Reborn Before Humiliating the Princess of the Enemy Country

I am new to Lily Circle and have little experience. If there are any rude words or inappropriate words that may be offensive, please forgive me. In addition, I have little knowledge and limited knowledge, and my comments are not too fluffy, not very refined, and I am disappointed. Concubine Qian, the daughter of General Dingguo, had her throat choked by a beauty and "died of laughter"? The little princess from southern Xinjiang wanted to avenge her humiliation but was at a loss. She had no choice but to "look at the ocean and sigh". When I first read it, Concubine Qianxiao was a man who was experienced in love affairs, while Jiang Qiyue was a spotless piece of pure white paper, where Concubine Qianxiao could do whatever she wanted. But it wasn't until later that I realized that the two of them were incompatible with each other emotionally. Although Fei Qianxiao was "well-read", she "had very few books when I needed them, and I didn't know the difficulty until I had gone through it." She had no choice but to ask the girl in Hualou after a one-night stand, but she heard nonsense. The behavior that he thought he was responsible for his own impulses turned out to be a humiliation in the eyes of the little princess. So the beginning of the story was a ridiculous misunderstanding. Xu Shi's love is forced, and Xu Shi's love can't be controlled. After three years of getting along, the two of them have developed feelings for each other. In fact, perhaps if Jiang Qiyue had not killed Fei Qianxiao at that time, they would not have had a happy ending. Because Jiang Qiyue in her previous life only thought that the feeling was an illusion, a thought that two people on opposite sides should not have. However, when she really sealed her throat with a sword, she finally faced up to this emotion. Even though she was intertwined with love and hate after her rebirth, love trumped hate in the end. On the contrary, if you have not lost it, how can you cherish it. If she really kidnapped Concubine Qianxiao and paid her back every day, without saying anything else, she would be shy and reticent, and would not be willing to ask if she didn't know how. Even if she really learned it and exercised tirelessly to get a good body, she could only vent her hatred every day, so how could she last long. Ruofei Qianxiao and her eloquent tongue really solved her three-year-old knot, and it was good that the two of them had settled their differences. But Concubine Qianxiao was moved all day long. If Jiang Qiyue didn't tell her, how long would it take for her to understand what the misunderstanding was. In the end, one of them "the chrysanthemums on the east fence are withered, and their pride is gradually bending"; one of them "the candle in the west window is extinguished, and the original intention is gradually resting"; one of them "the thread of love is constantly being cut"; the other is "sorrowed in the heart", and finally - the years have been wasted. Fortunately, God gave them another chance, allowing the destined two people to have a chance to renew their relationship. The writing seems to look at the mountains and dislike the flatness, and the writing is like a stream, where the willows are dark and the flowers are bright. When their relationship improved slightly, the little princess was hurried back to southern Xinjiang. But as the saying goes, "If we are destined to meet each other thousands of miles away, if we are not destined to meet each other, we will not meet each other." Jiang Qiyu discovered the flaw due to a strange combination of circumstances. After Fei Qianxiao was captured and brought back to the palace, she first hid in the Jinzhang Palace under the name of a fox and played with the little princess day and night. However, due to the presence of treacherous ministers, Jiang Qifeng and his mother had to use their bodies as bait to lure the snake out of its hole, causing others to misunderstand. It's just that the author's ending was written in a hurry, and there was still a lot left unexplained before it was finished. First of all, in the last part of the book, the author himself lists many doubtful points, such as why Jiang Qiyue was always in poor health in the palace. Even if the reason was only the incense brought back by Jiang Zhan, her personal maid Liu Guang was always fine without explanation. Also, Jiang Qifeng always excuses the trouble-making Jiang Qiyu. It is also written in the original article that this is not necessarily for Jiang Qiyu's benefit. Secondly, Jiang Qifeng's plot turns too quickly. In Jiang Qifeng's image, when a good person cuts off a bad person, it was expressed by Fei Qianxiao's words, while when she was a bad person, when she cut off a good person, it was changed by her own words, and there is a missing transition in the middle. In fact, all she needs to do is change the attitude of her personal waitress Lu Qiao towards Fei Qianxiao. Because, after Fei Qianxiao suspected that Jiang Qifeng was a villain, she was reading The character in the reader's mind has changed. If she is really a bad person at this time, her maid should always treat Fei Qianxiao at all times, but if her waitress is more respectful to Fei Qianxiao, there will be some unpredictable feelings, and she will not be too sudden and blunt when she cleans up her innocence later. (However, considering that Jiang Zhan's people explained later in the article have been able to infiltrate into the Western Regions, it can be seen that his power is not ordinary. Therefore, it may be unrealistic to imply that Jiang Qifeng is good or bad through the attitude of the maid. Therefore, the above can be regarded as I did not say anything) Third, Shi Yunshang was mentioned in the article, saying that she brought weapons into the city, possibly intending to rebel. However, at the end of the article, it was said that she abandoned the pass and might cause trouble in the Xicheng court. Later, it was said that Jiang Zhan was the one who caused trouble in the Western Regions, and then Shi Yunshang was forgotten. (I think that since Shi Yunshang was an old subordinate of General Fei and was a bit "rigid" in her previous life, it would be enough to ask her not to fight to the death for Northern Qi. However, an uprising is really impossible, so she probably went to find He Qin, Ah Qiao and the others) Fourth, I think the author needs to revise the most! That is the last chapter - the wedding. "Book of Rites" says that the ritual of combining the Nin and the Nin began in the Zhou Dynasty. When getting married, the husband and wife should "share the food together and the Nin and drink the wine together", and also pay attention to "refining the bitterness and drinking the sweet wine", which means sharing the joys and sorrows. When I saw that the wine was spicy, I thought Fei Qianxiao had changed the wine and something was going to happen. (Of course, this is fictional history, so forget it if the teacher doesn't want to change it.) But no matter what, the description of their wedding is too crude! It really shows the beauty of the wordless and the Chinese-style blank space to the fullest. It is quite different from the scene I originally imagined: "Fengluan dances at the Qionglou Banquet, and the stars hang down in the Jade Palace." (Teacher, you must appreciate and appreciate this poem carefully) But if you think about it carefully, this must be the way the teacher wrote it deliberately. After all, "A vajra's angry eyes are not as good as a Bodhisattva's low eyebrows." Instead of expressing as much as possible, it is better to be a little subtle; instead of spitting out everything, it is better to leave a large part for the audience to understand by themselves. Just like the wordless beauty in music written by Bai Juyi - "Don't have sorrow and hatred, silence is better than sound at this time." The previous paragraph "I did many things that were locked by Jinjiang Red" is also similar to this. As Li Shangyin said: "There is no colorful phoenix flying in the body, but there is a clear understanding in the heart." Although the teacher does not give too much description, readers can think of thousands of fragments, which is really brilliant. (Teacher, I praise you sincerely) [Come on]

Have you not finished writing your previous life?

Tied! So beautiful! Like! Come on, boss!

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