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Qiu Yin has a best friend. Although she was born with white chalk in her mouth and was soaked in the aroma of knowledge in her mother's womb, she has always been mediocre. After twenty years of muddling along, she finally grew into an inconspicuous little speck of dust among all living beings. When the wind blows, not even ashes are left behind.
Out of a complex psychology of envy and admiration but also hatred of the inability of iron to become steel, Qiu Yin teased Zuo Yingzhi based on the IQ mean regression theory. The other party couldn't explain it straight, but said angrily: "Who let my sister take away all the high-quality genes? With her as the pillar of support, I will be sorry for myself until I lie down."
At that time, Qiu Yin laughed and scolded her for being heartless, while wondering if Sister Zuo Yingzhi was really as outstanding as she said.
Later, Qiu Yin really met Zuo Jin'er, and he added a definite answer in his heart.
Zuo Yu is bright and majestic. As long as she is here, she will be the most eye-catching one in the crowd.
Zuo Jin'er is gentle and considerate, and those who get along with her are always like a spring breeze.
Zuo Jin'er is so good, so how could she not love her?
Sensitive and aloof Chinese teacher x English teacher who is soft on the outside and cold on the inside, year-round
[Reading instructions]
1. All the characters appearing are female.
2. Pure emotional flow, relaxed and daily-oriented, sweet and not abusive.
3. Any suggestions and comments are welcome.
4. There are too many campus-related contents and are trivial, and the writing is very average, so please be careful when entering.
Purpose: growth; helping each other
Reader comments
Long review of "White Porcelain Crushed Ice"
1. It has been about 5 months since I met "White Porcelain Broken Ice". I originally planned to save it for the summer vacation of 2027 according to my guess about the author's update time (I generally don't follow serialization, this is an exception). However, during the National Day of 2025, I really couldn't hold back my desire to read this book (I really couldn't go back after just one glance), so I started my first reading journey on October 3rd. (This has started a long wait. I always check in for weekly computer classes to see if there are any updates)
When I read a novel, I am used to looking at the title of the novel and the name of the protagonist first (this can be used to guess how much the author attaches importance to the book). When I saw the name "White Porcelain Broken Ice", my first reaction was a more literary and artistic (a more restrained statement, in fact, I really like it) deep understanding of the name. I will describe it below to leave suspense.
As for the introduction, starting from daily life, I create Zuo Yun from Qiu Yin's perspective. It can be said that from the perspective of "I", it makes it easier for us to empathize with Qiu Yin's secret love mood: instead of directly saying "Zuo Yu is very good", Qiu Yin confirms in her heart "she is so good, how can I not love her" (well, yes, seeing this When it comes to sentences, I think Qiu Yin's character is more proactive), the emotional transmission is more direct, and there is more suspense (in fact, the first time I read it, I read the article with the question "Is it really this good?". After reading it, my God, it is really good), and it is the year's upside (we are saved)
When I read it for the first time, I was always amazed by the author's writing style. A good first impression gave me the confidence to watch it a second time. Since then, I have read it for the third and fourth times... And now I am writing a long review. I need to read it again. It is considered the sixth time. (This Jinjiang account was registered in the past few days. I saw it on the website before, so there is no record. I also copied it into a Word document, printed it out with my home printer, and brought it back to school. I am sorry that I printed it without permission. It is only for my own viewing and is not for commercial use.)
After every exam or when I'm worried, reading this always calms me down and allows me to get lost in the article. This time I finally plucked up the courage to write down my feelings about this book, seizing the end of the winter vacation and completing this winter vacation mission. And when I see this book being read by more and more people, even if I am not the author, I feel happy from the bottom of my heart that a good work has been discovered.
Well, I'm done with my feelings (like nonsense). Inspired by the "enemies from all sides" reading method, I will start the "literary short review" session from eight aspects. (This tone doesn't seem right. I can't think of anything else to say, so please just take a look at it. If you feel tired after reading this, please take a rest.)
2. Eight aspects
1. Understanding of "white porcelain crushed ice" (please explain in advance, I don't know if there is any over-interpretation)
The first thing I thought of was the interpretation of porcelain (a bit preconceived). The word "broken" reminded me of the opening of Ru porcelain.
White porcelain, with a gentle base, is like an uncarved original intention. It is the sincerity hidden in Qiu Yin's sensitivity, the tenderness wrapped in alienation in Zuo Nie, and the unadulterated essence of all characters. The beauty of white porcelain lies in its "unconsciousness". It is not as complicated as enamel or as gorgeous as blue and white porcelain, but it carries the traces of time with its pure texture. The core of the story is never a dramatic dramatic conflict, but the purity and tenderness hidden in daily life.
Broken ice, with cracks as lines, is like a unique mark of growth. It is the confusion that Qiu Yin repeatedly asks himself, the anxiety of worrying about gains and losses, the cowardice of not being worthy of the light; the grievance of Zuo Jin'er running away from home, the self-esteem that is firm on his own path, and the tenderness that sees through without telling the truth. What "broken ice" symbolizes is also the difficulties of life, emotional restraint, and confusion of growth - they are not cracks, but lines that make life more real.
The human heart is real because of its cracks. It does not pursue absolute perfection, but accepts the cracks in life. Just like Qiu Yin's recognition of his "trouble" in the article, but later he had a flash of courage, Zuo Jin'er's persistence when he was young was unable to convince himself later. The moon waxes and wanes...
2. Intention (there may be some deviations in understanding)
The article uses daily and delicate narratives as a carrier, with a gentle and profound intention. (The author said that it has not risen to the level of conveying thoughts, but when we read the article, we rarely understand feminism alone. For me, in reading relaxed and everyday novels, It can be seen that the author's thinking about the plight of women is not a specialized, deliberate, abstract description, but from the perspective of clothing sizes, stereotypes, and female authors in textbooks, it is revealed in daily conversations, causing readers to think, at least I really thought about this issue)
This article focuses on the real growth of individuals. People accept their own sensitivity, cowardice and imperfection, and affirm the growth of people who live seriously and move forward steadily. It depicts a measured emotional relationship and shows the gentle friendship between women. It also integrates the understanding of women's real situation, reflects on issues such as body size prejudice, white and thin aesthetics, and gender stereotypes through life dialogue, affirms women's inner strength, and expresses expectations for women's free and equal development. (I will repeat this a little)
In fact, there is more than that, there is also the exam-oriented education mentioned in Chapter 18. The author points out that long-term test-oriented training will form solid thinking and language inertia, causing language expression to deviate from the natural authenticity. He also points out that there are practical problems in domestic English education that emphasize test-taking and neglect practicality, and the content of teaching materials is disconnected from actual communication.
