[The first book, the writing is immature and the logic is simple]
Full text completed!
[Original male protagonist without cp]
[The male protagonist is not a true, kind and beautiful person, has a weak sense of morality, and appears less in the first ten chapters]
[Partial group portrait, including forum, including Dihua flow BKing and super middle two description, and a copy that does not require too much thinking]
How can you win the love of readers?
Appearance, abilities, and a miserable past.
How to get readers to cry?
Obsession, unwillingness, and a grand death.
Fall at the highest peak, end at the most magnificent banquet, and use your life to play a final song. This is a formula that cannot go wrong.
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"Doomsday" is a comic that has received a lot of attention since it was first released. The painting style is exquisite, the production is excellent, the characters are cute and likable, and the readers are very satisfied! In addition, the comic author is like the reincarnation of an octopus and publishes comics quickly. He stands out from the crowd of comics, overtakes in corners, and wins the first place.
And there is a character who has been very popular since he first appeared on the scene——
He went against all sentient beings, threw himself into the situation, used himself as bait, and made a desperate move.
He comes with an obsession that goes deep into his bones and uses whatever means necessary. Everyone knows that this powerful person with unknown past does not belong to any camp and behaves erratically. The initial vigilance and suspicion turned into incomprehension and trust, and finally turned into a pool of stagnant water. All emotions came to an abrupt end at the rebellion that overturned the world.
From then on, no one knew his name, and no one knew his name.
Everything returns to the starting point.
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Q: Are today's readers of Doomsday crying too?
Answer: Yes, there was Meng Jiangnu crying over the Great Wall in the past, and there was the Doomsday Readers Forum crying in the back
So, the real starting point is——?
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Shi Xu, a man who won the lottery before he could even think about how to enjoy a better life in the future, was suddenly hit by a car and flew up to the sky to face the King of Hell.
He was darkly cursing the whole world, but he was suddenly pulled into a world that was about to be destroyed in the form of Ah Piao. He was told by an unknown creature that because he felt that he had great potential and could feed the resentment of ten evil sword fairies, he planned to make a deal with him: the protagonist would help him improve the plot line, create a he in many BE lines, and gain popularity. He would use the energy after success to send the protagonist back to the original world and help him resurrect where he was, so that he could enjoy the beautiful and rich life in the future.
So the two guys who didn't want to die hit it off.
This is where Doomsday was born.
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Push to pre-collect: "Hello, did you call for rescue?"
Introduction below:
A strange software appeared on the computer.
Pure black icons, garbled names.
No matter how many times I uninstall it, it will still be there the next day.
With the thought of "I will fight you for the virus," Shi Qi expressionlessly clicked in, intending to die with it.
……
Ha? Are you (expletive) a game? ?
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Fog enveloped the world, and unknown systems invaded Blue Star. Human beings lost control of their lives and were forced into captivity and isolation.
Only those who obey the orders and clear the game can obtain the corresponding survival supplies, and those who resist will be killed without mercy.
Despair and pain create a nest, and darkness and blood build up high walls.
Until the airtight siege was violently dismantled, light came from the cracks, and the world began to usher in new life.
A man knocked on the thick wall and asked curiously among the dull eyes:
"Hello, did you call for rescue?"
Motto: Even if you are in a desperate situation, don't give up hope
Reader comments
It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of chapter-by-chapter style of Dream of Red Mansions, using poems to name the content of each chapter, like fables or warnings. Just like this story, no matter whether it is the gods or all living beings, they cannot escape the sins of all sentient beings, life, illness, and death, partisan disputes, and collusion between power and money. The most unforgettable thing here is Wei Xuanji. The reason for her birth was to be used by others. She grew up to be a wedding dress for others. She was forced by her father to do evil things, but she still cared about the world. In the end, she died to save people. Although everyone admires him, no one understands him. It can be said that he lives in alienation with a smile mask. He never expressed these negative emotions. It was clear that the world kissed me painfully, but I responded with songs. In the end, the most pure and true person really burns himself out, and his three souls and seven souls are scattered, and he no longer cares about the world. The last bit of selfishness is to see Tai Wei again. In the end, for Tai Wei, he still holds the heart-killing stone and endures the pain of looking back on his life... If you are willing to carve a jade woman, you are not willing to be a waste material in Jingzhou... Although there is no substance, you hope to have a heart. Next sentence: If you have a heart, I have a heart. They couldn't bear to let Tai Wei finish speaking, and just left without any worries. Even if he was reincarnated later, in the end it was him and not him. Ironically, the person who took great pains to write and save the memoryless person seems to have been set up for the resurrection of Luan Ba. I really feel sorry for Wei Xuan. In the end, the two merged into one, transforming into the aloof incarnation of the Heavenly Lord, as if they were a third person, just to help Hua achieve enlightenment. The beautiful woman has gone, and there is nothing left to do.
