[Blue Prison]being an Optimist in the Blue Lock
[蓝色监狱]在蓝锁里当乐观主义者
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- 20k Words
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- 7
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- Danmei (BL)
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- Modern Era
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- 1y ago
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[蓝色监狱]在蓝锁里当乐观主义者
It doesn't matter, as long as you finish writing, you can re-enter v
Just comb the cat more often. Shaving is not good for the cat and makes it easy to get sick.
[Orange Candy] Got it This chapter is a rare buffer and blank space in the whole story. The first half continues the coldness of the village chief and the bitterness of the lower class, and the second half transitions to the short-term stability after being reincarnated as a human being. The mood gradually changes from depression and depression to relaxation and peace, forming a narrative rhythm that relaxes one by one. 1. Emotional structure: Warmth returns after cold, temporary peace after sadness The first half still continues the harsh reality from before: - The village chief gives away stinky rice, boasts of his merits, and bullies the weak with peace of mind - The poor family has bare walls, the cold wind penetrates the bones, and the children have sallow complexion and thin skin - The contrast between the lives of the rich and the poor is still sharp, and the irony remains unabated. In the second half of the writing, he changed his mind and entered a state of "temporary peace of mind and dreams": - Reincarnated as a human, loved by parents, with delicious food - Temporarily put aside hatred and grievances, and just want to live a stable life - Reunite with friends on campus, chat about hometown, and recreate the innocence of children One is cold and one is warm, one is bitter and one is sweet, which prevents the story from being depressing throughout and also pave the way for subsequent conflicts to arise again. 2. Character Psychology: The real pull of the pig soul's human nature The most delicate part of this chapter is the protagonist's inner struggle: 1. The shadow of the past life has not disappeared, and the comfort of the present life is hard to resist. Clearly carrying the dual resentment of pigs being slaughtered and people being bullied, But he is greedy for the warmth of being a human being, and just wants to mess around, have fun, and forget the pain. 2. Care to conceal identity I am afraid that my classmates will know the strangeness of "resurrection from the dead", I don't even dare to reveal that I am the reincarnation of a pig. This kind of little panic and little lies is very suitable for a child's perspective. 3. Subconscious avoidance of revenge The parents wanted to redress their grievances against Teacher Dan, but she deliberately tried to deal with it. It's not that I don't hate it, it's that my weak soul has just found stability and doesn't want to go into the wind and rain again. Real and reasonable. 3. Narrative function: the key transition between the past and the next - Continuing from above: putting an end to the pig tragedy and the village chief's oppression, and completing the closed loop of the past life. - Next chapter: Return to campus life, reconnect with Wang Feifu, Du Chunhuang, Teacher Dan and others, This will pave the way for the subsequent exposure of poisonous meals in canteens and the fight against evil forces. This period of "stability" may seem mundane, but in fact it is very necessary: The more comfortable you are, the more you cherish it; the more you cherish it, the more powerful your subsequent counterattack will be. 4. Language and artistic conception: from cold realism to tenderness and lyricism The first half is still the rough rural line drawings that you are good at, which are straightforward and heart-breaking; The second half turns to a soft, childlike, slightly dreamy style: - Introducing the cliff holes and strange springs and clear streams of Chaotianmen - Describe the scenery of hometown with green mountains and green waters - Daily fun and fun with classmates The text switches between warm and cold naturally, and the picture is full of feeling. It not only retains the realistic background, but also adds a bit of fairy tale tenderness. 5. The finishing touch of lyrics: puncturing the hypocrisy of charity "Qing Ping Le·The Villager Says Kindness" > Who would really appreciate someone who only gives scraps to the poor? > Treat everyone like a dolphin and treat them lightly, and be proud of your merits and virtues. In just a few words, the village chief's "charity" mask was torn apart. It perfectly echoes the previous plot of gluttonous pork and stinky rice. The satire is concise and powerful. One sentence summary The first half is about the coldness of the world, while the second half is about the temporary warmth of the world; The old grievances have not been resolved but are hidden for the time being, and I can take some time to rest before I wake up from the dusty dream. One smile and one relax, one sad and one warm, which not only buffers the previous depression, but also leaves enough tension for subsequent storms to arise.
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