Xue Yingwan's cultivation level was not high and his qualifications were mediocre. All his fellow disciples looked down upon him, except for the new disciples who came looking for him every day.
I will tell him the latest news at the foot of the mountain, and I will give him endless novelty items.
It's just that he always talks a lot of words that he doesn't understand, about dungeons and tasks, and he also talks about forging a sword to defeat extraterrestrial evil spirits and achieve a perfect ending.
No one had ever treated him so well. Xue Yingwan asked him tentatively: "Do you... Want to become a Taoist partner with me?"
Unexpectedly, Yue Ci was scared away.
For a long time, he didn't see Yue Ci again.
It wasn't until he went down the mountain to leave the clan that Yue Ci came to the door as if he had met him for the first time.
"Long time no see," he said, "Senior brother, I like you."
Xue Yingwan raised his eyes and saw a yellow scroll on Yue Ci's head.
There was a clear line of words floating on it.
And his own name.
[Xue Yingwan (Sword Sacrifice 0/1)]
*
Yue Ci studied the mission briefing carefully. He was only one step away from getting the artifact and achieving the perfect ending:
[Persuading the designated NPC to take the initiative to sacrifice one's life to the sword]
It's easy to conquer an NPC who likes you.
In front of the forging furnace, he kissed Xue Ying's eyebrows and whispered:
"It's okay, we'll see you next week."
An NPC who likes cheap and insignificant things.
After coaxing him, he willingly falls in love with himself again, he is well-behaved and easy to deceive.
Yue Ci opened the second round of eyes with full confidence, and returned to Xiangwang Peak skillfully to find Xue Yingwan, who was still an ordinary disciple.
But he tried his best to search every inch of Chaohua Sect, but could not find his Taoist companion.
Xue Yingwan, along with his name, seems to have completely disappeared from this world, with no trace of his existence left.
Yue Ci was completely panicked.
*
After the death of Tao De Cong Xin, this body accidentally happened to me during my lifetime
Crazy main line player Long Aotian x gentle, clear and beautiful NPC
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Received in advance
"Long Aotian's ex-husband wants to reunite with me"
In every Long Aotian story, the male protagonist usually has a Bai Yueguang who will never leave him. After Long Aotian's career is successful, he will come back to repay Bai Yueguang's kindness, and then they will become a Taoist couple and stay together until they grow old.
Li Zhan accompanied Duan Qingxuan through the unknown, and watched him step up to the high platform, with the most powerful sword in the world and the reputation of being surrounded by thousands of people.
It was supposed to be a good story in the world of cultivation, but at the critical moment of his life and death, he learned that Bai Yueguang, the Taoist monk, turned out to be someone else.
In the second choice of the overused classic plot, I turned out to be the abandoned Green Tea.
Li Zhan saved his life, and after going through the process and exchanging blows with Duan Qingxuan, he calmly signed the divorce letter: "Look at the fuss, I thought you really liked me. I wish you two a happy marriage."
One hundred years after they broke up, news of Duan Qingxuan's death came.
The entire world of cultivation knows that the Sword God has a cave legacy, including rare treasures, elixirs and magic weapons, as well as countless spiritual stones, wealth, and secrets of sword moves. Everyone wants to get a piece of the pie.
They looked at Bai Yueguang: "The Sword God must have left all his inheritance to you!"
Bai Yueguang tried in every possible way and smiled tiredly: "I have a deep relationship with him, but I didn't expect that I still couldn't understand his thoughts."
Li Zhan sneered: "I still don't understand who he is. He is pretentious and selfish. How can he really love someone, and how can he leave his treasure to a Taoist monk..."
Then, he missed the mark and fell into a barrier that was said to be so impregnable that even the Great Luo Immortal could not open it.
Li Zhan covered his aching head, raised his head, and saw that Duan Qingxuan had left a mountain of treasures for him that could shock the world of cultivation.
And carve his name thousands of times on the rock wall.
*
Duan Qingxuan died and became a restaurant boy with no cultivation and no memory.
Everyone said that after Jianzun and Li Zhan reconciled, he had a deep affection for Bai Yueguang and would only wait to reconnect in the next life.
But again, he fell in love with the young wife who hated him to death at first sight.
The crocodile gauze tent hangs down, and the faint fragrance floats.