Chapter 25 reveals the problem of hidden gender title bias in language and culture: social habits use masculine titles to honor outstanding women, blurring women's gender identity, and weakening women's independent value in disguise; using masculine generic titles by default in daily expressions, ignoring the rationality of women's exclusive titles, reflecting deep-rooted gender stereotypes; such implicit language biases will subtly solidify social cognition and erode women's gender identity and discourse power. (I have seen them address women as sir before, which is obviously very strange. They also said that this is a sign of respect for them, but real respect is not to "transgender" them, but to allow them to have their own rights)
3. Narrative background (finished, only then did I realize that I wrote too much on the second point, and it also overlapped with the third point. It's okay, I wrote less on the third point)
This article takes the contemporary ordinary high school campus as the core narrative background, and revolves around campus activities, daily studies, exam competitions and other campus scenes. At the same time, based on the background of modern social life, it naturally integrates the current education status, gender concepts, female growth and other practical issues, so that the narrative is rooted in life, with both daily emotions and the flavor of the times.
(If you feel tired after seeing this, please take a rest first)
4. Group portraits of characters (like analyzing characters, just like fish swimming in water)
The characters in the article are not "flat characters" but "round characters". They are not stereotyped with facial makeup, nor are they deliberately elevated to perfection.
Let me first analyze the image of Qiu Yin (in Chapter 15, the author said that he hopes that Qiu Yin's reality does not make everyone feel too uncomfortable. I want to say that you will not feel uncomfortable. The more I read, the more I feel that my character is very similar to Qiu Yin... I will feel the same when reading) Avoid failure, don't Loves to accept challenges, admires strength, has low self-esteem caused by excessive modesty, stays away from lively situations, silently observes how close the backbone of the group gets closer, and suffers internal friction when seeing talents, and pursues like-mindedness (after analysis, I don't know whether I feel sorry for Qiu Yin, or I feel sorry for myself who has a similar personality)
⊙She is serious, down-to-earth, humble and responsible. She often prepares lessons until early in the morning and feels stressed by teaching. She is gentle and delicate, helps Zuo Yu'er and Zuo Yingzhi get out of their emotional lows, and will thank the doorman aunt. Emotionally, at first she was attracted by Zuo Jin'er's excellence and intelligence, with admiration and a sense of distance; as the relationship deepened, she was no longer just obsessed with the other person's aura, but was willing to accept him in all his appearances. This kind of love is restrained, decent and pious. She will carefully prolong the conversation; she will take the initiative to approach but respect the boundaries, and will not be reckless or entangled. From self-doubt to being willing to try for her heart, she shows delicate and firm emotional growth.
Then to the image of Zuo Yu. Zuo Yu'er is bright and majestic, with elegant manners, but at heart he is clear-headed, independent, and sharp-edged. He treats others delicately, considerately, and has a great sense of propriety. In class, she explains clearly and guides well. Facing students who are confused about choosing subjects, she encourages and gives rational guidance, telling students to follow their hearts and abilities. In class management, she is careful and meticulous. She personally accompanies and supervises students during sports events. She quickly straightens out class affairs after classes are divided. She is rigorous and responsible in teaching and class work, but never exerts strict pressure.
⊙Zuo Yuner is not a weak and boneless gentle person, but an independent individual who is soft yet strong and has a strong heart. She is gentle on weekdays, but when talking about exam-oriented education issues, she will show rare sharpness and sharpness. She has clear views, firm attitude, and does not follow the crowd. She has independent thoughts and attitude towards life. She will go to Bincheng to ski alone, enjoy the time alone, not dependent on others, and her spiritual world is rich and self-sufficient. In the face of life and work, she is always sober and self-possessed. She has both the gentleness and delicacy of a woman, but also the firm strength that is neither humble nor overbearing, and lives an independent and calm life.
⊙Zuo Jinyi's concern was never publicized, always hidden in the subtleties, protecting the other person's dignity: when he learned that Qiu Yin was teaching a new liberal arts experimental class, he was worried that the students would question the young teacher's ability, so he took the initiative to introduce Qiu Yin in front of the whole class as a "top student of Shanghai Normal University", using his academic qualifications and affinity to establish prestige for Qiu Yin.
⊙I will quote the original text later. (Chapter 7)
"However, children who are worry-free are often not loved by anyone.
Being stamped with the word "sister" means that she should be the more sensible one, take good care of her sister, and accommodate her sister unconditionally. This is a tacit truth that everyone understands. "
"You are young, so you deserve more care." The little Zuo Jian told herself this while looking at her sister who could only crawl around on the ground.
Not good enough, so he deserves more pity. Looking at his younger sister who was being taught by her mother so diligently, the young Zuo Jin realized that she seemed to have once again missed the opportunity to be favored.
But she couldn't hate her sister.
From the time she was just a little bit old, the sister who likes to bab behind her butt when she can't stand firmly, the sister who comes to chirp whenever she experiences joy, anger, sorrow, and joy, the sister who immediately looks to her for support and help when she encounters a problem...
Zuo Jin could not express her resentment to Zuo Yingzhi calmly, but the education she received also prevented her from being disrespectful to the mother who gave her life.
In the end, all grievances can only be digested alone.
However, if the machine is overloaded, it will be overloaded and scrapped, let alone vulnerable people. "
These two paragraphs are completely the truest, softest, and most vulnerable side of Zuo Jin'er's heart. They are also the inner parts of her heart that are rarely revealed in the whole text and do not have any strong shell.
1. She was not born sensible, but was forced to be "sensible". "Children who are easy to worry about are often not loved by anyone." This exposes her current situation: because she is a sister, she has been tacitly expected to accommodate, tolerate, and support her younger sister. She has been tied to the label of "sensible" since she was a child. It is a deep grievance and vulnerability in itself.
2. She clearly saw that she was "not given priority", but she could only convince herself. When she was a child, she watched her younger sister being taken care of because of her young age. When she was a teenager, she watched her younger sister being educated by her mother because she was not good enough. She clearly realized that she would never be the one who was treated specially or loved. But she didn't even dare to be honest about her loss - she couldn't blame her sister or her mother. All the unwillingness, sadness, and loss could only be swallowed and digested by herself. This kind of loneliness with nowhere to talk and can only comfort herself is the softest and most painful part of her emotions.
3. For the first time, she frankly admitted that she would not be able to hold on. The sentence in the article, "If a machine is overloaded, it will be overloaded and scrapped, let alone a fragile person." It was the first time that Zuo Jin admitted from the bottom of her heart: She is not as strong, so calm, and indestructible as she looks. She will also be tired, feel aggrieved, and sometimes she can't bear it anymore.
(This can be considered a response to the introduction above. Enough. I feel sorry for you, because there are children younger than me at home, and the elders always seem to be ignored. I feel the same way here.) (For space reasons, I will escape to the next point.)
