Su Yiqing, who honestly lived a high school jail life in Jinchuan, never imagined that she would be involved in a crazy and unprovoked accident.
With the mentality that if she can live for one day, she will make more money in the world, Su Yiqing joined a certain Sanwu organization to save her life.
Among the passionate warriors, the lazy Su Yiqing seemed out of place.
He knew very well that he was born a crazy egoist, and standing there was God's revenge on the world.
He is outstanding, cunning, profit-oriented, and ruthless. People like him are not worthy of being a good person.
But he does still have some affection and some humanity, and he is too bad to be pure.
So he devoted himself to making trouble for the villain, and went further and further.
He is free, he is happy, he is happy to watch the snipe and the clam fight, and the fisherman will benefit by the way.
He used all his strength to step on the corpses of countless people and climbed up to the 100-meter-high building. The silver blade struck out of the world, cutting open the magnificent and bright things, dispersing the prosperity and ushering in new life.
After all this, the Machiavellian man straightened his sleeves, threw the crown of victory back to the world in a cool manner, changed his mind, and retired.
However, his way was blocked by an attacker he had surpassed.
Su Yiqing (smiling politely): Hi, long time no see.
Liu Yang (full of resentment like a widow who found out her husband was not dead)
A sharp-tongued villain was rendered mute by his beautiful, shining eyes.
Su Yiqing (feeling even more guilty): Hey... Don't cry...
The bad guy knows he is in the wrong, the bad guy is soft-hearted and admits defeat, the bad guy is gentle and coaxing, and in the end, he coaxes himself into a person with red eyes.
The night was long, Su Yiqing's eyelashes trembled slightly, he raised his head with difficulty, and the uncontrollable sobs and moans slipped out from the gap. He stretched out his arms to hold Liu Yang's neck, grinning so hard that he gritted his teeth: "So, it's not serious or serious, and you said you didn't hate me... Um..."
He was grabbed by the hair, forced to look up and linger, and the words he had not yet spoken were torn into scattered muffled hums.
Liu Yang rubbed his ears gently, kissing him carefully and carefully, his eyes brightening slightly.
"I have never hated you. It's me. I do it willingly."
Lightning protection: Please don't be fooled by the introduction. There are few emotional scenes in this article, which are roughly distributed in the middle and back. The main plot flow is long and the article will be subject to a lot of psychological descriptions. If you can't accept his character and design, run away. It will only get worse in the later period. It is very offensive but has a little love brain. The scenes will not run through the whole article. The perspective will be a little unstable in the early stage, but will stabilize in the mid-term, and change a bit in the later stage. To put it bluntly, the two perspectives are mainly the two protagonists. If you can't stand the foreshadowing in the early stage, it is recommended to start directly from the first copy, or you can just run away.
Intention: To face the dissipation of life with bitterness, and to compose a new future with magnanimity.
Reader comments
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... After all, I write a certain type of male channel (basically I read male channel books and felt that the Jinjiang style couldn't accommodate me... In the end, when I came to Xiaolujiang, I recommended a short fan story for me...), So I won't talk about the opening rhythm. I really don't want to change it, so I won't talk nonsense (maybe Jinjiang has something special...? I can't speak confidently across channels)
But looking at these two chapters separately, the perspective is relatively unified, the sense of immersion is much better, and the main line advances naturally and is much more obvious. This can be regarded as understanding. In addition, you write the story in detail (which is rare, which means that you are indeed writing a web article and not other strange things). After explaining things clearly, your writing skills will gradually develop and you can always tell it well.
So according to your question, the idea is relatively clear. You don't have to worry about the current traffic, because you can write good stories, have this basic talent, and the main body is making progress. Now I really don't understand the introduction and the first three chapters, but if you don't need to sign a contract with these two, don't worry and learn slowly. It is recommended to look for relevant information by yourself (I didn't plan to answer that question originally, but there are more respondents who know a certain point, so it will be difficult to get an answer to the question you asked Jinjiang)
The following are specific ideas
1. Keep the perspective unified and substitutive, and try to avoid the previous fragmentary writing methods. In this way, as you practice and add your own story, the text will have contract value. There is probably no urgent financial need for the time being. I will wait until it is time to be exposed and practice my writing skills.
2. Understand the outline of the introduction and how to write the first three chapters in advance, and unify the style of the beginning and the following. When you decide to sign a contract, you will basically learn these things (good writing can be broken, but it will lose exposure)
3. If you want to fill up the new list, commit suicide under a pen name (find tutorials on pink software), and directly apply for a contract after posting 30,000 words.
The above is the most standard process if you want peace of mind. I still recommend that you go to Xiaopo Station and related places to inquire about this relevant knowledge to prevent me from saying anything misleading.
I'm not the best person to guide you... But the basics of Xiaolvjiang are relatively cold, and it's hard to find someone there who is enthusiastic about teaching you. I can only provide some ideas, and it's best to learn to find some resources yourself. You will realize later that your ability to find information is somewhat restricted, but I feel more curious about your development.
Overall, the changes have made quite a bit of progress. ... After all, I write a certain type of male channel (basically I read male channel books and felt that the Jinjiang style couldn't accommodate me... In the end, when I came to Xiaolujiang, I recommended a short fan story for me...), So I won't talk about the opening rhythm. I really don't want to change it, so I won't talk nonsense (maybe Jinjiang has something special...? I can't speak confidently across channels) But looking at these two chapters separately, the perspective is relatively unified, the sense of immersion is much better, and the main line advances naturally and is much more obvious. This can be regarded as understanding. In addition, you write the story in detail (which is rare, which means that you are indeed writing a web article and not other strange things). After explaining things clearly, your writing skills will gradually develop and you can always tell it well. So according to your question, the idea is relatively clear. You don't have to worry about the current traffic, because you can write good stories, have this basic talent, and the main body is making progress. Now I really don't understand the introduction and the first three chapters, but if you don't need to sign a contract with these two, don't worry and learn slowly. It is recommended to look for relevant information by yourself (I didn't plan to answer that question originally, but there are more respondents who know a certain point, so it will be difficult to get an answer to the question you asked Jinjiang) The following are specific ideas 1. Keep the perspective unified and substitutive, and try to avoid the previous fragmentary writing methods. In this way, as you practice and add your own story, the text will have contract value. There is probably no urgent financial need for the time being. I will wait until it is time to be exposed and practice my writing skills. 2. Understand the outline of the introduction and how to write the first three chapters in advance, and unify the style of the beginning and the following. When you decide to sign a contract, you will basically learn these things (good writing can be broken, but it will lose exposure) 3. If you want to fill up the new list, commit suicide under a pen name (find tutorials on pink software), and directly apply for a contract after posting 30,000 words. The above is the most standard process if you want peace of mind. I still recommend that you go to Xiaopo Station and related places to inquire about this relevant knowledge to prevent me from saying anything misleading. I'm not the best person to guide you... But the basics of Xiaolvjiang are relatively cold, and it's hard to find someone there who is enthusiastic about teaching you. I can only provide some ideas, and it's best to learn to find some resources yourself. You will realize later that your ability to find information is somewhat restricted, but I feel more curious about your development.