The sacrifices of gods, saviors, and martyrs are really delicious [poor]
By the way, I was very touched when I saw the adults perfecting the outline and details before starting to write. . It does stay around the main line so it doesn't feel too erratic, and it has really great stamina. . It's really cool to have the setting that no one knows about his achievements and his name is buried deep in the ground (especially in the comics, no one knows/understands it. It's really cool to reveal it later) (nonsense) What a great actor! It's a very delicious and ever-changing little novel [poor](?) Thank you for bringing such a powerful story~!
After it was over, I felt a little bit disappointed, and it seemed that I couldn't express my feelings even if I just said a few words.
Good night, day, the sun will rise tomorrow as usual
Good morning, Shi Xu, I wish you peace and happiness when you return to your own world.
No matter as Shi Xu, ■■, Bai Zi or Qi Heng, the friendship or pain gained along the way are real. This long and short journey has a happy ending.
The most perfect Happy Ending...
Thank you for your hard work, the nameless savior in the apocalypse
And, welcome home, Shi Xu
[Forever Friends] achievement achieved.
Bless you, dear ■■, the future of the world will be bright and lovely. After the fantasy journey is over, every wind on the street will quietly recite your deeds. Your next journey will always be calm, and your blood will always be stirring. - Finally, Brother Porridge - call me Brother Porridge again. I am so happy that the novel has ended smoothly! At the same time, I was following people who solved the problem of V and people who were cheating with fake copywriting. It's great that this one can work well TOT.
I'm so anxious, faster, faster, faster, teacher, hungry, hungry, hungry
Extra... I want an extra, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow
Finished spreading flowers! Do you want to see the characters in it also being knifed? We readers can't be the only ones injured?
Finished spreading flowers! Wuwuwu movie viewing body (screaming) (distorted) (dark) (crawling) (Ah——) Do I deserve to have a movie viewing body? Teacher, daddy, mommy, hungry, rice
Extra extra extra amount——! In the end, can this be published as a comic and give readers a stab at it?
[Poor] Make a wish for Modo Modo... I can't bear to part with you [crying] (You are so greedy!)
Updated, updated, actually updated? [Hug your thighs] [Poor]
No, we must know the truth
Finished spreading flowers! ! ! !
Finished with flowers~! Confession big www
OMG, ah, the flowers are finished! ! I finished reading it in one sitting [poor] It's so beautiful and delicious! ! Oh, this is it! It's this script that's so beautiful and powerful! ! ! Cool! ! ! ! ! (Shen Tengyin)
Thank you boss for the story [poor]! ! ! The plot and foreshadowing of the story are all in place. [Poor] It's so great! !
Finished spreading flowers! Want to see more extras...
The perfect ending made me spiral into the sky [cat head] [cat head]
I was too spoiled by the introduction to dare to watch it, but after watching the extras and the ending, I knew the quality must be very high! The next one looks normal. Teacher, see you in the next one!
If you want to watch the extra episode, come quickly on Thursday qwq————
Of course not. I'm glad that I was recommended to come here. ASE said, "It would have been better if I had read it earlier, but it's not too late to read it now." It's true. The teacher's writing is very beautiful! ! ! [Rose] [Red Heart] The descriptions of the characters are sometimes serious and sometimes funny. This atmosphere is really great and very artistic. I really like the characters in your works. I really like your work, teacher. I am very satisfied after reading every chapter of the update. Now "Encounter, Snow, August" is finished. Congratulations to the teacher for completing a masterpiece [Red Heart]. I am looking forward to the teacher's next work. Thank you teacher~ Come on~ [Rose]
I skipped reading this book and felt it was a little bit knifey, so I didn't order it all. I want to ask other people who have read it, is this book really beautiful, strong and miserable, or is it the kind of beauty, strong and miserable that is portrayed in it? I don't like real swords, I only like the fake ones that are portrayed.
Finally. . Fortunately, the heroine just didn't say it clearly and was not really deceived by the children's tricks.
