Once you accidentally fall out of the train, you arrive on a strange planet. Despite this, the pace of "pioneering" will not stop.
Intention: keep moving forward
Reader comments
It is really a qualitative leap. From the first edition to the third edition, the plot framework has not changed, the narrative order has been adjusted, and you can understand what is being said at once. The emotions are also laid out very well, and the hook at the end of the third chapter is very good and very catchy.
Baby Wenwen, you are really great! No need to delete what you said, it's so cute! (Baby Wenwen is my pet name for you. If you feel offended, tell me and I won't call you that. Or you can tell me how to call you.)
It is really a qualitative leap. From the first edition to the third edition, the plot framework has not changed, the narrative order has been adjusted, and you can understand what is being said at once. The emotions are also laid out very well, and the hook at the end of the third chapter is very good and very catchy. Baby Wenwen, you are really great! No need to delete what you said, it's so cute! (Baby Wenwen is my pet name for you. If you feel offended, tell me and I won't call you that. Or you can tell me how to call you.)