Working hard on the manuscript!
I'll give you a progress bar, keep playing, and you'll get better and better!
Highlight: System text, no difference in attack and reception, women can wear men.
The main plot line is pretty good, but the love line is relatively small. It may need to be an ending or a side story. I don't know about other authors, it all depends on the plot development.
Motto: Hard work will pay off