The young man caressed a jade-like waist with his palms, lowered his eyelashes, and couldn't help but tell Li Zhan harsh words about his ex-husband:
"Duan Qingxuan is a man who likes the new and hates the old. He has no sense of responsibility. How can he bear the title of Sword Master? If I had been here, I would not let you suffer even the slightest injustice from him..."
Li Zhan: "Haha^^"
Emotionally stable Long Aotian x the most beautiful woman in the world
There is no white moonlight
Purpose: Overcome setbacks and learn to grow in adversity
Reader comments
My overall feeling: I enjoyed watching it at the beginning. After the end of the first life, I started to feel that the rhythm was a bit messy, and there were some signs of buying stocks in the middle. I didn't like it for pure 1v1 people, but luckily it didn't turn into a change of attack text (ノдヽ)
The more I read later, the more my imagination opened up. I don't know whether the author had the outline in mind from the beginning or came up with such a design later. But after reading it all and going back to look at it, I found that the logic of the whole story makes sense, so there is still a problem with the rhythm. After reading the big column, it didn't take long to start writing the article. As a newcomer's work, I think it is already very good! The idea is very good and unexpected, and the overall structure is also very smooth.
Because I have also tried to write articles myself, and I feel that the most difficult thing is the imagination and structure of a long story. How can I not be clichéd, and how can I make the plot reasonable and coherent? Especially sometimes, I suddenly have an idea and create a favorite character and some exciting plot fragments, but how do I make up the rest to round it out and make the plot move forward?
Looking at it this way, I feel that Dada has made a good start. It has attractive characters and a refreshing, smooth and reasonable overall plot structure. It has good writing style. After accumulating experience, the rhythm of the plot will become better and better. I look forward to Dada's new articles in the future~[][]
DaDa, this article of yours may have been plagiarized. In the Tomato novel titled "Red Lotus Burning Soul: The Legend of the Third Nezha Prince", its first dozens of chapters are almost exactly the same as DaDa [angry][angry]
Although the characters in the middle were a bit poorly portrayed, and the plot was a bit weird, which once made my blood pressure soar, the overall plot was indeed quite interesting, and the reversal of the ending was quite unexpected. That's it, little lovers 99 [Fireworks]
Wow, this ending is unexpected and reasonable. I was really scolding and angry in the early stage, but as the foreshadowing plot unfolded one by one, I felt really regretful, distressed, and very happy.
I like it very much. . . Complete death and eternal life are so happy that I can't imagine. I feel that the more the game continues to be unstable, the only way to achieve stability is through bugs, but who says that physical death and cyber immortality are not a kind of difficulty? Just like the open ending of the main text, the extra cookie is also delicious and so refreshing. The confusion and doubts in the middle of reading this article are like a heavy puddle of water, illuminated and dispersed by the fluorescent light of the electronic screen. . A hurricane that overlapped for thousands of years and several hours, a perfect ending. , I haven't seen it in Jinjiang for a long time. If I had any negative comments about this article during the viewing process, it was purely because I was anxious.
My mood was ups and downs when I saw it. When I saw the problem with the code, I almost thought I would never see it again. Fortunately, it was fine. Www, the babies will always be happy.
My mood was ups and downs when I saw it. When I saw the problem with the code, I almost thought I would never see it again. Fortunately, it was fine. Www, the babies will always be happy.
"With a righteous face", this is a big bug for the author~
I ran out of articles and am thinking about this book again...
(Wear a hat) (Wash hands) (Cut lemons) (Put into cups) (Beat lemons) (Add fruit nectar) (Add ice cubes) (Add water) (Pack) (Your lemonade is ready) Madam, please add some more extras!
(Method) (Evocation) Madam, come back soon——
[Purple sugar] kswl [orange candy] I got it [Purple sugar] kswl [orange candy] I got it
Ah wow wow wow, beautiful! So happy! My wife is so imaginative, the ending is something I really didn't expect [Star Eyes]
Woo woo woo, I will love my wife for the rest of my life.
No, why is it stuck here at the end of the text?
Although it's good to stand firm, it's really sad
Okay, why didn't Huo Jianqiu say a word or make any sound [scared]
I didn't understand it at all, how could I lie to you?