It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of chapter-by-chapter style of Dream of Red Mansions, using poems to name the content of each chapter, like fables or warnings. Just like this story, no matter whether it is the gods or all living beings, they cannot escape the sins of all sentient beings, life, illness, and death, partisan disputes, and collusion between power and money. The most unforgettable thing here is Wei Xuanji. The reason for her birth was to be used by others. She grew up to be a wedding dress for others. She was forced by her father to do evil things, but she still cared about the world. In the end, she died to save people. Although everyone admires him, no one understands him. It can be said that he lives in alienation with a smile mask. He never expressed these negative emotions. It was clear that the world kissed me painfully, but I responded with songs. In the end, the most pure and true person really burns himself out, and his three souls and seven souls are scattered, and he no longer cares about the world. The last bit of selfishness is to see Tai Wei again. In the end, for Tai Wei, he still holds the heart-killing stone and endures the pain of looking back on his life... If you are willing to carve a jade woman, you are not willing to be a waste material in Jingzhou... Although there is no substance, you hope to have a heart. Next sentence: If you have a heart, I have a heart. They couldn't bear to let Tai Wei finish speaking, and just left without any worries. Even if he was reincarnated later, in the end it was him and not him. Ironically, the person who took great pains to write and save the memoryless person seems to have been set up for the resurrection of Luan Ba. I really feel sorry for Wei Xuan. In the end, the two merged into one, transforming into the aloof incarnation of the Heavenly Lord, as if they were a third person, just to help Hua achieve enlightenment. The beautiful woman has gone, and there is nothing left to do.
The sacrifices of gods, saviors, and martyrs are really delicious [poor] By the way, I was very touched when I saw the adults perfecting the outline and details before starting to write. . It does stay around the main line so it doesn't feel too erratic, and it has really great stamina. . It's really cool to have the setting that no one knows about his achievements and his name is buried deep in the ground (especially in the comics, no one knows/understands it. It's really cool to reveal it later) (nonsense) What a great actor! It's a very delicious and ever-changing little novel [poor](?) Thank you for bringing such a powerful story~!
After it was over, I felt a little bit disappointed, and it seemed that I couldn't express my feelings even if I just said a few words. Good night, day, the sun will rise tomorrow as usual Good morning, Shi Xu, I wish you peace and happiness when you return to your own world. No matter as Shi Xu, ■■, Bai Zi or Qi Heng, the friendship or pain gained along the way are real. This long and short journey has a happy ending. The most perfect Happy Ending... Thank you for your hard work, the nameless savior in the apocalypse And, welcome home, Shi Xu
[Forever Friends] achievement achieved. Bless you, dear ■■, the future of the world will be bright and lovely. After the fantasy journey is over, every wind on the street will quietly recite your deeds. Your next journey will always be calm, and your blood will always be stirring. - Finally, Brother Porridge - call me Brother Porridge again. I am so happy that the novel has ended smoothly! At the same time, I was following people who solved the problem of V and people who were cheating with fake copywriting. It's great that this one can work well TOT.
I'm so anxious, faster, faster, faster, teacher, hungry, hungry, hungry
Extra... I want an extra, wow, wow, wow, wow, wow
Finished spreading flowers! Do you want to see the characters in it also being knifed? We readers can't be the only ones injured?
Finished spreading flowers! Wuwuwu movie viewing body (screaming) (distorted) (dark) (crawling) (Ah——) Do I deserve to have a movie viewing body? Teacher, daddy, mommy, hungry, rice
Extra extra extra amount——! In the end, can this be published as a comic and give readers a stab at it?
[Poor] Make a wish for Modo Modo... I can't bear to part with you [crying] (You are so greedy!)
Updated, updated, actually updated? [Hug your thighs] [Poor]
No, we must know the truth
Finished spreading flowers! ! ! !
Finished with flowers~! Confession big www
OMG, ah, the flowers are finished! ! I finished reading it in one sitting [poor] It's so beautiful and delicious! ! Oh, this is it! It's this script that's so beautiful and powerful! ! ! Cool! ! ! ! ! (Shen Tengyin) Thank you boss for the story [poor]! ! ! The plot and foreshadowing of the story are all in place. [Poor] It's so great! !
Finished spreading flowers! Want to see more extras...
The perfect ending made me spiral into the sky [cat head] [cat head]
I was too spoiled by the introduction to dare to watch it, but after watching the extras and the ending, I knew the quality must be very high! The next one looks normal. Teacher, see you in the next one!
If you want to watch the extra episode, come quickly on Thursday qwq————
Of course not. I'm glad that I was recommended to come here. ASE said, "It would have been better if I had read it earlier, but it's not too late to read it now." It's true. The teacher's writing is very beautiful! ! ! [Rose] [Red Heart] The descriptions of the characters are sometimes serious and sometimes funny. This atmosphere is really great and very artistic. I really like the characters in your works. I really like your work, teacher. I am very satisfied after reading every chapter of the update. Now "Encounter, Snow, August" is finished. Congratulations to the teacher for completing a masterpiece [Red Heart]. I am looking forward to the teacher's next work. Thank you teacher~ Come on~ [Rose]
I skipped reading this book and felt it was a little bit knifey, so I didn't order it all. I want to ask other people who have read it, is this book really beautiful, strong and miserable, or is it the kind of beauty, strong and miserable that is portrayed in it? I don't like real swords, I only like the fake ones that are portrayed.
Finally. . Fortunately, the heroine just didn't say it clearly and was not really deceived by the children's tricks.