5. Emotional line
When I first analyzed the relationship line, I felt that by Chapter 27, the relationship between Qiu Yin and Zuo Jin was not even confirmed as a secret love. After careful analysis, I felt that it must be wrong. I found the key chapters 15, 18, 20
Chapter 15 (a very crucial chapter) titled "Is this love?" Is an in-depth analysis of Qiu Yin's inner world - it is not only a concentrated interpretation of Qiu Yin's character background, but also the key point for his emotional line from hazy to sober. Before this chapter, Qiu Yin's feelings for Zuo Jin'er were hazy and passive--she followed her when she applied for No. 1 Middle School, and relied on her when calling for consultation, but she never took the initiative to examine the nature of this relationship; but after this chapter, her relationship officially enters the sober stage. (I think)
She asked Zuo Yingzhi, "To what extent does the accumulation of good feelings lead to quantitative changes and qualitative changes? Can friendship also have strong possessiveness and exclusiveness?" This can be regarded as subconscious self-confirmation - she has clearly perceived her feelings for Zuo Yingzhi. Love is far more than friendship: there is the possessiveness of "fear of losing", the jealousy of "seeing her walking with Yu Mu", and the throbbing of "extreme joy in every contact". These are the unique characteristics of love, but she just doesn't dare to admit it directly. (Must be)
She repeatedly struggled with "Is her attachment to Zuo Jin'er admiration or love?" "Can she accept Zuo Jin's imperfection?", And even presupposed ten thousand "BE possibilities". This self-denial seemed to be a retreat, but in fact it was not. It was proof of the deepening of the relationship. Only when you really care can you be so worried about gains and losses; only when you are sincere, will you be afraid that the relationship between them will not withstand the polishing of reality.
Chapter 17 Zuo Jin'er asked Qiu Yin, "Do you really want to be rejected by me?" (I can't help but imagine who will confess first in the future... I'm really looking forward to it). A feeling of pleasure swirled in my heart (Zuo Jin'er was coaxed by Qiu Yin like this, I like this atmosphere) and the "What should I do" at the end (I also like this ending)
Chapter 18: Thoughts resonate at the same frequency (I have to quote the original text again)
⊙Zuo Jian looked at Qiu Yin, saw her thin eyebrows slightly furrowed, and then relaxed again in the blink of an eye.
"You might as well be more straightforward when facing others, but if the target is me, I hope you can be more tactful and circuitous, and then... Just follow your heart." (When I first saw this sentence, I thought for a long time who said this to whom)
Of course, Qiu Yin's most anticipated result is that Zuo Jin'er can accept this intention without hesitation, but more than her own feelings, she hopes that the other party can truly "be herself".
When she spoke again, Qiu Yin's eyes were filled with smiles, and her words were narrow-minded: "However, I don't want to make things difficult for you."
⊙ Zuo Qian sighed softly.
"You can't play hard to get" (God knows I was so excited that I jumped up when I watched this, and my mother thought I was crazy)
Chapter 19: Zuo Jin'er's inner thoughts at the end: So, how could they be just ordinary colleagues who have known each other for four months? (I admit that I was shocked when I saw this sentence)
Chapter 20 (key chapter) I think Qiu Yin confirmed that he likes Zuo Quner here.
- The whole process was silent but focused on watching Zuo Nie. Even just looking at the way she raised her face to catch the snow, I felt "extremely lovable". This kind of gaze that "didn't want to miss any moment of her" was a subconscious manifestation of liking her.
- She is no longer only attracted by Zuo Yan's "rational, intellectual and easy-going" aura, but is fascinated by her "occasionally revealed emotional side" - the vulnerability when she is young and the cuteness when she lifts her face to catch the snow. These qualities that are completely different from "perfection", she not only does not reject, but also feels "extremely fond of" (this is not what liking is)
- She no longer struggled with "whether she can accept Zuo Jin's imperfections", but instead developed the courage to "the answer is not important, the key is to be willing to try" - this is the essential difference between Like and Mu Qiang: Mu Qiang is only attracted by the "light", while Like is willing to get close and willing to try and accept even if she sees imperfections. This mentality of "actively letting go of the requirement for perfection" is exactly the change after confirming that she likes.
(Silly me, it turned out that the original text had already mentioned it) "Qiu Yin was not sure whether this could be attributed to the halo effect, but she finally recognized one thing.
The heartbeat is like a glass slipper. The fragile material is doomed to make people feel sad for it, but no one will not be fascinated by its gorgeous appearance.
The sudden glimpse is too late to capture, but it will make people spend tens of millions of seconds unknowingly in the following countless days and nights to relive the thrill of that moment and fantasize about a long-term reunion.
Qiu Yin is not Cinderella. What she wears on her feet is a pair of cheap, ordinary but comfortable fleece cotton boots, but she has truly left a part of herself on the snow.
The snow will melt and the shoe prints will disappear, but once the heart chooses to stay, it will take root there and be difficult to pull out.
Can she really accept Zuo Yu's imperfections?
The answer actually doesn't matter.
The key is——
The courage to try flashed through my mind. "
Chapter 21 (Reconfirmation) Love may be the most sinister thing in the world, it can make sincere people become extremely cunning and hypocritical. Here in Qiu Yin, there is no longer the question of "do you like her", only the worries of "how to get close" and "will there be any results". Her mood fluctuated due to Zuo Yu'er, and she even quietly put "the future with Zuo Yu'er" into her expectations.
6. Image selection (for space issues, I chose my favorite shadow, the glass slipper)
Crystal Slippers (Chapter 20) Crystal slippers make the heartbeat concrete, beautiful and dreamy but fragile, expressing the beauty and confusion of the heartbeat. It contrasts with the ordinary and warm velvet cotton boots, allowing Qiu Yin to lose the fairy tale filter and recognize her true heart.
Shadow (Chapter 21) It creates beauty, brings the distance between each other, and hides the vague expectations in secret love; it also reveals the fragility of this heart. Even if they know it is an illusion, there are still people who are willing to indulge in it to comfort the feelings in their hearts and set off the lingering and melancholy atmosphere of secret love.
(If you feel tired after seeing this, please take a rest first)
7. Author's writing style (finale)
The author's writing style is centered on delicacy, density, coldness and softness, and has both a sense of picture and ideological tension.
1. Vivid imagery: Make good use of imagery to carry emotions. The "crystal slipper" symbolizes the fragility and beauty of heartbeats. The "shadow" coincides with the illusion and closeness of secret love. The homophones of "full mother-in-law" and students' complaints about "physics = mist" make the article vivid and durable.
2. The narrative is sharp but soft: Using daily campus life as a carrier, issues such as gender bias, examination-oriented education reflection, and female growth are naturally integrated into teacher-student interactions and classmates' chats. It does not preach directly, but reveals attitudes in details. For example, the school uniform size dispute and the correction of the title "madam vs sir" are all based on daily life scenes.
3. The sentences are of varying lengths and the rhythm is slow. The description of the scene (snowy scene, morning light on the playground) accurately outlines the picture, depicts the psychology in detail, and the dialogue fits the identity of the characters (the student's vivid complaints, the teacher's gentle exchange), and combines the rigor of written language with the naturalness of spoken language.