I haven't finished reading Tomb Raiders Notes, so I can't put them together.
Why is Gin written like he doesn't know Dazai? That's weird. Didn't he leave him at the door of the embassy?
[Sword Qi] After Death, He Transformed into a Parrot of His Junior Brother
Help! What Should I Do If I Encounter a Ghost Netizen?
Rotten White Moonlight
Long Aotian's Ex-Husband Wants to Reunite with Me
My overall feeling: I enjoyed watching it at the beginning. After the end of the first life, I started to feel that the rhythm was a bit messy, and there were some signs of buying stocks in the middle. I didn't like it for pure 1v1 people, but luckily it didn't turn into a change of attack text (ノдヽ) The more I read later, the more my imagination opened up. I don't know whether the author had the outline in mind from the beginning or came up with such a design later. But after reading it all and going back to look at it, I found that the logic of the whole story makes sense, so there is still a problem with the rhythm. After reading the big column, it didn't take long to start writing the article. As a newcomer's work, I think it is already very good! The idea is very good and unexpected, and the overall structure is also very smooth. Because I have also tried to write articles myself, and I feel that the most difficult thing is the imagination and structure of a long story. How can I not be clichéd, and how can I make the plot reasonable and coherent? Especially sometimes, I suddenly have an idea and create a favorite character and some exciting plot fragments, but how do I make up the rest to round it out and make the plot move forward? Looking at it this way, I feel that Dada has made a good start. It has attractive characters and a refreshing, smooth and reasonable overall plot structure. It has good writing style. After accumulating experience, the rhythm of the plot will become better and better. I look forward to Dada's new articles in the future~[][]
DaDa, this article of yours may have been plagiarized. In the Tomato novel titled "Red Lotus Burning Soul: The Legend of the Third Nezha Prince", its first dozens of chapters are almost exactly the same as DaDa [angry][angry]
Although the characters in the middle were a bit poorly portrayed, and the plot was a bit weird, which once made my blood pressure soar, the overall plot was indeed quite interesting, and the reversal of the ending was quite unexpected. That's it, little lovers 99 [Fireworks]
Wow, this ending is unexpected and reasonable. I was really scolding and angry in the early stage, but as the foreshadowing plot unfolded one by one, I felt really regretful, distressed, and very happy.
I like it very much. . . Complete death and eternal life are so happy that I can't imagine. I feel that the more the game continues to be unstable, the only way to achieve stability is through bugs, but who says that physical death and cyber immortality are not a kind of difficulty? Just like the open ending of the main text, the extra cookie is also delicious and so refreshing. The confusion and doubts in the middle of reading this article are like a heavy puddle of water, illuminated and dispersed by the fluorescent light of the electronic screen. . A hurricane that overlapped for thousands of years and several hours, a perfect ending. , I haven't seen it in Jinjiang for a long time. If I had any negative comments about this article during the viewing process, it was purely because I was anxious.
My mood was ups and downs when I saw it. When I saw the problem with the code, I almost thought I would never see it again. Fortunately, it was fine. Www, the babies will always be happy.
My mood was ups and downs when I saw it. When I saw the problem with the code, I almost thought I would never see it again. Fortunately, it was fine. Www, the babies will always be happy.
"With a righteous face", this is a big bug for the author~
I ran out of articles and am thinking about this book again...
(Wear a hat) (Wash hands) (Cut lemons) (Put into cups) (Beat lemons) (Add fruit nectar) (Add ice cubes) (Add water) (Pack) (Your lemonade is ready) Madam, please add some more extras!
(Method) (Evocation) Madam, come back soon——
[Purple sugar] kswl [orange candy] I got it [Purple sugar] kswl [orange candy] I got it
Ah wow wow wow, beautiful! So happy! My wife is so imaginative, the ending is something I really didn't expect [Star Eyes]
Woo woo woo, I will love my wife for the rest of my life.
No, why is it stuck here at the end of the text?
Although it's good to stand firm, it's really sad
Okay, why didn't Huo Jianqiu say a word or make any sound [scared]
I didn't understand it at all, how could I lie to you? I haven't finished reading Tomb Raiders Notes, so I can't put them together.
Why is Gin written like he doesn't know Dazai? That's weird. Didn't he leave him at the door of the embassy?