I haven't seen something so interesting in a long time~~~
Please work hard~~
It's such a shallow hole, meow~ I'll keep it first, and then I'll give you two points. Come on Xiuxiu~~dig deeper~~~
Hey, don't mind the nickname Shenma.
Na na na! Waiting! Update quickly! Scare? If the hero Changqing marries Zixuan, what will happen to Jingtian? ! Will he agree? Will it? Are you worried? Do we have to rely on the Su family to save the hero Changqing's Tian'er? ? ! Huh?
Not bad, come on, author, don't give up.
Hmm... Doesn't the author think the word "Me" sounds weird?
Knowing her 'childhood sweetheart' too well, Fran no longer had the interest to complain. . (Qingmei refers to Qianxia, Zhuma refers to Folan. Shouldn't it be enough to write 'Qingmei who knows her too well'?)
Ahem, just a few comments, don't mind~ Support is in progress...
In fact, I only came in when I saw Ramses. . .
It looks great, come on*^o^*
Haha, brother, I came to see you
快回家给我做饭吧老婆
Attacking is sometimes useful,,,, I thought there was nothing else I could do except eating. . . You still know how to show off at critical moments,,, a kid can be taught, ho ho ho ho
I'd better read the article patiently and let me share my thoughts after reading it. It's just my personal opinion, don't be angry. Personally, I think the writing style of this article is very good, and it is also gorgeous, but it is a bit too pursuit of gorgeous writing style. As a result, the whole article always looks bland, and it is difficult to arouse readers to feel excited, good or climax. So I guess most people will still feel guilty after reading a long paragraph, so others naturally don't want to read anymore. Moreover, because of the excessive pursuit of gorgeous writing style, the meaning of many places is difficult to understand, and it is often necessary to stop and understand. This is also the reason why others are not interested in reading further. The author can still arouse some curiosity among readers, such as whether Yuan Ge loves Liufeng or not, why Yuan Ge is immortal, and what story he and Qingcheng have, but the author doesn't explain much about these in the end, so it's considered unfinished. It is recommended that when writing articles in the future, make it as simple as possible. Don't make it too complicated, otherwise others will have to slowly understand the meaning, and it will make people impatient to read on, so it is actually a disadvantage. The article written by the author was mediocre until the end, with no feeling at all. It is recommended to change the style appropriately, as this will not attract readers. Nowadays, some of them write very easily, and readers find them interesting and funny, and the content of the article is also easy to understand, so readers will like it more. Some people find their writings humorous, while others find them sad. They all have their own feelings, but this article has always been light and not strong, which is one of the reasons why it is not attractive. Of course, the author does not have to write in that style, but it is best to try to be as simple as possible when writing in the future. This will make it easy for others to understand and will make people have the patience to read on. The rhythm can be written better. The above are just my thoughts after reading it. Don't mind if you don't like it. I wish your future works will get better and better!
I haven't seen something so interesting in a long time~~~ Please work hard~~
It's such a shallow hole, meow~ I'll keep it first, and then I'll give you two points. Come on Xiuxiu~~dig deeper~~~ Hey, don't mind the nickname Shenma.
Na na na! Waiting! Update quickly! Scare? If the hero Changqing marries Zixuan, what will happen to Jingtian? ! Will he agree? Will it? Are you worried? Do we have to rely on the Su family to save the hero Changqing's Tian'er? ? ! Huh?
Not bad, come on, author, don't give up.
Hmm... Doesn't the author think the word "Me" sounds weird? Knowing her 'childhood sweetheart' too well, Fran no longer had the interest to complain. . (Qingmei refers to Qianxia, Zhuma refers to Folan. Shouldn't it be enough to write 'Qingmei who knows her too well'?) Ahem, just a few comments, don't mind~ Support is in progress...
In fact, I only came in when I saw Ramses. . .
It looks great, come on*^o^*
Haha, brother, I came to see you
快回家给我做饭吧老婆
Attacking is sometimes useful,,,, I thought there was nothing else I could do except eating. . . You still know how to show off at critical moments,,, a kid can be taught, ho ho ho ho
I'd better read the article patiently and let me share my thoughts after reading it. It's just my personal opinion, don't be angry. Personally, I think the writing style of this article is very good, and it is also gorgeous, but it is a bit too pursuit of gorgeous writing style. As a result, the whole article always looks bland, and it is difficult to arouse readers to feel excited, good or climax. So I guess most people will still feel guilty after reading a long paragraph, so others naturally don't want to read anymore. Moreover, because of the excessive pursuit of gorgeous writing style, the meaning of many places is difficult to understand, and it is often necessary to stop and understand. This is also the reason why others are not interested in reading further. The author can still arouse some curiosity among readers, such as whether Yuan Ge loves Liufeng or not, why Yuan Ge is immortal, and what story he and Qingcheng have, but the author doesn't explain much about these in the end, so it's considered unfinished. It is recommended that when writing articles in the future, make it as simple as possible. Don't make it too complicated, otherwise others will have to slowly understand the meaning, and it will make people impatient to read on, so it is actually a disadvantage. The article written by the author was mediocre until the end, with no feeling at all. It is recommended to change the style appropriately, as this will not attract readers. Nowadays, some of them write very easily, and readers find them interesting and funny, and the content of the article is also easy to understand, so readers will like it more. Some people find their writings humorous, while others find them sad. They all have their own feelings, but this article has always been light and not strong, which is one of the reasons why it is not attractive. Of course, the author does not have to write in that style, but it is best to try to be as simple as possible when writing in the future. This will make it easy for others to understand and will make people have the patience to read on. The rhythm can be written better. The above are just my thoughts after reading it. Don't mind if you don't like it. I wish your future works will get better and better!
Damn, I'm late, it's so beautiful!