4. The details are vivid and the empathy is strong: Capture the micro-expressions and hidden psychology of the characters, such as Qiu Yin's shyness at the tip of her ears, the thoughtfulness of passing tissues from left to right, and the embarrassment of students moving books, making the characters three-dimensional and vivid; the accurate grasp of emotions such as "the grievances of the sensible sister" and "the worries of the secret admirer" can easily arouse the resonance of readers.
5. There will be some knowledge that I have not been exposed to that I can excerpt and learn, such as "Three words and one saying", "Double avoidance of conflict" and "The place of victory in form"
8. Identity of the character (I have a tiger in my heart, I smell the rose carefully)
Last but not least, what I want to appreciate is the identity of the characters. I rarely take the initiative to read campus articles. Why is this happening? I felt it was too boring, but many times I forgot that the first Lily novel I read was a campus novel. Today's novels always portray the protagonists as successful people such as CEOs, movie queens, etc., But after reading so many such books, when I look back at this campus novel, I feel that it is ordinary and flowing. Maybe we are all ordinary people, and the people and things we come into contact with are relatively ordinary. When reading articles, we always want to see things that we have no access to. In the end, we get used to reading about the rich and luxurious, and looking back, the essence of life is to return to the original nature.
There is no unreachable distance between Qiu Yin and Zuo Jin, only the ordinary perseverance given by the teacher's profession: Qiu Yin's seriousness in staying up late to polish lesson plans, the anxiety of first coming to the podium, Zuo Jin's meticulousness when patrolling the classroom, and concentration in correcting test papers; there is no vigorous love and hate, only sympathy on the road together. The profession of teacher is a daily routine that most people are familiar with - there are no twists and turns of grudges between rich and powerful families, only perseverance and small beauty day after day. "White Porcelain and Broken Ice" depicts the ordinary time of two teachers, just like life itself: not all wonderful things have to be earth-shattering. (It seems to be repeated again)
3. Message to the author
I know that you are busy in your daily life, and I wish you all the best and worry-free creation. If you have free time in the future, I hope that we can continue the story of "Yin You" and have more scenes between the two of them, so that we can have another gentle date on campus.
Speaking in human terms: I read the previous comments and found that you, the author, are quite busy. In the days to come, I wish you all the best and be happy every day. I just want to update it when you have time, that is, come back and take a look when you have time. Okay? (God knows how excited I was to see the word count change on February 12th. Move, the result is to revise..., Forget it, it will be good if the teacher comes back) I hope that this work will be seen by more and more people in the future. I recommended this work to several of my friends. After seeing it, one of them said: "Oh my god, it's so beautiful. Why didn't you pinch my neck to read it before?"
Let's talk about it again. The first time I read the author's article was "Duluo Zhidong Xi Ji Ji", which left an impression. Later, I saw the introduction of "White Porcelain Broken Ice" on Weibo. I had this archive in April 25 (I have been paying attention to it). I didn't update it during the summer vacation because I wanted to keep it... In short, I have another treasured author in my collection.
In closing, I would like to make some suggestions to you:
1. In the new year, can we add more "Yin You" rivalry scenes? Teacher Xiaoqiu always stays up late to prepare lessons. She must let the lady take care of her after they are together. She always doesn't pay attention to her health.
2. Do I think there will be too many characters appearing, or will they pave the way for the future? (It doesn't mean anything else, it's just that when reading the article, when characters appear, they will subconsciously think about it)
3. It seems that there is no more... (Oh, I remembered it) I found a few questions about word usage while reading. I am not sure whether it is a clerical error, so I would like to ask: (Is this considered a fault finding)
Chapters 1 and 2: 'Poisonous Mushrooms' and 'Poisoning': Should 'poisonous mushrooms' be 'poisoned'? (Could it be a typo?)
Chapter 10 and 14 'Unlucky Egg': Note: 'Unlucky' is the traditional way of writing, and 'Unlucky' is the common way of writing. Both are acceptable. Just confirm whether it is a clerical error;
Chapter 11 and 18's "no worries" (isn't it okay?)
In Chapter 21, where Zuo Yingzhi and Qiu Yin ate, "Zuo Yingzhi used a silver fork." This should be Zuo Yingzhi, right?
I don't know when you/other readers will see this comment, but I wish you/other readers good morning, good afternoon, and good night. Thank you for reading these little thoughts.
—— Qing Zheng Zhi Shang
(The name has not been changed successfully. You can just call me Qingzheng here. I can't see the layout of the entire comment on my mobile phone. The layout may be a bit messy. Please bear with me.)
I am currently revising the article and optimizing the details. It is unknown how many new chapters will be added [Pigeon] In short, thank you for your support [Red Heart]
I watched it again during the summer vacation and found that it has been almost a year since I caught up with the update last summer. During this period, I still watched it again from time to time. I watched it with gusto every time. I also hope that everything goes well for the teacher's current life. Although I can't update for the time being, I hope everyone in Haicheng No. 1 Middle School can live happily in the parallel world [Spread Flowers]
Hey, happy new year! ! ! Looking forward to your update [Compare Heart]
Happy New Year! New Year, New Autumn! [Rainbow fart][Love eyes]
Today is Teachers' Day [dog head holding roses] [dog head holding roses] [dog head holding roses] I wish all the teachers in Haicheng No. 1 Middle School a happy holiday [spread flowers] [spread flowers] [spread flowers]
Aftertaste. . . The tension of Zuo Qiu is so delicious! 🤤🤤
Watching it again, I feel that the high school life of the girls is really joyful in the midst of hardships. The vigor and vitality of the young people are vividly displayed, and they all have a sense of humor [Dog Head Holding a Rose]
Yes, we are all aware of the irrational phenomena in language, and we are all making progress [Spread flowers]
Teacher Qiuqiu is really tired like this. Teacher Zuo, come and give her a hug [hug][hug][hug]
Hahaha, classmate Xiao Zuo is so cute. He was given cute [love eyes] [love eyes] [love eyes] by the lady. And you really need to be educated to understand this name. The teacher is so awesome! And I think everyone in this book has a sense of humor, and everyone is very cute [Dog Head Holding a Rose]
Everyone is worried about this Zuo Yingzhi [touching head]. It may not look so harmonious but it is still very beautiful [hug][hug]
No more articles to read, the author of Qiuqiu will update soon [Rose]
High school starts so early, come on [rainbow fart]
When I saw Zuo Nian'er sneezing, it was Qiu. I thought she was calling Qiu Yin, and I wondered when they had become so close [laughing and crying]
But it is true that Sister Jin is independent and strong, with great ideas and opinions. This is one of the reasons why she attracts Qiu Yin. But on the other hand, it seems difficult to imagine when she will be tempted. Secret love is just one person's chaos [crying]
There is no fresh white fungus today [crying]
Who is the writer whose words were blocked?
