Two male protagonists, novice writer has poor writing skills
Maybe embarrassing?
Double strong but in the later stage, you have to wait for a long time and you may get cheated.
Maybe more dialogue? No, this is certain (*? I`*)
The two male protagonists were in the same class and were roommates from elementary school to college graduation. When they grew up, they separated and then reunited through time travel.
Nan Qing and Ye Qingsu suddenly disappeared one day and returned again. Nan Qing was full of obsession with Ye Qingsu, and she even went too far towards Ye Qingsu.
Ye Qingsu didn't care about this, he just thought that the bamboo horse was more clinging to him.
It's only about 100,000 words. The world view is a bit complicated. I can't explain it clearly in a short story. It might be longer.
Do it without saving, update when you have inspiration, just practice writing?
This article is about sweetness and a little bit of bitterness. How can there be sweetness without bitterness?
The relationship between the abominable Nan Qing and the idiot Ye Qingsu does not stop at the story
Updated two to five times a week
Diligence and laziness are interdependent.
Intention: no water