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Demining: The protagonist has a plot to change his name, the author's writing is poor, the author himself has a lack of logic
When Jiang Heng was happy to have a baby mother and a younger brother half a month after losing his mother, he finally knew that the world was crazy, completely crazy, and that the crazy little mom and the crazy dad would not go home all day and midnight.
Shen Zhu is also very "desperate". No one told me that his father doesn't come home every day, and "mom" goes out to spread flowers. Although he is given money, he still has to cook his own meals and go to school. I want my one-to-one service! Forget about going to school, why do you have to endure being bullied every day? Mentally retarded aunt and mentally retarded uncle, you still control me every day, do you want to lose face?
After some ideological struggle, the two people accepted their fate.
But in the end, the two of them just wanted to say that if they didn't want to leave a seed, they should take care of Kudang. Why did they have to have an illegitimate child and spread rumors to the real owner? The cheap dad actually believed it.
Jiang: If I hadn't still had my registered permanent residence with you, I would have left long ago.
Shen: I took advantage of the winter vacation to transfer directly to another school, right? Why didn't my aunt help me? ! ! ! !
Jiang: My aunt hasn't contacted me for a long time.
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Intention: Continuous self-improvement