Emen Zuoqiu is an adult group. And Teacher Xiaoqiu is so awkward. Maybe when Zuo Yaner gets enlightened and starts to take the initiative, the progress can be accelerated [covering face and peeking]
Alas, this is indeed a very realistic and real problem. When you are still young, you always have the idea of going out to venture out and have the courage not to hit the wall and never look back. However, as an older relative, I have seen too many real twists and turns and helplessness, so I worry about whether I have the ability to venture alone.
Happy New Year, I'm still waiting~ Come back soon [please]
Today is also a super sweet chapter! This is the tacit understanding of xql. They wear similar clothes and always think of each other no matter what they do.
In fact, I quite understand Teacher Xiaoqiu's struggle, but true love is to love the whole person, clearly seeing your strengths, weaknesses, joys and sorrows, and then still choose to love you. Teacher Xiaoqiu is already very brave [love eyes]
I specially praise Teacher Xiaoqiu alone [cover my face and peek][cover my face and peek]
Long review of "White Porcelain Crushed Ice" 1. It has been about 5 months since I met "White Porcelain Broken Ice". I originally planned to save it for the summer vacation of 2027 according to my guess about the author's update time (I generally don't follow serialization, this is an exception). However, during the National Day of 2025, I really couldn't hold back my desire to read this book (I really couldn't go back after just one glance), so I started my first reading journey on October 3rd. (This has started a long wait. I always check in for weekly computer classes to see if there are any updates) When I read a novel, I am used to looking at the title of the novel and the name of the protagonist first (this can be used to guess how much the author attaches importance to the book). When I saw the name "White Porcelain Broken Ice", my first reaction was a more literary and artistic (a more restrained statement, in fact, I really like it) deep understanding of the name. I will describe it below to leave suspense. As for the introduction, starting from daily life, I create Zuo Yun from Qiu Yin's perspective. It can be said that from the perspective of "I", it makes it easier for us to empathize with Qiu Yin's secret love mood: instead of directly saying "Zuo Yu is very good", Qiu Yin confirms in her heart "she is so good, how can I not love her" (well, yes, seeing this When it comes to sentences, I think Qiu Yin's character is more proactive), the emotional transmission is more direct, and there is more suspense (in fact, the first time I read it, I read the article with the question "Is it really this good?". After reading it, my God, it is really good), and it is the year's upside (we are saved) When I read it for the first time, I was always amazed by the author's writing style. A good first impression gave me the confidence to watch it a second time. Since then, I have read it for the third and fourth times... And now I am writing a long review. I need to read it again. It is considered the sixth time. (This Jinjiang account was registered in the past few days. I saw it on the website before, so there is no record. I also copied it into a Word document, printed it out with my home printer, and brought it back to school. I am sorry that I printed it without permission. It is only for my own viewing and is not for commercial use.) After every exam or when I'm worried, reading this always calms me down and allows me to get lost in the article. This time I finally plucked up the courage to write down my feelings about this book, seizing the end of the winter vacation and completing this winter vacation mission. And when I see this book being read by more and more people, even if I am not the author, I feel happy from the bottom of my heart that a good work has been discovered. Well, I'm done with my feelings (like nonsense). Inspired by the "enemies from all sides" reading method, I will start the "literary short review" session from eight aspects. (This tone doesn't seem right. I can't think of anything else to say, so please just take a look at it. If you feel tired after reading this, please take a rest.) 2. Eight aspects 1. Understanding of "white porcelain crushed ice" (please explain in advance, I don't know if there is any over-interpretation) The first thing I thought of was the interpretation of porcelain (a bit preconceived). The word "broken" reminded me of the opening of Ru porcelain. White porcelain, with a gentle base, is like an uncarved original intention. It is the sincerity hidden in Qiu Yin's sensitivity, the tenderness wrapped in alienation in Zuo Nie, and the unadulterated essence of all characters. The beauty of white porcelain lies in its "unconsciousness". It is not as complicated as enamel or as gorgeous as blue and white porcelain, but it carries the traces of time with its pure texture. The core of the story is never a dramatic dramatic conflict, but the purity and tenderness hidden in daily life. Broken ice, with cracks as lines, is like a unique mark of growth. It is the confusion that Qiu Yin repeatedly asks himself, the anxiety of worrying about gains and losses, the cowardice of not being worthy of the light; the grievance of Zuo Jin'er running away from home, the self-esteem that is firm on his own path, and the tenderness that sees through without telling the truth. What "broken ice" symbolizes is also the difficulties of life, emotional restraint, and confusion of growth - they are not cracks, but lines that make life more real. The human heart is real because of its cracks. It does not pursue absolute perfection, but accepts the cracks in life. Just like Qiu Yin's recognition of his "trouble" in the article, but later he had a flash of courage, Zuo Jin'er's persistence when he was young was unable to convince himself later. The moon waxes and wanes... 2. Intention (there may be some deviations in understanding) The article uses daily and delicate narratives as a carrier, with a gentle and profound intention. (The author said that it has not risen to the level of conveying thoughts, but when we read the article, we rarely understand feminism alone. For me, in reading relaxed and everyday novels, It can be seen that the author's thinking about the plight of women is not a specialized, deliberate, abstract description, but from the perspective of clothing sizes, stereotypes, and female authors in textbooks, it is revealed in daily conversations, causing readers to think, at least I really thought about this issue) This article focuses on the real growth of individuals. People accept their own sensitivity, cowardice and imperfection, and affirm the growth of people who live seriously and move forward steadily. It depicts a measured emotional relationship and shows the gentle friendship between women. It also integrates the understanding of women's real situation, reflects on issues such as body size prejudice, white and thin aesthetics, and gender stereotypes through life dialogue, affirms women's inner strength, and expresses expectations for women's free and equal development. (I will repeat this a little) In fact, there is more than that, there is also the exam-oriented education mentioned in Chapter 18. The author points out that long-term test-oriented training will form solid thinking and language inertia, causing language expression to deviate from the natural authenticity. He also points out that there are practical problems in domestic English education that emphasize test-taking and neglect practicality, and the content of teaching materials is disconnected from actual communication. Chapter 25 reveals the problem of hidden gender title bias in language and culture: social habits use masculine titles to honor outstanding women, blurring women's gender identity, and weakening women's independent value in disguise; using masculine generic titles by default in daily expressions, ignoring the rationality of women's exclusive titles, reflecting deep-rooted gender stereotypes; such implicit language biases will subtly solidify social cognition and erode women's gender identity and discourse power. (I have seen them address women as sir before, which is obviously very strange. They also said that this is a sign of respect for them, but real respect is not to "transgender" them, but to allow them