian, Titan Captain, Nightwing Grayson, who was about to talk about his secret identity with his crush today, suddenly froze the smile on his face.
Dick began to think about what went wrong with his usual care of new team members...
*Kryptonian Mystery Theater:
Chris: What, you're saying that Dick and Nightwing have the same amazing butts, so they're the same person?
Chris: It's impossible. How could someone be a police officer during the day, lead the Titans at night, be a Nightwing in the early hours of the morning, go to Zhenglian to help out on Saturdays, go to Gotham to put out fires on Sundays, and still want to date me three days a week? He's not Superman!
Note:
1. The original title of the book is "Transformed into a Kryptonite Cub, But Married Young" and "If you have something to say, say it well, don't take out the kryptonite first"
2. 1V1 he.
3. The rest of the cp has been determined to be overly revealing of parents' love. There may be some mention of Kandy or Gemini, but the relationship will not be clear.
4. The copy is not the final version and may still be modified before publication.
Purpose: Heroes deserve happiness
