The father is an honest man and the delicate young master is fucked
As the youngest son in the family, Ling Luo was frail and the family doted on him.
Until he took his friends to see the world and ran into his former nemesis who got into trouble.
His brother threw him into the village and asked him to reflect.
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Qin Yue, who grew up in the village, doesn't talk much.
Ling Luo met him when he got lost in the forest. The man took him out of the forest without saying a word.
Ling Luo got along with him and found that this man was very spoiled by him, even more so than his family members. When he went to Fangjiewa, this man even praised him for being very energetic.
He had been pampered and raised, and when Qin Yue pampered him, Ling Luo became even more lawless.
Mainly because this person's cooking is delicious.
Cooking is delicious in every sense^ω^
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From the first moment he saw Ling Luo, Qin Yue knew that he was finished.
In his eyes——
Ling Luo stared at people, his face was red and cute.
Ling Luo scolded him, his voice was as beautiful as the sound of nature.
Ling Luo slapped him, well, what came before the slap was Ling Luo's smell, it smelled so good.
Intention: Only by continuous efforts can you get what you want.
Reader comments
The basic characters of the two characters written in large letters are very attractive! A few suggestions (for reference only):
1. In the description, you can use less repetitive tags such as "cool and warm", and use more small movements and details to reflect Yan Baiyu's sense of alienation, so as to avoid the recurrence of the same look;
2. The good feelings between two people can be gradually advanced in layers, and the true mentality of Yan Baiyu slowly breaking through from the flower of the high mountain to Shen Huaian's easy-going appearance will be more convincing.
3. The foreshadowing plot of some passers-by to highlight the characters can be streamlined appropriately, leaving more to the psychology of the protagonist and the rivalry; adding a small amount of conflicts appropriately can further promote the plot of the collapse of the characters.
The overall setting is very interesting, come on!
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Dad, you know, when I saw Xiao Luo and Pan Pan telling her love story that they had omitted 10,000 words in the next article, I felt itchy and unbearable. The spirit of gossip was ignited, but I could only hate that they were deputy CPs and could not dominate the show. The most surprising and happiest thing in the world is that the serial novel I am following is actually a sister novel to it! ! ! Although I met you relatively late, everything was the best arrangement!
To take out the deputy CP in an article and give them a complete story is like coming from an angel! I will follow you to the death! Looking forward to a lot of food production! [Hold the thigh][Hold the thigh][Hold the thigh]
The basic characters of the two characters written in large letters are very attractive! A few suggestions (for reference only): 1. In the description, you can use less repetitive tags such as "cool and warm", and use more small movements and details to reflect Yan Baiyu's sense of alienation, so as to avoid the recurrence of the same look; 2. The good feelings between two people can be gradually advanced in layers, and the true mentality of Yan Baiyu slowly breaking through from the flower of the high mountain to Shen Huaian's easy-going appearance will be more convincing. 3. The foreshadowing plot of some passers-by to highlight the characters can be streamlined appropriately, leaving more to the psychology of the protagonist and the rivalry; adding a small amount of conflicts appropriately can further promote the plot of the collapse of the characters. The overall setting is very interesting, come on! [Sunglasses][Sunglasses][Sunglasses][Lie flat][Lie flat][Lie flat]
Dad, you know, when I saw Xiao Luo and Pan Pan telling her love story that they had omitted 10,000 words in the next article, I felt itchy and unbearable. The spirit of gossip was ignited, but I could only hate that they were deputy CPs and could not dominate the show. The most surprising and happiest thing in the world is that the serial novel I am following is actually a sister novel to it! ! ! Although I met you relatively late, everything was the best arrangement! To take out the deputy CP in an article and give them a complete story is like coming from an angel! I will follow you to the death! Looking forward to a lot of food production! [Hold the thigh][Hold the thigh][Hold the thigh]