to have their own rights) 3. Narrative background (finished, only then did I realize that I wrote too much on the second point, and it also overlapped with the third point. It's okay, I wrote less on the third point) This article takes the contemporary ordinary high school campus as the core narrative background, and revolves around campus activities, daily studies, exam competitions and other campus scenes. At the same time, based on the background of modern social life, it naturally integrates the current education status, gender concepts, female growth and other practical issues, so that the narrative is rooted in life, with both daily emotions and the flavor of the times. (If you feel tired after seeing this, please take a rest first) 4. Group portraits of characters (like analyzing characters, just like fish swimming in water) The characters in the article are not "flat characters" but "round characters". They are not stereotyped with facial makeup, nor are they deliberately elevated to perfection. Let me first analyze the image of Qiu Yin (in Chapter 15, the author said that he hopes that Qiu Yin's reality does not make everyone feel too uncomfortable. I want to say that you will not feel uncomfortable. The more I read, the more I feel that my character is very similar to Qiu Yin... I will feel the same when reading) Avoid failure, don't Loves to accept challenges, admires strength, has low self-esteem caused by excessive modesty, stays away from lively situations, silently observes how close the backbone of the group gets closer, and suffers internal friction when seeing talents, and pursues like-mindedness (after analysis, I don't know whether I feel sorry for Qiu Yin, or I feel sorry for myself who has a similar personality) ⊙She is serious, down-to-earth, humble and responsible. She often prepares lessons until early in the morning and feels stressed by teaching. She is gentle and delicate, helps Zuo Yu'er and Zuo Yingzhi get out of their emotional lows, and will thank the doorman aunt. Emotionally, at first she was attracted by Zuo Jin'er's excellence and intelligence, with admiration and a sense of distance; as the relationship deepened, she was no longer just obsessed with the other person's aura, but was willing to accept him in all his appearances. This kind of love is restrained, decent and pious. She will carefully prolong the conversation; she will take the initiative to approach but respect the boundaries, and will not be reckless or entangled. From self-doubt to being willing to try for her heart, she shows delicate and firm emotional growth. Then to the image of Zuo Yu. Zuo Yu'er is bright and majestic, with elegant manners, but at heart he is clear-headed, independent, and sharp-edged. He treats others delicately, considerately, and has a great sense of propriety. In class, she explains clearly and guides well. Facing students who are confused about choosing subjects, she encourages and gives rational guidance, telling students to follow their hearts and abilities. In class management, she is careful and meticulous. She personally accompanies and supervises students during sports events. She quickly straightens out class affairs after classes are divided. She is rigorous and responsible in teaching and class work, but never exerts strict pressure. ⊙Zuo Yuner is not a weak and boneless gentle person, but an independent individual who is soft yet strong and has a strong heart. She is gentle on weekdays, but when talking about exam-oriented education issues, she will show rare sharpness and sharpness. She has clear views, firm attitude, and does not follow the crowd. She has independent thoughts and attitude towards life. She will go to Bincheng to ski alone, enjoy the time alone, not dependent on others, and her spiritual world is rich and self-sufficient. In the face of life and work, she is always sober and self-possessed. She has both the gentleness and delicacy of a woman, but also the firm strength that is neither humble nor overbearing, and lives an independent and calm life. ⊙Zuo Jinyi's concern was never publicized, always hidden in the subtleties, protecting the other person's dignity: when he learned that Qiu Yin was teaching a new liberal arts experimental class, he was worried that the students would question the young teacher's ability, so he took the initiative to introduce Qiu Yin in front of the whole class as a "top student of Shanghai Normal University", using his academic qualifications and affinity to establish prestige for Qiu Yin. ⊙I will quote the original text later. (Chapter 7) "However, children who are worry-free are often not loved by anyone. Being stamped with the word "sister" means that she should be the more sensible one, take good care of her sister, and accommodate her sister unconditionally. This is a tacit truth that everyone understands. " "You are young, so you deserve more care." The little Zuo Jian told herself this while looking at her sister who could only crawl around on the ground. Not good enough, so he deserves more pity. Looking at his younger sister who was being taught by her mother so diligently, the young Zuo Jin realized that she seemed to have once again missed the opportunity to be favored. But she couldn't hate her sister. From the time she was just a little bit old, the sister who likes to bab behind her butt when she can't stand firmly, the sister who comes to chirp whenever she experiences joy, anger, sorrow, and joy, the sister who immediately looks to her for support and help when she encounters a problem... Zuo Jin could not express her resentment to Zuo Yingzhi calmly, but the education she received also prevented her from being disrespectful to the mother who gave her life. In the end, all grievances can only be digested alone. However, if the machine is overloaded, it will be overloaded and scrapped, let alone vulnerable people. " These two paragraphs are completely the truest, softest, and most vulnerable side of Zuo Jin'er's heart. They are also the inner parts of her heart that are rarely revealed in the whole text and do not have any strong shell. 1. She was not born sensible, but was forced to be "sensible". "Children who are easy to worry about are often not loved by anyone." This exposes her current situation: because she is a sister, she has been tacitly expected to accommodate, tolerate, and support her younger sister. She has been tied to the label of "sensible" since she was a child. It is a deep grievance and vulnerability in itself. 2. She clearly saw that she was "not given priority", but she could only convince herself. When she was a child, she watched her younger sister being taken care of because of her young age. When she was a teenager, she watched her younger sister being educated by her mother because she was not good enough. She clearly realized that she would never be the one who was treated specially or loved. But she didn't even dare to be honest about her loss - she couldn't blame her sister or her mother. All the unwillingness, sadness, and loss could only be swallowed and digested by herself. This kind of loneliness with nowhere to talk and can only comfort herself is the softest and most painful part of her emotions. 3. For the first time, she frankly admitted that she would not be able to hold on. The sentence in the article, "If a machine is overloaded, it will be overloaded and scrapped, let alone a fragile person." It was the first time that Zuo Jin admitted from the bottom of her heart: She is not as strong, so calm, and indestructible as she looks. She will also be tired, feel aggrieved, and sometimes she can't bear it anymore. (This can be considered a response to the introduction above. Enough. I feel sorry for you, because there are children younger than me at home, and the elders always seem to be ignored. I feel the same way here.) (For space reasons, I will escape to the next point.) 5. Emotional line When I first analyzed the relationship line, I felt that by Chapter 27, the relationship between Qiu Yin and Zuo Jin was not even confirmed as a secret love. After careful analysis, I felt that it must be wrong. I found the key chapters 15, 18, 20 Chapter 15 (a very crucial chapter) titled "Is this love?" Is an in-depth analysis of Qiu Yin's inner world - it is not only a concentrated interpretation of Qiu Yin's character background, but also the key point for his emotional line from hazy to sober. Before this chapter, Qiu Yin's feelings for Zuo Jin'er were hazy and passive--she followed her when she applied for No. 1 Middle School, and relied on her when calling for consultation, but she never took the initiative to examine the nature of this relationship; but after this chapter, her relationship officially enters the sober stage. (I think) She asked Zuo Yingzhi, "To what extent does the accumulation of good feelings lead to quantitative changes and qualitative changes? Can friendship also have strong possessiveness and exclusiveness?" This can be regarded as subconscious self-confirmation - she has clearly perceived her feelings for Zuo Yingzhi. Love is far more than friendship: there is the possessiveness of "fear of losing", the jealousy of "seeing her walking with Yu Mu", and the throbbing of "extreme joy in every contact". These are the unique characteristics of love, but she just doesn't dare to admit it directly. (Must be) She repeatedly struggled with "Is her attachment to Zuo Jin'er admiration or love?" "Can she accept Zuo Jin's imperfection?", And even presupposed ten thousand "BE possibilities". This self-denial seemed to be a retreat, but in fact it was not. It was proof of the deepening of the relationship. Only when you really care can you be so worried about gains and losses; only when you are sincere, will you be afraid that the relationship between them will not withstand the polishing of reality. Chapter 17 Zuo Jin'er asked Qiu Yin, "Do you really want to be rejected by me?" (I can't help but imagine who will confess first in the future... I'm really looking forward to it). A feeling of pleasure swirled in my heart (Zuo Jin'er was coaxed by Qiu Yin like this, I like this atmosphere) and the "What should I do" at the end (I also like this ending) Chapter 18: Thoughts resonate at the same frequency (I have to quote the original text again) ⊙Zuo Jian looked at Qiu Yin, saw her thin eyebrows slightly furrowed, and then relaxed again in the blink of an eye. "You might as well be more straightforward when facing others, but if the target is me, I hope you can be more tactful and circuitous, and then... Just follow your heart." (When I first saw this sentence, I thought for a long time who said this to whom) Of course, Qiu Yin's most anticipated result is that Zuo Jin'er can accept this intention without hesitation, but more than her own feelings, she hopes that the other party can truly "be herself". When she spoke again, Qiu Yin's eyes were filled with smiles, and her words were narrow-minded: "However, I don't want to make things difficult for you." ⊙ Zuo Qian sighed softly. "You can't play hard to get" (God knows I was so excited that I jumped up when I watched this, and my mother thought I was crazy) Chapter 19: Zuo Jin'er's inner thoughts at the end: So, how could they be just ordinary colleagues who have known each other for four months? (I admit that I was shocked when I saw this sentence) Chapter 20 (key chapter) I think Qiu Yin confirmed that he likes Zuo Quner here. - The whole process was silent but focused on watching Zuo Nie. Even just looking at the way she raised her face to catch the snow, I felt "extremely lovable". This kind of gaze that "didn't want to miss any moment of her" was a subconscious manifestation of liking her. - She is no longer only attracted by Zuo Yan's "rational, intellectual and easy-going" aura, but is fascinated by her "occasionally revealed emotional side" - the vulnerability when she is young and the cuteness when she lifts her face to catch the snow. These qualities that are completely different from "perfection", she not only does not reject, but also feels "extremely fond of" (this is not what liking is) - She no longer struggled with "whether she can accept Zuo Jin's imperfections", but instead developed the courage to "the answer is not important, the key is to be willing to try" - this is the essential difference between Like and Mu Qiang: Mu Qiang is only attracted by the "light", while Like is willing to get close and willing to try and accept even if she sees imperfections. This mentality of "actively letting go of the requirement for perfection" is exactly the change after confirming that she likes. (Silly me, it turned out that the original text had already mentioned it) "Qiu Yin was not sure whether this could be attributed to the halo effect, but she finally recognized one thing. The heartbeat is like a glass slipper. The fragile material is doomed to make people feel sad for it, but no one will not be fascinated by its gorgeous appearance. The sudden glimpse is too late to capture, but it will make people spend tens of millions of seconds unknowingly in the following countless days and nights to relive the thrill of that moment and fantasize about a long-term reunion. Qiu Yin is not Cinderella. What she wears on her feet is a pair of cheap, ordinary but comfortable fleece cotton boots, but she has truly left a part of herself on the snow. The snow will melt and the shoe prints will disappear, but once the heart chooses to stay, it will take root there and be difficult to pull out. Can she really accept Zuo Yu's imperfections? The answer actually doesn't matter. The key is—— The courage to try flashed through my mind. " Chapter 21 (Reconfirmation) Love may be the most sinister thing in the world, it can make sincere people become extremely cunning and hypocritical. Here in Qiu Yin, there is no longer the question of "do you like her", only the worries of "how to get close" and "will there be any results". Her mood fluctuated due to Zuo Yu'er, and she even quietly put "the future with Zuo Yu'er" into her expectations. 6. Image selection (for space issues, I chose my favorite shadow, the glass slipper) Crystal Slippers (Chapter 20) Crystal slippers make the heartbeat concrete, beautiful and dreamy but fragile, expressing the beauty and confusion of the heartbeat. It contrasts with the ordinary and warm velvet cotton boots, allowing Qiu Yin to lose the fairy tale filter and recognize her true heart. Shadow (Chapter 21) It creates beauty, brings the distance between each other, and hides the vague expectations in secret love; it also reveals the fragility of this heart. Even if they know it is an illusion, there are still people who are willing to indulge in it to comfort the feelings in their hearts and set off the lingering and melancholy atmosphere of secret love. (If you feel tired after seeing this, please take a rest first) 7. Author's writing style (finale) The author's writing style is centered on delicacy, density, coldness and softness, and has both a sense of picture and ideological tension. 1. Vivid imagery: Make good use of imagery to carry emotions. The "crystal slipper" symbolizes the fragility and beauty of heartbeats. The "shadow" coincides with the illusion and closeness of secret love. The homophones of "full mother-in-law" and students' complaints about "physics = mist" make the article vivid and durable. 2. The narrative is sharp but soft: Using daily campus life as a carrier, issues such as gender bias, examination-oriented education reflection, and female growth are naturally integrated into teacher-student interactions and classmates' chats. It does not preach directly, but reveals attitudes in details. For example, the school uniform size dispute and the correction of the title "madam vs sir" are all based on daily life scenes. 3. The sentences are of varying lengths and the rhythm is slow. The description of the scene (snowy scene, morning light on the playground) accurately outlines the picture, depicts the psychology in detail, and the dialogue fits the identity of the characters (the student's vivid complaints, the teacher's gentle exchange), and combines the rigor of written language with the naturalness of spoken language. 4. The details are vivid and the empathy is strong: Capture the micro-expressions and hidden psychology of the characters, such as Qiu Yin's shyness at the tip of her ears, the thoughtfulness of passing tissues from left to right, and the embarrassment of students moving books, making the characters three-dimensional and vivid; the accurate grasp of emotions such as "the grievances of the sensible sister" and "the worries of the secret admirer" can easily arouse the resonance of readers. 5. There will be some knowledge that I have not been exposed to that I can excerpt and learn, such as "Three words and one saying", "Double avoidance of conflict" and "The place of victory in form" 8. Identity of the character (I have a tiger in my heart, I smell the rose carefully) Last but not least, what I want to appreciate is the identity of the characters. I rarely take the initiative to read campus articles. Why is this happening? I felt it was too boring, but many times I forgot that the first Lily novel I read was a campus novel. Today's novels always portray the protagonists as successful people such as CEOs, movie queens, etc., But after reading so many such books, when I look back at this campus novel, I feel that it is ordinary and flowing. Maybe we are all ordinary people, and the people and things we come into contact with are relatively ordinary. When reading articles, we always want to see things that we have no access to. In the end, we get used to reading about the rich and luxurious, and looking back, the essence of life is to return to the original nature. There is no unreachable distance between Qiu Yin and Zuo Jin, only the ordinary perseverance given by the teacher's profession: Qiu Yin's seriousness in staying up late to polish lesson plans, the anxiety of first coming to the podium, Zuo Jin's meticulousness when patrolling the classroom, and concentration in correcting test papers; there is no vigorous love and hate, only sympathy on the road together. The profession of teacher is a daily routine that most people are familiar with - there are no twists and turns of grudges between rich and powerful families, only perseverance and small beauty day after day. "White Porcelain and Broken Ice" depicts the ordinary time of two teachers, just like life itself: not all wonderful things have to be earth-shattering. (It seems to be repeated again) 3. Message to the author I know that you are busy in your daily life, and I wish you all the best and worry-free creation. If you have free time in the future, I hope that we can continue the story of "Yin You" and have more scenes between the two of them, so that we can have another gentle date on campus. Speaking in human terms: I read the previous comments and found that you, the author, are quite busy. In the days to come, I wish you all the best and be happy every day. I just want to update it when you have time, that is, come back and take a look when you have time. Okay? (God knows how excited I was to see the word count change on February 12th. Move, the result is to revise..., Forget it, it will be good if the teacher comes back) I hope that this work will be seen by more and more people in the future. I recommended this work to several of my friends. After seeing it, one of them said: "Oh my god, it's so beautiful. Why didn't you pinch my neck to read it before?" Let's talk about it again. The first time I read the author's article was "Duluo Zhidong Xi Ji Ji", which left an impression. Later, I saw the introduction of "White Porcelain Broken Ice" on Weibo. I had this archive in April 25 (I have been paying attention to it). I didn't update it during the summer vacation because I wanted to keep it... In short, I have another treasured author in my collection. In closing, I would like to make some suggestions to you: 1. In the new year, can we add more "Yin You" rivalry scenes? Teacher Xiaoqiu always stays up late to prepare lessons. She must let the lady take care of her after they are together. She always doesn't pay attention to her health. 2. Do I think there will be too many characters appearing, or will they pave the way for the future? (It doesn't mean anything else, it's just that when reading the article, when characters appear, they will subconsciously think about it) 3. It seems that there is no more... (Oh, I remembered it) I found a few questions about word usage while reading. I am not sure whether it is a clerical error, so I would like to ask: (Is this considered a fault finding) Chapters 1 and 2: 'Poisonous Mushrooms' and 'Poisoning': Should 'poisonous mushrooms' be 'poisoned'? (Could it be a typo?) Chapter 10 and 14 'Unlucky Egg': Note: 'Unlucky' is the traditional way of writing, and 'Unlucky' is the common way of writing. Both are acceptable. Just confirm whether it is a clerical error; Chapter 11 and 18's "no worries" (isn't it okay?) In Chapter 21, where Zuo Yingzhi and Qiu Yin ate, "Zuo Yingzhi used a silver fork." This should be Zuo Yingzhi, right? I don't know when you/other readers will see this comment, but I wish you/other readers good morning, good afternoon, and good night. Thank you for reading these little thoughts. —— Qing Zheng Zhi Shang (The name has not been changed successfully. You can just call me Qingzheng here. I can't see the layout of the entire comment on my mobile phone. The layout may be a bit messy. Please bear with me.)
I am currently revising the article and optimizing the details. It is unknown how many new chapters will be added [Pigeon] In short, thank you for your support [Red Heart]
I watched it again during the summer vacation and found that it has been almost a year since I caught up with the update last summer. During this period, I still watched it again from time to time. I watched it with gusto every time. I also hope that everything goes well for the teacher's current life. Although I can't update for the time being, I hope everyone in Haicheng No. 1 Middle School can live happily in the parallel world [Spread Flowers]
Hey, happy new year! ! ! Looking forward to your update [Compare Heart]
Happy New Year! New Year, New Autumn! [Rainbow fart][Love eyes]
Today is Teachers' Day [dog head holding roses] [dog head holding roses] [dog head holding roses] I wish all the teachers in Haicheng No. 1 Middle School a happy holiday [spread flowers] [spread flowers] [spread flowers]
Aftertaste. . . The tension of Zuo Qiu is so delicious! 🤤🤤
Watching it again, I feel that the high school life of the girls is really joyful in the midst of hardships. The vigor and vitality of the young people are vividly displayed, and they all have a sense of humor [Dog Head Holding a Rose]
Yes, we are all aware of the irrational phenomena in language, and we are all making progress [Spread flowers]
Teacher Qiuqiu is really tired like this. Teacher Zuo, come and give her a hug [hug][hug][hug]
Hahaha, classmate Xiao Zuo is so cute. He was given cute [love eyes] [love eyes] [love eyes] by the lady. And you really need to be educated to understand this name. The teacher is so awesome! And I think everyone in this book has a sense of humor, and everyone is very cute [Dog Head Holding a Rose]
Everyone is worried about this Zuo Yingzhi [touching head]. It may not look so harmonious but it is still very beautiful [hug][hug]
No more articles to read, the author of Qiuqiu will update soon [Rose]
High school starts so early, come on [rainbow fart]
When I saw Zuo Nian'er sneezing, it was Qiu. I thought she was calling Qiu Yin, and I wondered when they had become so close [laughing and crying]
But it is true that Sister Jin is independent and strong, with great ideas and opinions. This is one of the reasons why she attracts Qiu Yin. But on the other hand, it seems difficult to imagine when she will be tempted. Secret love is just one person's chaos [crying]
There is no fresh white fungus today [crying]
Who is the writer whose words were blocked?
Emen Zuoqiu is an adult group. And Teacher Xiaoqiu is so awkward. Maybe when Zuo Yaner gets enlightened and starts to take the initiative, the progress can be accelerated [covering face and peeking]
Alas, this is indeed a very realistic and real problem. When you are still young, you always have the idea of going out to venture out and have the courage not to hit the wall and never look back. However, as an older relative, I have seen too many real twists and turns and helplessness, so I worry about whether I have the ability to venture alone.
Happy New Year, I'm still waiting~ Come back soon [please]
Today is also a super sweet chapter! This is the tacit understanding of xql. They wear similar clothes and always think of each other no matter what they do. In fact, I quite understand Teacher Xiaoqiu's struggle, but true love is to love the whole person, clearly seeing your strengths, weaknesses, joys and sorrows, and then still choose to love you. Teacher Xiaoqiu is already very brave [love eyes]
I specially praise Teacher Xiaoqiu alone [cover my face and peek][cover my face and peek]